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Post by Jonny Spade on May 28, 2009 19:52:11 GMT -5
Segment save for Adrian Flamingo
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Post by Jonny Spade on May 28, 2009 19:53:01 GMT -5
Match 6: Jake Steele and The Macho Man RDK vs. The Senator and Thunderkiss - Strange Bedfellows (Credit: Jake Steele)
Bell Rings.
The bell rings, and without a chance to speak with his partner, Jake Steele stands in the corner making himself the legal man. Hollywood looks as if he was trying to talk some strategy but Steele doesn’t want to talk, he just wants to fight either Steve Phillips, or Thunderkiss. The opposing team knows this as well, and despite his wishes, Thunderkiss does not enter the ring as the legal man. Instead, Steve Phillips is the one to go toe to toe. Or fist to fist, whatever you want to call it. Steele catches Phillips while his back is turned to Thunderkiss, ironically telling his teammate that he has this under control - maybe not. Steele drives a elbow into the back of Phillips, and he wraps his arms around the back of Phillips, going for a move usually not done by Steele, a german suplex. Phillips uses his smarts though and clutches the top ropes, stopping himself from being released into the air by an almost rapid Jake Steele. Phillips lets go one of rope and he elbows Steele in the side of his gut, enough times to break it. Phillips, knowing he has to really stay on this man, steps up to him and shoots his foot at the cranium of Jake Steele, but Steele ducks and the roundhouse kick attempt is for nothing. Steele runs off of the ropes, and he catches Phillips with quite the Tornado DDT, warranting the first pin attempt of the night.
ONE...
...TWO...
T-NO!
Jake Steele picks up Phillips and he starts using his knife like hands to chop away at the chest of the Senatorial Leader. Chop, after chop, after chop eventually leads them to one of the corners of the ring. Steele continues to chop away as if Phillips was a lumberjack and the champions hands are an axe. The axe he holds misfires though, as Phillips catches his hand and throws Steele into the corner, now hitting him with his own chops, and judging by the agitated look on the face of Steele, they have an certain lethal edge to them compared to his own. Phillips hits about three deadly chops, before he throws Steele across the ring into the opposite corner with authority. Taking advantage of the stunned state his opponent stands in at the moment, Phillips balls up his fist and begins to bob and weave with boxing strikes like he was Zab Juda. RAF begins to warn him to back off, but his shots are too relentless, wanting his own form of revenge on Jake Steele. RAF starts a five count, and Phillips continues to jab away until a four count, in which RAF slides in between Phillips and tells him to back the hell off, with all due respect. Phillips tells RAF to get out of his way, and seeing the stare in Phillips’ eyes, RAF does just that. Phillips grabs Steele by the head and pulls him out of the corner by his arm, which means trouble for the Brooklyn native. Phillips begins driving his shoulder into the shoulder of Steele, trying to make the bone break with each blow. In rapid succession, Phillips slams his shoulder into Steele’s own, causing him to drop to a knee. Phillips likes the sight of this, and now leaving Steele to pity the moment he backs up and tags in Thunderkiss, which causes the Kiss Army to erupt in the process.
Thunderkiss immediately takes the arm of Jake Steele, and he pulls him up, doing his own shoulder breaker, causing Steele to drop right back down to a knee. Kiss adds to the effect to by pointing to Mach and mockingly asks him if he wants to tag in. Macho trash talks Kiss from across the ring, and after a wrong word said, Thunderkiss warns him that he gave the wrong answer. Thunderkiss bounces off the ropes and launches his boot into Jake Steele’s face, dropping him to the mat out cold from what it looks. Kiss doesn’t pin his opponent though, tagging in Phillips instead to add to the torture.
Phillips steps in, and he drops to one knee, then another knee and he pins.
ONE…
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THRE-NO!
Phillips slightly expected that, knowing how tough Jake Steele truly is, despite ever willing to admit it. Phillips picks him up and he puts the neck of Steele under his arm, and he looks to Mach, who looks ready to tag in and get some work done for his team. Phillips doesn’t plan on that happening though, as he goes to drive Steele’s cranium into the mat with the Liberty Spike - that backfires. Showing just how much reserve he has, Steele powers out of the DDT and he begins elbowing Phillips in the face, then following that up with kicks to the bad legs of Phillips. After a swift kick to the right leg of Phillips, he drops the politician to a knee, and he runs off to the ropes with a Bakatare Sliding Kick! Steele ignores Mach calling for him to tag in, and he pins Phillips himself.
ONE…
…TWO…
TH-NO!
Steele climbs the turnbuckle, and he sits atop the buckle waiting for Phillips to stand to his feet. What Steele doesn’t see though while looking for Phillips is Mach, who runs up behind him and taps him on the back and tags himself in, distracting Jake Steele in the process. He tries to shift his attention back to Phillips, who is now once again on his own two, but it proves to not have worked. Steele leaps off and misses completely, crashing and burning to the canvas. Phillips catches him as he gets to his feet with a quick and swift Liberty Spike, and he pins.
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Phillips looks to RAF and sees him not even thinking about making the count. Phillips gets up to his feet and questions just what is he doing, then RAF tells him that Steele is no longer the legal man, and he points behind him, causing Phillips to close his eyes and take a very agitated breath. He turns around and Mach is behind him, who wastes no time to lay into Phillips with Overhand Punches, which gets somewhat of a pop from the crowd just due to the side he’s on tonight. Mach puts Phillips up against the ropes and he irish whips him across the ring, catching Phillips with a Samoan Drop! Mach follows that up as he gets himself riled up, and he catches Thunderkiss with a Back Body Drop as he comes out from the other side of the ring. Mach follows that up with a clothesline to Thunderkiss, which sends him over the top rope, and he feels the rush of the moment. He sees Phillips on the ropes, basically asking for Mach to do the same to him. Mach smiles to himself and begins running to Phillips, but that backfires as Phillips throws RAF in front of him and causes Mach to clothesline him instead!
Mach looks down and realizes what he just did, not caring much, but definitely wanting to hit Phillips instead. Phillips spins him around and he hits the Liberty Spike once again to tremendous boos in suit. Phillips though opts to pick Mach back up, as he hangs him over the rope, signaling the AIG Knee.
Phillips goes to the nearest corner, and he goes to launch off, but he sees someone running down the aisle… Chris Phenomenal? Phillips stops what he’s doing and watches as Phenomenal slides into the ring and stands across the ring from Phillips, obviously showing that he is out here for something, maybe a confrontation with him? Phenomenal, being the reckless kid that he is, throws caution to the wind and charges at Phillips with a Superman Punch, but Phillips dodges that too! Phenomenal does hit someone with that punch though… Hollywood Mach. Uh-oh. As Mach crumples up on the mat, Phillips throws CP over the top rope and he rolls Mach to the center of the ring. He then slaps RAF up to consciousness and makes him count the pin.
ONE…
…TWO…
THREE!
Phillip: And your winners… by pinfall, the team of Thunderkiss and Steve Phillips!
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Post by Jonny Spade on May 28, 2009 19:53:44 GMT -5
Segment: Fall from Grace (Credit: Thunderkiss, Senator)
Returning from the main event from a commercial break, Senator Steve Phillips is seen walking towards Chairman Gingerdude's office, a defiant look on his face. He nearly makes it there, when he gets a non verbal "no go" signal from Ginger's secretary, listening in as loud, unpleasant sounds emanate from the chairman's office. Without warning, a final screech is heard in the office, and the door opens rapidly, and slams shut just as quickly, as Gingerdude's daughter, Anna Sommers, better knows these days as Grindhouse exits. Grindhouse is seen wearing a black tanktop, a short black miniskirt, fishnet stockings and long black boots. Phillips greets her with an arrogant sniff, and almost walks past before Grindhouse responds in a shrill voice.
Grindhouse: If you came for a campaign contribution, you came to the wrong place honey. People like you are everything that's wrong with the world, you know!
The Senator: If you would excuse...
Grindhouse: You are definitely NOT excused! Your kind contributes every day to the death of the planet! Your policies kill millions of people for oil in the middle east and your lack of policies kill millions more in Darfour. You get fat while the rest of the world starves. And you call yourself a democrat...
Senator: Oh, of all the filthy hippie...
Grindhouse: Truth hurts, doesn’t it? Well if you don’t like it, it’s best you leave now. You may be able to silence your critics with unethical tactics but you won’t be able to shut me up.
Senator: Trust me, I would like nothing more.
Grindhouse: I’d bet. Anyway, what are you doing here anyway? Don’t you have a homosexual wedding to break up? I’m sure there is one taking place somewhere.
Senator: Madam, if you value the working order of that once-pretty little mouth of yours, you would close it, immediately!
Grindhouse: I will NOT be silenced! You think you're so big and mighty just because you're a rich white man, just because you're one of my stupid father's stupid pro-wrestlers, you think you can call me a whore? Do you realize who you are talking to? I’m YOUR boss and you WILL treat me with respect.
Senator: I may be confused here, but I do not recall ever calling you by such a term...not that it would be entirely ill-fitting.
Grindhouse(simultaniously):-I can't believe that you would dare say such a thing, I bet if my husband was around here, whom has made a career of putting his fist in that grimy little mouth of yours, you wouldn't even think of saying such a thing! Senator(simultaneously):----You are not only fitting of the term, but you could also be called a harpy, a harlot, a degenerate, a complete and total scum dwelling, trend following immoral wretch!
The two finish speaking for a moment, and their eyes meet for a moment, each reflecting a fiery glare. Grindhouse's leans forward to wag an accusing finger in the Senator's face, but as she does so, her loose fitting top nearly falls off, unwittingly revealing more than an slight view of her ample bosom to the ACW audience, and especially, her antagonist.
Senator: Ahem...if you need any evidence for the harlot label...you might want to consider the use of undergarments if you prefer not to reveal more than you intended in public...
Grindhouse: OOOH! Looks like someone wants to come out and party! Sorry sugar, it’s a one man show and you’re not on the guest list.
Grindhouse re-adjusts her top and lunges in to scratch the Senator's eyes out. Unfortunately for her, Phillips is in prime combat condition, and lackadaisically parries the wild attack into a hammerlock, roughly shoving Grindhouse into the wall.
Grindhouse: LET .... ME .... GO!!!
Senator: Nothing doing, not so long as I prefer to keep my eyesight.
Grindhouse: Is this anyway to treat a lady? You know the moral voters will be rather upset with you when they see this.
Senator: You, madam, forfeited that title when you started dressing like a cheap prostitute, as I have been saying. Once, I found you to be a superior counterpart to my longtime rival. You were hardly perfect then, but you certainly were not the ungrateful mess that I behold right now! Look at yourself! You once presented yourself as a member of high society. You once took great care of your personal appearance, but now look at this, you wash your head with shoe polish, apply it to your eyelids and your lips. You dress as if you...
Grindhouse: Let me go now, if you want your job.
Phillips, nearly to the breaking point wraps an arm around the face of Grindhouse, preventing her from speaking any further.
Senator: And to be quite frank, as soon as you raised your hand to my face, you lost any chance of being treated with any special privileges. Now get out of here, and never interfere in my matters again. Next time you are foolish enough to attack me, I will not hesitate to knock you cold, not for a moment.
Phillips lets Grindhouse go without turning his back on the dangerous woman, knowing better than to do so.
Grindhouse: Good. You keep going in that direction. If you know what’s best for you, you’ll get used to walking backwards. As soon as my husband's back from Europe that will be the only safe way to go.
Fade Out
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Post by Jonny Spade on May 28, 2009 19:54:43 GMT -5
D-Day Dan White, Dave Shadow We're coming to the end of the show now, and there still hasn't been an answer for Dan. All Gingerdude did was get defensive and ran away, getting his security guards to do his dirty work for him, only for that to completely fall on its arse. And Dan is getting increasingly impatient, as Meltdown is slowly coming to a close. He wants an answer, and everybody in the arena want to know what Dan wants. The only people that aren't complying are the increasingly-selfish duo of Gingerdude and Dave Shadow.
But, we may finally get some answers, when “Come With Me” by P Diddy hits, and a very irate pair in Gingerdude and Dave Shadow come out. They're not in the mood to be messed around with, and stand on the stage, looking at Dan, who in turn nods his head. But Dan is no longer bearing a grin, instead knowing that we're finally going to get down to some form of business. Dave's theme quickly fades out, as Gingerdude addresses the arena.Gingerdude: Well, I suppose I should be apologetic in some form to you Dan. Because I should have been a more intelligent man that to let you rot in front of all these fans in the crowd, and watching at home. They shouldn't have had the burden of watching you throughout this entire broadcast. So I do apologise to them. Despite the apology, the crowd still boo in their masses, causing Dave to step forward.Dave: Oh, would you all shut up? I wish someone would actually teach you something about manners and respect. Gingerdude has tried to provide you with entertainment for years, and this is how you thank him? By cheering a hooligan like Dan White? You disgust me.Well if the crowd are honest in any shape, it's in who they like or dislike. And they certainly dislike Dave Shadow, booing him in their masses.Dave: Dan. We agreed to come out here, because we need answers. We want to know what the hell you're doing out here, and what can be done to make sure that you never come back here ever again.The attention turns to Dan, but Dan looks at the duo, picking up his microphone and tapping onto it. It makes no sound, prompting Gingerdude to sigh.Gingerdude: For god's sake, somebody turn his microphone back on! The microphone clicks, and Dan responds.Dan White: Well, ever since the turn of the year I've apparently been this stain on ACW. I've been this person that has apparently been the reason to why you get a load of complaints and all that jazz. But you can both look at the facts! I've sold more merchandise than anyone here! And I don't even push my stuff like Thunderpiss does! I've helped boost the ratings tenfold in this company! And yet all I got was badmouthing and a derranged management getting it into their heads that I'm somehow a hinderence to the company. Well bollocks to that. You can hear a crowd when I come out. They care more about me than they ever would do about some fucking Chairman's Champion. A pop goes out for Dan, as Ginger and Dave scrunch their mouths.Dan White: There is absolutely nothing wrong with my duty of business. And is it not true that ever since I left the locker room, you've seen nothing but continuous arguments amongst your wrestlers, Gingerdude? Is it not true that arguments, fights, conflicts are all brimming up when the cameras aren't being shown? Huh, funny how that never happened when I was running things backstage. He then points to Dave, who prepares for a tongue lashing.Dan White: And you, ya Irish prick. You claimed that I'm the scum of ACW, and that you were going to save this place from me. Well take a look at this, eh? I'm still fucking here! You've never gotten rid of me, and so help me god, you never will. I can promise you that....unless you promise me something in return. Ah, now that piques the curiosity of the Zero Tolerance. Dave and Ginger look towards each other with their eyebrows raised, before turning back to Dan.Gingerdude: ...And what is this promise you want from us? Dan White: Well, I want a rematch with Dave Shadow. One more match, I guess you could say. I want a rematch for the debacle that happened at Spring Into Hell. A match that I should have won, yet only lost because you two conspired against me. So yes, I want a match, against Dave Shadow. Gingerdude: ...Well I'm not sure if we- Dan White: (Interrupting) Whoa there, Gingerdude. I'm not done. There is still the matter of the stipulations. What I want, is a match against Dave Shadow. One on one. No interferences.... The Zero Tolerance don't like the sound of that....Dan White: ...And tying in with the 5th Year Anniversary Show spectacular, we're gonna have a blast to the past, with a Steel Chair Symphony match!!! Huge pop from the crowd, as Dave retaliates.DaveYou must be joking. I'm sorry Dan, but you don't have a foot to stand on here, in terms of nego....But Gingerdude then butts inGingerdude: Wait, wait. So we give you Dave Shadow, no interferences, Steel Chair Symphony, and you leave forever? Dan White: Forever. Ginger looks at Dave, and they begin to discuss things off-microphone. Dan waits impatiently, whistling as he waits for their decision.Gingerdude: Well Dan, you have your match! There's a large pop from the crowd as Gingerdude allows the match, and Dave immediately stares at Dan. Dan smirks, however, pulling into his hair and taking out a key, to which he releases himself after two hours of being attached to the turnbuckle, much to the curiosity of both Ginger and Dave, who talk amongst each other.Dave: I thought it would be up his ass, to be honest.Gingerdude: Your guess is as good as mine... However he hid it, he's got his match. And what possibly looks like Dan White's swan song in ACW.
The Fifth Year Anniversary Show is next Monday. Don't miss it.
Fade Out.
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Post by The Senator on May 28, 2009 20:09:26 GMT -5
*Is not looking forward to calcing this show*
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Post by Dan White on May 28, 2009 20:23:23 GMT -5
I promise to do feedback tomorrow, but for now, thankyou greatly to everyone who complied with my request.
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Post by rep on May 28, 2009 22:25:19 GMT -5
Some thoughts
Jake Steele Is Jake Steele really a one man revolution if he has an entire stable backing him up? A run through his nicknames and my thoughts on them...
One Man Revolution: As pointed out before, you're not a one man revolution if you have a revolution on your side. One Man Dynasty: One man anything wouldn't make sense either, but this one is a cliche e-fed sounding name, I don't understand it either. The Truth: Why is your name the Truth? Why are you truer than Ron Killings? Why are you using his name? The King of ACW: Good name, don't come out dressed like a king, though. Just BE the king. No gimmicks necessary. The Real Deal: I came up with this one and I think it fits the most. Jake is the franchise player of ACW and this name sums that up AND rhymes with his actual name, perfect name.
The "Strange Bedfellows" Match This happens to be some strange booking, everyone in the match except Jake Steele hates Jake Steele... correct? Who are the heels and who are the faces? Were Jake and Mach just feuding Face vs Face? Did someone just turn? Can someone explain to me why this blurred line exists here? I don't get why I am supposed to care if I don't know who is who. I thought the "Stunning Revelation" segment was cheesy, all of the work you did hyping Jake as a bad ass in the first promo was ruined by his bad comedy.
Bryce vs Andrew Black The way that this match was written is very appalling. Breaking the match up in to segments doesn't do much good, I think it would be much better if everything were written like a regular match is written out. The format is just weird and doesn't have much use.
Entertainment Challenge I backed out of the entertainment challenge not only because I had a conflicting storyline, but I signed up at the advice of Jake before even reading the rules/regulations. When I finally did read them, I immediately knew that I was going to back out. These segments will be whacky and not necessarily about wrestling, which is what I'm here for. I don't think I'll be reading much of these, despite the star studded multi-man writing line ups, I'm not interested in an all-male Diva Search. You guys could be doing something way more productive than "wild and crazy" contests, because you are all good enough at writing to get it across.
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Post by xs3 on May 28, 2009 22:50:45 GMT -5
- 5th Anniversary Show is shaping up to be a great one, judging by the build-up for it. - Yes Kevin, I agree. Road Steelers are assholes. ^_^ - Bryce and Rena continue to crank out good segments together. - Dan vs. Dave should be one for the ages. - If I'm the Hitman, Senator must be the Hit-a-wo-man LOLOLOL >_> Great penultimate segment, though. In closing, great show!
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Post by Jake Steele on May 29, 2009 0:08:34 GMT -5
Some thoughts Jake SteeleIs Jake Steele really a one man revolution if he has an entire stable backing him up? A run through his nicknames and my thoughts on them... One Man Revolution: As pointed out before, you're not a one man revolution if you have a revolution on your side. One Man Dynasty: One man anything wouldn't make sense either, but this one is a cliche e-fed sounding name, I don't understand it either. The Truth: Why is your name the Truth? Why are you truer than Ron Killings? Why are you using his name? The King of ACW: Good name, don't come out dressed like a king, though. Just BE the king. No gimmicks necessary. The Real Deal: I came up with this one and I think it fits the most. Jake is the franchise player of ACW and this name sums that up AND rhymes with his actual name, perfect name. The "Strange Bedfellows" MatchThis happens to be some strange booking, everyone in the match except Jake Steele hates Jake Steele... correct? Who are the heels and who are the faces? Were Jake and Mach just feuding Face vs Face? Did someone just turn? Can someone explain to me why this blurred line exists here? I don't get why I am supposed to care if I don't know who is who. I thought the "Stunning Revelation" segment was cheesy, all of the work you did hyping Jake as a bad ass in the first promo was ruined by his bad comedy. Bryce vs Andrew BlackThe way that this match was written is very appalling. Breaking the match up in to segments doesn't do much good, I think it would be much better if everything were written like a regular match is written out. The format is just weird and doesn't have much use. Entertainment ChallengeI backed out of the entertainment challenge not only because I had a conflicting storyline, but I signed up at the advice of Jake before even reading the rules/regulations. When I finally did read them, I immediately knew that I was going to back out. These segments will be whacky and not necessarily about wrestling, which is what I'm here for. I don't think I'll be reading much of these, despite the star studded multi-man writing line ups, I'm not interested in an all-male Diva Search. You guys could be doing something way more productive than "wild and crazy" contests, because you are all good enough at writing to get it across. As far as the segment with Mach goes, there wasn't exactly much to work with there. I had an idea that I ran by CP (because I assume he's in control of that character for now), but he said it wouldn't work due to Mach refereeing the pie contest... yeah. And for the Bryce/Black match. That's the standard for ACW summaries, and has been for quite some time. It's easier, and usually people only write full matches on a TV show if it's the Main Event, or if the match has some major significance to it. btw, expect feedback later
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Post by Dan White on May 29, 2009 0:12:40 GMT -5
The Real Deal was TNT's nickname. Just sayin'
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Post by rep on May 29, 2009 0:16:50 GMT -5
And The Truth is Ron Killings' name. The King has been used various times by various different people. I don't know who TNT is and I'm sure it doesn't really matter that a name has been used once before.
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Post by Jake Steele on May 29, 2009 0:23:10 GMT -5
I got the idea of The Truth nickname from Flamingo, actually. He gave me the idea back in October when we were feuding and it's a name I liked, so I started using it around January/February. I didn't even realize Killings used the same shit until about mid-way through the gimmick. I still don't care, though. And The Real Deal is a name I actually used in about two segments, but I didn't use it to exhaustion. The King of ACW is a nickname I made based off of the feud where I "stole" Yoko's EOTR contract to get Jay Zero's IN Title, who was Emperor of the Ring at the time. I didn't want to call myself the Emperor, so I used King instead.
One Man Revolution is the one I used when I first joined, and one I had stopped using up until AK and XS3 both had it as my nickname in my Bloody Valentine/Fallen Heroes matches. And even if I have four other guys backing me up, the promo and the nickname now, basically are saying I'll be the one who finally stops Thunderkiss once and for all, essentially leading a revolution as I beat him, but with only me doing that, not any of the other Steelers.
I stole One Man Dynasty from Orton. >.>
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Post by rep on May 29, 2009 0:26:40 GMT -5
The Real Deal is still the best Jake Steele nickname ever made. THE REAL DEAL SEALER!
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Post by The Senator on May 29, 2009 7:08:09 GMT -5
The funny thing is that in the worst fed ever, there was a real wrestler who called himself "The Real Deal Damien Steele," and he was actually one of the decent parts of an awful package.
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Post by Thunderkiss on May 29, 2009 9:03:55 GMT -5
I'll be the one who finally stops Thunderkiss once and for all, essentially leading a revolution as I beat him, but with only me doing that, not any of the other Steelers. And I'm the Worldbreaker, meaning I break world chumps like toothpicks!
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