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Post by Latino on Mar 30, 2005 15:40:55 GMT -5
Same as everyone but I'd really some actual criticism. I mean it's nice to hear "your character is great" but still a person can only get better by hearing the bad as well.
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Post by The Senator on Mar 30, 2005 15:44:50 GMT -5
The bad.....well your grammar sometimes slips a bit, but that is all I can think of at the moment.
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Post by Davey Marvel on Mar 30, 2005 15:48:15 GMT -5
Honestly grammer I feel is highly over rated. If this was a college writing course then I would say we could put the grammer hammer down. Those of you who pride yourselves on great grammer keep it up. Otherwise Oh well...
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Post by vinniedulario on Mar 30, 2005 15:59:42 GMT -5
Grammar isn't a *huge* deal with me. Little things, like using "there" instead of "their" or "they're" bug me, but I get over it. As long as I can understand what you're trying to say, I'm cool with it.
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Post by BK London on Mar 30, 2005 17:07:10 GMT -5
You shouldn't really blend your english and spanish together.
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Post by Latino on Mar 30, 2005 17:32:12 GMT -5
What's wrong with blending it together it's part of Latino's character speaking in splanglish. I mean I don't do it or try not to for large parts of my segments. Usually for little stuff like affectionate names and words like "but, for, me, etc."
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Post by BK London on Mar 30, 2005 17:44:11 GMT -5
It confuses me. Besides Chula.
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Post by Latino on Mar 30, 2005 17:47:13 GMT -5
Well I'll lessen it to an extent.
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Post by ridley on Mar 30, 2005 18:14:59 GMT -5
Uh, yeah, that's the thing. Real Hispanic people don't randomly switch languages in the middle of a sentence.
"Orale, guys! Fue about to vengar to you dos and ganar the seis-hombre tag match! But el Sr. Ridley me matớ con un weedwhacker!"
It doesn't happen. Certain words (i.e. "chula," "vato", "margarita", etc.) can be CONSTANTLY switched, but it makes no sense to translate your helping verbs and conjunctions.
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Post by The Senator on Mar 30, 2005 19:55:35 GMT -5
And although I did not say it due to your request, I must say that the Latino One is an awesome character who adds to every show he is in.
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Post by Latino on Apr 2, 2005 12:11:07 GMT -5
anything else besides my use of Spanglish in my promos?
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Post by BK London on Apr 2, 2005 12:16:03 GMT -5
Focus the center of yoru feuds on something else. I think AK can handle herself. Time to look for the big one.
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Post by Latino on May 21, 2005 13:33:00 GMT -5
It's been a while since I asked for criticism. Anything new to say?
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