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Post by xs3 on Dec 7, 2007 14:26:43 GMT -5
To XS3: Your first promo really seemed like...I dunno how to put it best, but it seemed to me as if you were writing from the perspective of an OOC dude who really hates TK. I don't mean like a shoot, I mean like something Stark would have said to TK on the boards. That's the easiest way I can put it. I think you should develop the character a bit more and kind of distance him from something that one would see in a normal day. I know that that sounds very strange, but I think you should experiment with it; change him up, make him different from you, and make him different from anyone else you know. When I was writing that segment, I had to make it up on the fly, basically. It's also kind of hard when basically, it's at the point where you've said all you can say with one character. Hence, the whole "retirement at WD" thing. I appreciate your criticism, though; someone had to give me some advice sooner or later. And stop with the KE and Saw references. ...no. >_>
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Post by hunter on Dec 7, 2007 17:26:59 GMT -5
I make up all of my segments on the fly. It's the way most segments tend to work, no?
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Post by xs3 on Dec 7, 2007 17:40:02 GMT -5
My statement still stands despite your pointing out something in it. >_>
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Post by hunter on Dec 7, 2007 18:04:59 GMT -5
Okay. I wasn't challenging anything. I'm...happy you're happy that I made you happy? >_>
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Post by xs3 on Dec 8, 2007 22:20:32 GMT -5
Yes, of course. >_>
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