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Post by Dan White on May 5, 2009 20:55:45 GMT -5
So you did, Freeman. I must have refreshed the page at the very wrong time! I'm in the wrong. My most sincere apologies.
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Post by The Senator on May 5, 2009 21:12:46 GMT -5
Heh, I did the same thing.
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Post by Thunderkiss on May 5, 2009 23:09:44 GMT -5
So I don’t get Thunderkiss’s storyline at all, but he is THE best at making these kinds of out there, comic-book type stories. He writes segments (like the one where the fake Aiden attacked Winter) so well that it’s awesome. It’s like what Hunter used to be like with his movie-like backstories. Thunderkiss is the best at this kind of stuff, even if I don’t love that kind of out there material. Thunderkiss still does it better than anyone. Well, thanks for the positive feedback Freeman but I really don't get how my storyline "confuses" you. Also, once again I don't get why you label me as a "out there" writer as you always do. In the past three months my writing as been more wrestling based than ever. While I'd love to take full credit for what I am doing, the fact is that my storyline is not all that new to the wrestling world. There has been fake Sting, fake Undertaker, fake Kane, the DDP stalker angle, etc. I am doing my own spin on it, yes, but it's still something I have witnessed on a real wrestling program (with the exception of the slashing). Bottom line, when it comes to writing styles I can hit from both sides of the plate.
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Post by Kim Jong CP on May 5, 2009 23:18:57 GMT -5
sure it's just writing styles TK?
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Post by Dan White on May 5, 2009 23:46:39 GMT -5
Well TK, the whole reason why I started this whole feedback thing was so people could not only praise others, but criticise when they didn't think an angle was going right, or when people didn't understand an angle. I'll admit that your stuff often takes a second turn to read. That's not a bad thing at all, as Ridley's stuff took me a second turn to read. But my opinion is that whenever you do storylines that focus barely on a wrestling stance, you must understand why people may lose interest.
But for me, personally, I am gagging to know who Aiden is. Gagging. It's the best storyline going, IMO.
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Jason Freeman
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Post by Jason Freeman on May 6, 2009 14:30:02 GMT -5
Yes but as you said, once you added the slashing it kinda moved away from wrestling...XD
The part I didnt get was mostly the pic at fallen Heroes which seemed to be some kind of iron man with blades <_<...is he like...an evil robot? >_>
I dunno, where'd the blades come from? And what was with that pic? I just always assumed he looked like Aiden Joseph but now Im confused <_<
That's all
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Post by rosslambert on May 6, 2009 14:47:14 GMT -5
Yes but as you said, once you added the slashing it kinda moved away from wrestling...XD The part I didnt get was mostly the pic at fallen Heroes which seemed to be some kind of iron man with blades <_<...is he like...an evil robot? >_> I dunno, where'd the blades come from? And what was with that pic? I just always assumed he looked like Aiden Joseph but now Im confused <_< That's all en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vega_(Street_Fighter)Learn to read. Retard.
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Post by Dan White on May 6, 2009 18:05:15 GMT -5
Yes but as you said, once you added the slashing it kinda moved away from wrestling...XD The part I didnt get was mostly the pic at fallen Heroes which seemed to be some kind of iron man with blades <_<...is he like...an evil robot? >_> I dunno, where'd the blades come from? And what was with that pic? I just always assumed he looked like Aiden Joseph but now Im confused <_< That's all en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vega_(Street_Fighter)Learn to read. Retard. don't be mean
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Post by Rena on May 6, 2009 18:15:56 GMT -5
Yes but as you said, once you added the slashing it kinda moved away from wrestling...XD The part I didnt get was mostly the pic at fallen Heroes which seemed to be some kind of iron man with blades <_<...is he like...an evil robot? >_> I dunno, where'd the blades come from? And what was with that pic? I just always assumed he looked like Aiden Joseph but now Im confused <_< That's all en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vega_(Street_Fighter)Learn to read. Retard. wow, you really want to win the 2009 douche award, eh?
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Post by rep on May 6, 2009 18:25:42 GMT -5
This was the same guy criticizing ME!
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Post by Thunderkiss on May 6, 2009 18:50:45 GMT -5
Yes but as you said, once you added the slashing it kinda moved away from wrestling...XD The part I didnt get was mostly the pic at fallen Heroes which seemed to be some kind of iron man with blades <_<...is he like...an evil robot? >_> I dunno, where'd the blades come from? And what was with that pic? I just always assumed he looked like Aiden Joseph but now Im confused <_< That's all The pic base for Fakden is Vega, which was ALMOST my original Aiden Joseph pic way last year due to their narcissistic similarities. I've seen Austin point a gun at Pillman's head, I would not really say that my "slashing" constitutes a major deviation from an entertainment industry that has included electric chairs, people being run over by cars, an wrestler stealing his rival's family and robocop.
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Post by lee on May 6, 2009 19:02:39 GMT -5
Just FYI since it seems to have come up here: Lee does change his rhetoric very often, but it does serve a purpose. He often speaks with what I guess you could call "ebonics" for the majority of his present-day interactions with members of the ACW roster. This is to highlight that aspect of his character. But for flashbacks and other more "serious" types of stories, I tone that part of his character down so as to maintain a properly somber feel. I just feel like that kind of speech would get in the way of the story too much.
So yeah, now you know, and knowing is half the battle.
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Post by VorteX on May 6, 2009 19:02:28 GMT -5
Yeah the Aiden storyline is rather normal compared to some of Hunter's old stuff.
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Post by rep on May 6, 2009 19:07:42 GMT -5
Is this about what I've said to Steele in private or is there another conversation about ebonics that I'm missing here?
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Post by lee on May 6, 2009 19:09:59 GMT -5
Is this about what I've said to Steele in private or is there another conversation about ebonics that I'm missing here? I just noticed Steele and Freeman mentioning the fluctuation in Lee's way of speak in their feedbacks, so I figured it'd be enlightening to explain these things.
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