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Post by shikari on Dec 6, 2007 17:18:16 GMT -5
Best match: The last one. Best segment: The Surprise Party (Credit: XS3, Jason Freeman & T-Kiss) Biggest twist: Freemans betrayal. What could of been better: The JJB match. Who did best overall: Freeman, lots of good segments, a good match and brilliant charecter dovelopment.
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Post by marshall on Dec 6, 2007 17:18:56 GMT -5
Good job, I liked how I wasn't turned into Val Venis, but our next show should flow very well into Winter's Discontent (Or whateva it's called, IDK >_>) And sorry for not sending in the other segment like I said, I really have no clue what I didn't
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Post by hunter on Dec 6, 2007 17:30:07 GMT -5
Just keep in mind that, although you wouldn't think it, I tend to put people over as much as humanly possibly whatever the situation. I'm happy you agree with me that you still looked very good.
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Post by xs3 on Dec 6, 2007 17:57:44 GMT -5
I'm sorry but XFD @ JJB's match. Hahahaha.
Nice show, everyone. Jon Taylor for champ!
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Post by jonnyomega on Dec 6, 2007 17:58:42 GMT -5
Solid show tonight.
Silencio's debut segment was a highlight for me personally. Great character building that gives the reader a good understanding of the adversity that Silencio has faced in his life.
I would also like to say that JJB's match was a disgrace, some of you may be thinking that may be a bit strong but this is another example of putting very little effort into writing a match. If you don't want to write a summary the same length as the standard AK set then don't take a match. Let someone else do it and send them instructions.
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Post by Jason Freeman on Dec 6, 2007 18:05:10 GMT -5
^Why would Libertines care...he won!
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Post by jonnyomega on Dec 6, 2007 18:08:35 GMT -5
Oh balls. Now I've made myself look like a fool.
Edited my post to removes chump argument.
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Post by Trainer libertines on Dec 6, 2007 18:23:39 GMT -5
Ok this is the first time typing with my new laptop, and I'm glad I finally won a match after two years.
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Post by marshall on Dec 6, 2007 18:27:35 GMT -5
You been losing for two years straight?
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Post by Trainer libertines on Dec 6, 2007 18:30:29 GMT -5
No, but my record I think since I started in gwf is like 0-15 or 18. Something along those lines. I lost I think 5 or 8 in GWF and 10 in ACW
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Post by marshall on Dec 6, 2007 18:31:25 GMT -5
Dayum, and I know a guy that quit a fed when he got his first lost after 11 straight wins
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Post by joshthejerseyboy on Dec 6, 2007 20:36:47 GMT -5
I'm going to be honest, I was so busy playing Firepro that I lost time, so the honorable thing to do was to let Libertines squash me.
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Post by Dalton on Dec 7, 2007 0:50:29 GMT -5
Yay for the awesome show.
...I hope I'm ok <_<
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Post by hunter on Dec 7, 2007 9:35:03 GMT -5
- To XS3: Your first promo really seemed like...I dunno how to put it best, but it seemed to me as if you were writing from the perspective of an OOC dude who really hates TK. I don't mean like a shoot, I mean like something Stark would have said to TK on the boards. That's the easiest way I can put it. I think you should develop the character a bit more and kind of distance him from something that one would see in a normal day. I know that that sounds very strange, but I think you should experiment with it; change him up, make him different from you, and make him different from anyone else you know. And stop with the KE and Saw references.
- To Zero: likewise with the above, I think you should change the character up a bit more. I mean, I love the cocky heel gimmick - that's basically the closest I come to having a gimmick myself. But here and there I'll change it up and make him serious or depressed or some random stuff like that. I like to change it up, and I think you should do that too. You don't have to do it now or anything, but sooner than later, try to play around with the character and do something different. I can't tell you what, obviously, but play around with it, you might find a trait that's even better for him than you would have thought.
- To Silencio: nice debut promo. If you can start using spell check and proper grammar/structure (I'm certain I'm the only one who will say that <_<), you can be on the top here in no time.
- To Shikari: more, please. You haven't really expanded on any of your characters, most of the promos seem to be "I kill you, lol - FIN." Expand on character histories and the like, otherwise there won't be much to hold any interest.
- Without a doubt, today's MVP is Flamingo. I love the addition of this uncle character, and Flamingo's basically doing what I told most of the above people to do: he's changing it up and keeping it fresh. I truly am curious as to what will happen next.
And lastly, for tonight's DEPP? As much as it pains me, I'm giving it to this: Thunderkiss: FREEMAN! FREEMAN HELP!Freeman: I’m Sorry Thunderkiss.... [At that moment it hits Thunderkiss. His weakened condition. The water bottle. There can only be ONE explination.] Freeman: ...I’m all out of help... I'm a whore for good/semi-badass lines like that, that feel they're coming out of a western. So nice job getting the inner Western mark in me going. d---(^_^)---b
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Post by The Senator on Dec 7, 2007 11:00:14 GMT -5
Well, with everyeone else jumping on the bandwagon, there's still room for the true original specific post show commentary....[glow=red,2,300]The Senator's Moment of the Show![/glow]
I approve of Mickey Flamingo:) He needs to meet Beau James at some point...
Also, Silencio's debut segment was marvelously done, and really makes me want to see where he goes from here, while Hughes, Starr, and Freeman all had a heck of a show.
Oh, and JJB...been there, done that:) FPR is worse than addictive.
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