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Post by Nick Durden on Feb 4, 2008 0:07:01 GMT -5
I'd just like to know what anyone thought of the El Froggy Mask/Felix Santana Jr. match I wrote for Fallout Reboot. It has been a while since I wrote one and would like to see how much rust I've accumulated.
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Post by The Senator on Feb 4, 2008 0:31:00 GMT -5
Loved the action, the counters, especially. It lived up to the past Felix/Froggy encounters, and that's a pretty high standard to meet, since I've heavily enjoyed each and every one of those. You used Froggy's old face moveset/style, and while at first I was wondering about that(my fault here, I told you to reference old matches, and rightly so), it ended up making for more storyline options and a much better match, than if Froggy just heeled it up to the max, I think.
Two bits of advice, though, for future matches. First, if possible, get used to using the commentators, they really do allow writers to do more with matches, and control the flow of things better. Two, and this one is easy: no italics in the match body! It just makes it a bit easier to read with standard text.
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