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Post by Commissioner Zero on Sept 15, 2007 21:18:23 GMT -5
Lately, I feel like I've been saying the saaaaaame ole thing, oooover and ooover again.
I think I've been boring. Please, tell me how I've been doing. Please give me way to better myself writing wise. =/
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Post by starkweather on Sept 15, 2007 21:26:06 GMT -5
Be less generic?
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Post by BK London on Sept 15, 2007 21:45:35 GMT -5
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Post by BK London on Sept 15, 2007 21:46:01 GMT -5
But honestly, you're doing fine.
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Post by hunter on Sept 16, 2007 7:21:35 GMT -5
Sorry, just wanted to be part of the trend. >_> |
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Post by Jake on Sept 16, 2007 10:21:01 GMT -5
Dont write seven segments a show.
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Post by Commissioner Zero on Sept 16, 2007 10:40:51 GMT -5
I write 3-4.
Only reason I aid 7 was cause YOU kept telling me this shit to do and I was exaggerating.
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Post by Jake on Sept 16, 2007 11:21:06 GMT -5
I said there was a group of segments I had planned to do and ONE confrontation segment.
3 + 1 = 4
4≠7
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Post by Adrian Flamingo on Sept 16, 2007 13:23:28 GMT -5
I don't have any advice for ya, Zero, but I did find a more entourage-y photo of your poser...  |
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Post by jonnyomega on Sept 16, 2007 13:36:17 GMT -5
If oyu want my input I suggest that you find a unique hook for your character to have and introduce it into his personality.
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Post by Commissioner Zero on Sept 16, 2007 13:55:50 GMT -5
Haha thanks Flamingo, I've seen that before. Shiima has a bunch laying around his myspace and other places.
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Post by scrawn on Sept 21, 2007 8:41:52 GMT -5
Yuck. Corona tastes of sewage.
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Post by xs3 on Sept 30, 2007 20:31:38 GMT -5
Yuck. Corona tastes of sewage. Same goes for your mother.  |
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Post by Commissioner Zero on Sept 30, 2007 20:43:07 GMT -5
 So.......since Hitman bumped this, how am I doing? I'm trying to introduce the new gimmick, but I don't think people have been reading it. >_> |
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Post by xs3 on Sept 30, 2007 20:45:25 GMT -5
Well, like I said on MSN, Zero, if it makes you happy, go forth with it.
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