Post by Dan White on May 13, 2008 17:56:23 GMT -5
You asked for feedback, and I'll give it to you.
Your first segment seemed a tad generic with the "entering the fed through the backdoor" style entrance, but what I actually liked to see was the use of dialogue. You've already created an identity for Evans, which is further shown in your second segment. I'll be interested to know what Evans means by being "burned by the light". Keep up the good work.
Your first segment seemed a tad generic with the "entering the fed through the backdoor" style entrance, but what I actually liked to see was the use of dialogue. You've already created an identity for Evans, which is further shown in your second segment. I'll be interested to know what Evans means by being "burned by the light". Keep up the good work.
