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Post by tntoholic on Apr 1, 2005 17:19:08 GMT -5
Well, since I'm definetly not perfect, (or am I?) Anyone is welcome to give me advice and crit.
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Post by hunter on Apr 1, 2005 17:35:09 GMT -5
Well, let's see...
1. The character is good and your promos are great. I'm sort of pulling a Senator by actually saying that the crapload of swearing gets annoying.
2. Well...it sounds kind of mean...but you should...uh...tweak your gimmick. Because the whol "I'm better than you" thing gets annoying after a while. Remember, this is merely friendly advice.
3. You could answer your PMs quicker... ;D
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Post by tntoholic on Apr 1, 2005 18:15:21 GMT -5
Yeah I do Swear Alot.....its a habit. Kinda sucks, I guess. I'll try to work on that. About tweaking my gimmick, it wasn't mean, but I can really care less. lol
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Post by The Senator on Apr 1, 2005 18:18:44 GMT -5
Personally, I like TNT's cocky personality, it does not need to change, although Hunter was right with the swearing, see Hunter's thread for more on that.
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Post by Shawn on Apr 1, 2005 18:27:54 GMT -5
If swearing is your character, then keep it
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Post by BK London on Apr 1, 2005 19:12:01 GMT -5
I like TNT's swearing, it has toned down from his earlier promos with Kevin Anderson where he cursed every three words. And I like the whole "I'm better than you" because, well...he is.
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Post by tntoholic on May 22, 2005 12:37:36 GMT -5
I'm sure I'm not perfect, so any more criticism from anyone?
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Post by Wyvern on May 22, 2005 18:26:39 GMT -5
Perhaps something that will get your character OUT there once again. The Corporate Alliance worked well, but due to some slight inactivity(?), BK and Ging seemed to overshadow you. A notable feud, like what you're trying to accomplish with Hunter could very well do the trick.
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Post by tntoholic on May 24, 2005 11:52:21 GMT -5
Perhaps something that will get your character OUT there once again. The Corporate Alliance worked well, but due to some slight inactivity(?), BK and Ging seemed to overshadow you. A notable feud, like what you're trying to accomplish with Hunter could very well do the trick. Yes, MY inactivity has pushed me down alot. Since Summer Vacation is almost here, I have more time. Thanks for the Advice. |
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Post by scrawn on May 24, 2005 14:06:44 GMT -5
TBH, what Wyvern said is the only fault with you at the minute
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