Advice/Criticism

[jontaylor]

Erm yea..I want to hear your opinions on my segments so far..and what I can do to improve. At the moment im adjusting to the writing style of ACW, since in previous e-feds im used to writing one long 6k word RP...so it is different doing 3 or 4 short segments...but more interesting I think.

[jontaylor]

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[scrawn]

Well in your segments it's clear that you're an experienced writer. All I'd say is just keep it up, because you're doing fine so far.