Seeking assistance....

[yourlegendkiller]

My character is 'Cowboy' Chris Cooley, my promo can be found at the following link....

alphacw.proboards34.com/index.cgi?board=Mondaymassacre&action=display&thread=9080&page=1#104999

I am asking of all you, the fine and not-so-fine people of ACW what you thought of the promo? How could ithe promo be improved? and What would be a good follow-up promo, to help build the character?

Thank You and and assistance would be greatful.

[Thunderkiss]

I'll have it read by the next day CCC. Look for feedback tomorrow.

[Scott Andrews]

Your character definitely came off as a badass rebel, which is cool. Just have promos where he completely disregards anyone else and does what he wants, in his own cowboy way. Oh, and he should drive a motorbike down to the ring

Yeah, I'm liking the character so far. I read your promo like a few hours ago so can't remember much else, but yeah, you're heading in a good direction I think.

[Dalton]

Name the motorcycle like you would name a horse <_<;

Just be like "Its only me and <motorcycles name> thats of any meaning to me, etc etc"

Just a thought from me...

[silencio]

A little short but I like how the Chris Cooley character came across. Keep it up