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Post by jontaylor on Jan 1, 2008 13:52:46 GMT -5
I'd like to hear everyone's criticisms of my writing style and segments and advice on how to improve. Im trying to work on varying my segments more as some people say my segments are all samey[looks at hunter  ]. I haven't really had a feud as of yet but will hopefully get into one soon..  . |
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Post by jonnyomega on Jan 1, 2008 15:57:35 GMT -5
Be less of a dick and people might like you....
But seriously I think you're doing okay, you didn't get to Upper Midcard for nothing and it's hard to write about interesting things on a consistent basis without a feud.
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Post by shikari on Jan 1, 2008 17:12:19 GMT -5
I think Rattle would be a good fued for you. On topic, I think all you need is backstory and your all set.
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Post by Thunderkiss on Jan 1, 2008 18:15:50 GMT -5
I think you are doing a fantastic job. Some advice I would offer is to get away from the typical "interview" promos. You know, the "Interviewer asks me a question, I respond with a paragraph" type. Doing a promo in the ring or backstage in front of Kevin or Charlotte is a last resort for me. Focus more on creating a story and putting your feud reflections into it. Sprinkle actual text with descriptors to set the mood and or setting.
Get good feud partners. Who are who you work with. Thats one of the harder things about ACW for newcomers is the realization that you have to create your own feuds. You have to communicate with others thus don't hesitate to PM people about working together.
Make sure you build a good reputation. Not "pitching in" on group promos or not PMing people back will spread across the roster making it a lot harder to find people to work with.
Finally, do whatever you can to give yourself character. Anything that makes you stand out against the rest of us is a good, good thing.
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Post by xs3 on Jan 1, 2008 18:37:11 GMT -5
Your segments and interviews have been pretty damn good for a newcomer to ACW, if you will.
Even if Hunter probably meant it as a joke, don't listen to what he says. >_> You're doing fine in ACW. Just get some nice feuds and you'll be set.
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Post by Thunderkiss on Jan 1, 2008 18:39:04 GMT -5
Even if Hunter probably meant it as a joke, don't listen to what he says. >_>. |
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Post by hunter on Jan 1, 2008 18:50:28 GMT -5
I did mean it as a joke. And I've already given him plenty of tips, all of which you guys have second'd. So I'm still right.
EDIT: BK's a dick.
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Post by Fallen Souls on Jan 1, 2008 19:12:32 GMT -5
>.> You got the IN Title without feuding...?
....With ANYONE?!
What the *censorship*?
....That's my way of saying your doing great so far ^^
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Post by jontaylor on Jan 2, 2008 6:51:09 GMT -5
Eh, thanks for the replies i'll take on board the advice for sure!
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]. I haven't really had a feud as of yet but will hopefully get into one soon..
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