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Post by dariussilver on May 30, 2005 4:39:40 GMT -5
Could someone give their thoughts on my SiH Segments? I put alot of work into them, So I want to see if people like them.
For those who don't know, The first one is called "Anxiety" and the second one is called "Mask".
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Post by scrawn on May 30, 2005 10:05:11 GMT -5
I've not properly had the chance to read the second one, but your first promo was very good. Well written, and really reflected your character well. Good job with that one
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Post by BK London on May 30, 2005 10:26:13 GMT -5
I read them both and I have to say they were very realistic, you write in a way that I can actually see what is going on moment for momen and understand it. I don't think the first one depicted your character well because your character isn't someone who should feel anxiety I think (I hope I'm write). But the second one really showed more of your character as you were being more true to yourself by being somewhat arrogant.
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Post by hunter on May 30, 2005 15:27:44 GMT -5
..BK, you've been righting too much... ;D |
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Post by Wyvern on Jun 4, 2005 0:12:30 GMT -5
"...one...too...three...for....five...."
Sorry BK, I couldn't resist the urge.
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