Monday Night Warfare 4th May 2009

[rep]

Is nobody gonna comment on the show for real? Are we just gonna keep saying "good show" until the end of time?

I like Davey's style. That's all that really stood out, aside from one very negative thing about Jake's promos that I'm sure I should refrain from saying because it will just cause an argument.

[Kim Jong CP]

I didn;t have the time last night, I'm hoping to get some up tonight but I got an essay to write as well.

[Jake Steele]

Yeah, I had some feedback written up too, but I went to sleep with like half of it done. When I checked my computer earlier, it wouldn't come off of standby...so...yeah.

[Kim Jong CP]

-Things are getting testy in the Steele-White relationship, Dan told me on MSN everything is falling into place and I can’t wait to see it.
-I miss funny Senny. Never the less a good showing from Sen, I don’t know what he has planned but things are going forward.
-I like how Mainer goes from one gimmick to the next every month and yet they all flow seamlessly and make for a very interesting story.
-Errbody’s gunnin for Jake, whether it’s for the tag straps, or the big belt. Not the best we’ve seen from either Jake or Dave, but a serviceable segment that advances their stories.
-O__O
-Freeman does a decent job, setting the stage for his future feud, as well as throwing me in their for a moment. I would have liked to have seen more about myself and the match, but never the less it worked out.
-I really like Davey’s character and his style seems familiar. I hope this character can last a while and doesn’t fizzle out in two months.
-Train has done a really good job with this entire Gingerdude angle. He also is able to switch from comedy to seriousness in the blink of an eye and it works really well. Whoever tries to take the title off this man is in for a rough go.
-It’s good to see Rena writing and adding another competitor to the midcard. I didn’t experience her first work, and while I didn’t think this was an “OMG WHAT A” segment. It does a very good job of advancing the feud. This seems to be a recurring theme throughout the night, nothing over the top that makes your jaw drop, but solid work building for SIH
-DUN DUN DUUUUNNNN. Mainer once again brings gun’s into play, I must say I laughed at this segment.
-OoOoOoO Latino!!! While not a lot of substance to this segment, Latino said what needed to be said, and with the frame of mind he conveyed I think a long winded piece would have looked bad. Kudos to Latino.
-It’s good to see Johnny back, I was interested in this storyline, and this segment renewed that interest.
-I’m glad I didn’t go with the Eddie ending in my match. Well done to Mainer keepin’ both men strong with this match.
-Nice work from Vortex here, interesting to see how he’s chosen to go about his re-debut.
-Shortest Lee segment EVA! Needless to say however I still enjoyed it.
-Errbody seems to be making some overlying story Arc heading into OEV. I love reading them as I think they show exactly how creative someone can be. I look forward to the next one Jonny
-Needless to say, Train watches way too bloody much TV. All in all though, this was my favorite segment to this point and I once again laughed out loud.
-Johnny jobs to HTML or whatever it’s called. Not a bad promo, I might suggest shying away from the two blues as it bothered me abit, but otherwise nothin’ I can really think of.
-Hurr comes da Thunder, Hurr comes da pain, hurr comes thirty hooker’s shoutin’ my name. Jake Steele beware, Kiss is comin’ for ya.
-Again, Senny again. It’s good to see him putting out work again as I love reading his stuff. (if only part of the calcs was having a color)
-Not Rep’s best work to this point, however once again it furthers the storyline.
-Impromptu match FTW.
-Train writes a solid match for a weekly show, .:thumbsup:.
-Fuck you Mainer, stealing Pokemon’s in my segment (oh and I beat the E4 last night J)
-This is more like a Lee segment, Ace work mate.
-See above for Jonny comments
-Interesting developments with Thunderkiss here. I wonder what happens to Double Deuce with Anna divorces TK
-I liked the looks of this segment, the colors worked well, as did the characters
-MACHO with another solid match for a weekly show
-Vortex with some more solid work.
-I donno who the new guy is (I never know anything, not even with the MSA >_>) but I look forward to this stuff.
-Dan vs. Dave has been building for months and now it’s taking off and I’m still interested. Kudos gentleman.
-Short but sweet promo by Mr. Black. I’d like to see more of him and see what he does here in the ACW. His guy has a lot of possible opponents here that will mesh well.
-Jesus Chris, you mother fuckers wrote a lot this week
-Seriously Latino, why Freeman, why not someone with talent >_>. Good work from you two, I’d like to see this really take off and not just be a one and done.
-Good work on the post match Steele, sorry bout the music mix up Dalton.
-OO TK, inurtesting.

END!

[Jason Freeman]

FREEMAN FEEDBACK! YEAH

First of all I hate four page shows. DARN YOU ACW FOR WRITING!
-Steele got lolowned. I was reading this going “Oh man! Are they gonna join forces and take on Zero Tolerance Cool!”…but then it was not to be. Ah well, at least now Steele will be able to concentrate on his own tag partner and maybe remind us all who the tag champs are ()
-YES! SENATOR IS ACTUALLY WRITING! God I love heel Senator. Of course, ACW needs more faces at the moment, not heels, but that’s okay because heel Senator is awesome. If you REALLY want to make him heel, Senator should start using contractions…XD. Also Senator usually tends to make short but sweet segments, so I liked seeing him give a bit of a monologue thing, and it was a good one. Senator’s gimmick is awesome and I really buy his character change. And I probably found him saying “Buzz off, twerp” way funnier than it was actually supposed to be <_<
-Is “No Leaf Clover” a Metallica reference? It’s kinda funny because when playing Guitar Hero Metallica me and a friend were kind of making fun of how bad and cheesy and hilarious a lot of Metallica’s song lyrics and titles were. And we got to No Leaf Clover, and I was like “Hey look at this one, No Leaf Clover…” then he was like “Oh god…” and we laughed for quite a while. Ah…but then it’s your nickname I guess…*cough* no offense….XD. That’s okay because Mega Star Alliance actually promos as a stable, unlike certain Road Steelers I know…not saying any names.
-I don’t love Bat Train, and now Harlem Superman doubled it….ugh….BUT….BUT…BUT…ITS NOT ALL BAD….the Train Station…XD. Genius.
-It reminded me of Christmas also. I would think of something to say here but all I can think of now is Santa. Thanks a lot Mainer.
-You know you’re a Dave Shadow mark when seeing his name on a segment credit fills you with joy! <_<.
-I honestly forgot all about this storyline <_<, but now that I remember it, I’m still curious as to who this could be, and anxiously await the reveal. But why does this guy only seem to lurk in bathrooms?
-HEY LOOK GUYS ITS ME
-ANDREW STARR! *marks out*. Anyways though, I don’t advocate drug use by any means, but Dickinson is still funny <_<
-OH WAIT NEVERMIND, I TAKE IT BACK! THEY DO DEFEND THEIR TITLES! Nice job beating the Capitalists guys, good win…>_>. Jkjk, Steele will kill me if I keep doing this.
-This Mega Star Alliance vs Road Steelers feud has way too many titles involved. Then again, that’s kinda cool at the same time.
-Lol at Ginger’s MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Laugh
-Did Rena’s past storyline ever finish? <_< I don’t remember…didn’t she try to kill Alex Trixier or something?
-I laughed way too hard at the lawyer’s line about this entire story arc being retarded. WAAY too hard. That was awesome. I kinda agree though
-Oh man, Latino’s looking for me. I wonder what’s going to happen! <_<
-Yes, Jonny Hughes! Hughes is awesome, and if he could only write consistently without stopping he’d be a major contender for the IN title…and hey, down the road, the world title as well.
-0_0. The balloons made me think of It. Which made me think of Jin.
-Lol at Lee referencing the fact that his character changes with each promo…at least I think that’s what he was doing <_<
-Now that Gooey is back in here, in the event that you maybe tag with him, I demand you three month rule the name “Wyldcard”. XD, nah I actually like that name, I don’t know why everybody doesn’t.
-Lol at Train once again, and <_< at Jason the Giant
-Once again, yay for Jonny Hughes existing
-The inevitable Entertainment Title match between Homicide and Phenomenal should be good, and close as well. Looking forward to it.
-So I don’t get Thunderkiss’s storyline at all, but he is THE best at making these kinds of out there, comic-book type stories. He writes segments (like the one where the fake Aiden attacked Winter) so well that it’s awesome. It’s like what Hunter used to be like with his movie-like backstories. Thunderkiss is the best at this kind of stuff, even if I don’t love that kind of out there material. Thunderkiss still does it better than anyone.
-Another Senator segment! Yes!
-Why does Stan remind me of a Phoenix Wright character?
-LEGALIZED MURDER! AWESOME! This reminds me of Jeff Hardy vs the Undertaker! Okay…not really…but this is awesome too! Seriously, Senator probably knows how awesome and hilarious I found this <_<
-First of all, I miss Mainer’s purple text. Second of all, what’s this FFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUU thing that I see like once a show and all the time in chat?
-I could have sworn Lee has written this exact segment before with less “Ju”s…am I mistaken? <_<
-Jonny Hughes’s dad is officially the only person to use the ACW website. He makes Jake Cheng so proud. (BTW it says BLOODY VALENTINE results above the FH stuff)
-Who was that person TK threw off the roof…Rayne or something? Either way…Ah…good times…XD
-I love seeing Shadow promoting with all these main eventers, because he’s going to be one soon enough. Everything he does is impressive. I miss him as a face because of ACW’s lack of faces, but at the same time he’s such a great heel I can’t really complain. Although he was a great unique face as well…
-Vortex’s name is Dimitrius. There was this place in Florida near my Grandparents house called Dimitri’s Pizza…it was really good. It was like the best pizza and I ALWAYS looked forward to it whenever I went to Florida, and I was so mad when it close down. That was all I could think of throughout this segment thanks to his name being Dimitrius <_<
-Who is this awesome mystery man?
-DAVE SHADOW! DAN WHITE! SHALL THEY FINISH THIS? FIND OUT THURSDAY On…MELTDOWN
-You know Black, that SENATOR does the calcs right? <_<
-This feud between Steele and RDK felt a little bit rushed to me, but that’s because there’s not many shows before the PPV. Either way, the match itself should be really good. Can’t wait for it.

So all in all Im not going to be one to just say “good show” every show. So pretty good show guys! XD. Feedback is WAY harder than it looks and I sucked at it, but whatever.

[The Senator]

Ok, since nobody else would do it, I took twice as long with calcs so I could put in my own detailed feedback, but don't expect this on a regular basis!

EDIT: lol, everyone posted when I did

-Great dialog between Dan and Steele, this is the sort of seg that Steele does best, and Dan’s still got it, for sure.
-Not a fan of vids in segments, or of the rainbow colors, but all the members of the MSA are very entertaining, and I really like XS3’s new nickname(cues Dire Straits)
-Bat Train meets Harlem Superstar = hilarity. All the Bat Train stuff is hilarious, really.
-Ginger seems to be losing it a tad…
-Dan and the Royles could roam around the countryside, sit at a pub, and walk around town for half a show, and it’s still be worth reading.
-As much as it pains me to type this, Freeman’s stuff right now is REALLY good. It just goes to prove that AK can make *anything* good by association.
-Heh, the drunk meets the pothead.
-I like segs that seamlessly follow after a match…or before one. It builds flow for the show.
-The current TK storyline = chickens coming home to roost
-Mainer Corleone should recruit the Goodfellas…
-I will always mark out like crazy for Latino appearances:)
-Hughes backstory should be good.
-lol, 702
-Vortex’s seg confused me, to be truthful. Very weird stuff(and I think it was meant that way)
-I keep thinking of Pablo Lopez in Lee’s segs
-Gooey appearances, NPCized or not, are always fun
-STAN VISHIS LIKES THE CAPS LOCK
-Ginger was in way over his head in that match.
-I got a big kick out of Charlotte being in the getaway van for Mainer
-I like how Shadow’s going around unsettling his future opponents
-I’m not a fan of vids in the middle of segs, but they drive me batty when inserted in matches. Enough already!(not a mod opinion, just my own personal one…)
-If you do anonymous stuff, PM me so I can give you credit for it
-I think I’m going to like Andrew Black, despite his horrendous choice for a poser
-Just a word of advice, always have Phillip Jones announce the end of a match, even if it delves right into pandemonium, like the main event did, speaking of which, nice match:)
-LAST MAN STANDING! PPV is already ordered.
-Fake Aiden = Megajerk. He also is low tier in SF IV

Whew! Over!

[Dan White]

My feedback will return after SiH, when I've finished exams and finished drinking my own weight in peeve

[VorteX]

I'm so busy at the moment I have to go with the standard good show. I'll try to start leaving more detailed feedback when things slow down around here. Also about my segments, I'm going to try to start a more detailed time line of events for my background as it only gets weirder from here.

[xs3]

May 5, 2009 19:31:02 GMT -5 Jason Freeman said:

-Is “No Leaf Clover” a Metallica reference? It’s kinda funny because when playing Guitar Hero Metallica me and a friend were kind of making fun of how bad and cheesy and hilarious a lot of Metallica’s song lyrics and titles were. And we got to No Leaf Clover, and I was like “Hey look at this one, No Leaf Clover…” then he was like “Oh god…” and we laughed for quite a while. Ah…but then it’s your nickname I guess…*cough* no offense….XD. That’s okay because Mega Star Alliance actually promos as a stable, unlike certain Road Steelers I know…not saying any names.

"No Leaf Clover" is a Metallica reference; the song is about how you think you've got something in the bag but another problem heads your way, hence the chorus. To use an example, Jake Steele thought he was going to kill me off or retire me at Fallen Heroes but he was confronted with another problem: my family and bandmates turning on him and beating the shit out of him. Plus, I think it's a great song, regardless of how bad they got during the Load, ReLoad and St. Anger eras.

*waits for anti-Metallica people on the board to disagree*

And as far as my feedback goes, I think everyone does a great job with their writing. It's just some moments that stick out for me more than others normally do so I acknowledge them. If people want honest feedback, all they need to do is read someone else's detailed feedback because I echo their sentiments.

[Jake Steele]

Damn, feedback is out in full force tonight. I guess this means it's time for some good old...

JAKE STEELE FEEDBACK!

- God heel Senator is awesome, I've always wanted to see longer solo segments from Sennie, and this along with the monologue included was very refreshing and felt new you could say. Quality rant at the end.
- I love big stable promos, and I know the Road Steelers haven't done one in quite some time, but this MSA promo really set the bar for the new generation of stables. Everyone set out their goals, and each one of them cut a promo that makes you want to believe they will achieve them. Just remember though, the Steelers always have a ace in the hole.
- Bat Train is awesome, really he is. Harlem Superman brought out a chuckle in me and I like I said before, Mainer and Train both are utilizing side characters to make a pretty damn entertaining feud.
- I think I know who the 'voice' who keeps messing with Dan. And all I have to say is, when you see it...
- This is the Freeman I want to see on a weekly basis. Cutting a good promo, hitting his targets and being that sly, systematic villian he's portraying himself as.
- So a drunk and a pothead walked into a bar...
- Train is doing an awesome job of building this feud up with him and Gingerdude. I'll admit that in a few circumstances I really thrive for a more serious Train, because he can really knock it home when serious, and this is proof of it.
- Interesting angle brewing in the Matheson/Joseph camp.
- Latino is looking for Freeman? OH SHI-
- I'm just going to say this for all of Hughes' segment on this show, it's always a joy to see you send in segments, because you have really interesting work. Your main flaw is consistency, and if you were to not be lazy I feel you would have been Upper-Mid and at least the International Champion by now.
- Mainer does a great job of putting people over when need be. He made Rawt look strong and the streak stays intact, genius.
- Simple trash talk promo between Freeman and Phenomenal.
- I'll agree on the notion that VorteX, while a good writer, really has me sort of lost with this segment.
- I always wondered why Lee switched speech patterns in different segments. You either black or you white, Michael Jackson!
- I so wish Kiss would have saved this idea with Fakden for our OE feud, it would have been awesome if he put a hit out on me and everyone in ACW was trying to take me out. Oh well. Fakden now has to face the consequences.
- Poor, poor, poor Gary...
- Stan Vishis for... no championships. Because he SUCKS, CHEA! Just kidding Stan. Not really.
- Legalized Murder FTMFW
- Mainer doing a run-in, then driving off in a getaway car is genius.
- Thunderkiss, YOU GOT SOME SPLANIN' TO DOOOOOOOOOOOO
- Mach and Shadow work pretty well together. Shadow is a cunning motherfucker too.
- Unknown = Rattlesnake, SULTAN OF SWERVES MY ASS!
- Dan and Shadow are doing a truly great job with this angle, it makes you want to read and see what's going to happen next, like a good feud should. Thursday should be explosive.
- I'm happy to see you took my advice on the font, Black. Your future is bright in ACW.
- Freeman is playing this evil character to a "T". I never thought he would be such a good heel, but he's impressing me more with each show that he promos. All I have a problem with is that he should have appeared on the titantron with the angry "Jerichoface".
- Fakden is a soulless human being, and the cliffhanger ending makes you want to read the next show even more. Will Thunderkiss save young Dillon? FIND OUT NEXT TIME, ON DRAGONBAL-WARFARE!

Seriously you guys, you guys seriously. Great show.

[Jason Freeman]

You know what guys?

I love this

This is the most feedback by FAR Ive ever seen in three years, and it makes me so happy

This is great. Thumbs up to everybody for this.

[xs3]

While I'm at it, I can't wait to see what Freeman's surprise against the Laureano's is and I told TK this already but his Aiden storyline is compelling. There are so many surprises going on in this fed, it's fucking unreal.

And that unknown guy better be someone like Ridley or Echo or else I'll be pissed.

[Jason Freeman]

May 5, 2009 20:42:43 GMT -5 @xs3 said:

And that unknown guy better be someone like Ridley or Echo or else I'll be pissed.

I personally want the epic return of The Libertines

AND YOU GUYS THOUGHT HE WAS DIED

[Dan White]

Well Freeman, contribute! I'm a hypocrite cos I've not given any in a couple of weeks due to commitments, but seriously, it doesn't take a long time to even skim a show and give feedback for every segment. Everyone benefits from it, and I really hope that I can give it ASAP. Like I said, after SiH when I'm not busy, you can ask questions to why I'm not giving it.

[Jason Freeman]

May 5, 2009 20:52:38 GMT -5 Dan White said:

Well Freeman, contribute! I'm a hypocrite cos I've not given any in a couple of weeks due to commitments, but seriously, it doesn't take a long time to even skim a show and give feedback for every segment. Everyone benefits from it, and I really hope that I can give it ASAP. Like I said, after SiH when I'm not busy, you can ask questions to why I'm not giving it.

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but...I...did...0_0