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Post by BK London on Jul 2, 2005 11:16:09 GMT -5
Please?
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Post by Davey Marvel on Jul 16, 2005 12:20:04 GMT -5
Thoughts?
Meltdown blazes into life with a shot of the packed arena and a forest of signs; the fans are in fine voice and strive to make themselves seen and heard on the opening seconds of the show. Almost at once, however, an unfamiliar song starts to play loudly over the speaker system:
Revenge!!!!!!!!! I'm screaming revenge again Wrong I've been wrong for far too long Been constantly so frustrated I've moved mountains with less When I channel my hate to productive I don't find it hard to impress!
The fans are a bit confused and are unsure who this could be. They gaze excitedly at the entrance in anticipation of something, anything.
Bones in traction Hands break to hone raw energy Bold and disastrous My ears can't hear what you say to me
Restlessness draws over the crowd as they begin to wonder if this was some sort of tech mess-up.
Hold your mouth for the war Use it for what it's for Speak the truth about me Determined
Possessed I feel a conquering will down inside me Strength The strength of many to crush Who might stop me My strength is in number And my soul lies in every one The releasing of anger can better any medicine under the sun
Bones in traction Hands break to hone raw energy Bold and disastrous My ears can't hear what you say to me
Just then a two word Phrase jumps onto the TitanTron:
It's Time!
Merely moments after that mantra the Marvelous one himself moves from behind the curtain. The fans are taken back by the "Marvelous" entrance. They hoot and hollar Davey who looks behind him and motions for someone to come out. Revenant is not too far behind him. He is transporting Davey's precious within his mits. As he arrives at Davey's championship feet he hands the title off to him. Davey receives the hand off from his friend, manager and all around right hand man.
Hold your mouth for the war Use it for what it's for Speak the truth about me Determined
With each step Davey makes to the ring the more we are realizing that this is not the same Davey the audience seen just a few days ago on Warfare.
There comes a time within everyone to close your eyes to what's real No comprehension to fail I vacuum the wind for my sail Can't be the rest Let others waste my time Owning success is the bottom line. Like a knife into flesh After life is to death Pulling and punching the rest of duration NO ONE can piss on this determination.
Davey circles the ring greeting and meeting with the "Marvelous Ones". Davey's "circle of friends" is over signified with his presence in the ring and his fist clenched around the microphone.
Davey: It's time that some of you morons with your Davey Marvel problems realize something. It is not my fault God had to make me better than all of you. It is not your fault that you just can't reach that next plateau. If you don't agree with me then I say that you quit with the complaining about me and my marvelous reign. Last time I checked the Entertainment title was not awarded to me it was earned! Plain and simple. So if you want to prove that I am in fact an "unworthy" champion how bout' you get your asses out here and prove to me something!
Davey lets the crowd get out their opinion on the matter which is in fact the very same as Davey's.
Davey: The last time I checked not one of you bitches has proven any of your cases to anyone. You’re a bunch of walkin talkin ain't proved nothin since you've been bitchin pussies! Until you prove me otherwise that is what Davey Marvel, Revenant and the rest of the Marvelous Ones will refer to you as.
The fans laugh and cheer as Davey repositions himself seated a top the turnbuckle. Rev's reserve lets up as he lets out a little smirk.
Davey: So the following people for now on will be known as "walkin talkin ain't proved nothin since you've been bitchin pussies"! Rev please?
Rev tosses Davey a rolled up piece of paper. He unrolls and examines it.
Davey: The listsreads as such:
#5.Sakina Khalida- I have nothing against this talented superstar personally but I do have a problem with her associate that comes in at #2.
#4. Tracy Finn- Okay I don't hate him and we don't need to refer to him as a "walkin talkin ain't proved nothin since you've been bitchin pussy". But I do however hope this gives him a hint to quit asking me for money. It also wouldn't hurt for him to take a shower after his matches.
#3. Predator- The guy walks around claiming to be the greatest Entertainment Champion the ACW has ever seen. Oh yeah? I gotta personalized belt here that says different.
#2. Shawn Kiev- You my friend are a reason why wolves eat their young.
That brings me to #1. I am quite sure you won't need to guess to many time before you figure it out. Jake Cheng you are scum. The New Breed is a land of Kings but you were always the jester. Everything you do and stand for is scum and undeserving of what Wyveran I gave to you. I have come to realize that you have always been scum it is not just cause that stunt you pulled at OE. You were scum the moment you popped out of satin's vagina. Now I know what you are all thinking. "I didn't know that Shawn Kiev is Jake's mom.
The fans giggle and chuckle in response to what they have just heard.
Davey: Monday Jake it will be me and you one on one for the entertainment title. After Monday you will stop acting like a little bitch and you will respect the champ. Til then I have a match, Michigan Madman out!
Davey seems intent on leaving the ring to his music however "Metallingus" by Alter Bridge hits the arena and Predator comes jogging out holding a mic and raises his hand while coming to a hault at the top of the ramp...
Predator: WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOA! STOP! STOP RIGHT THERE!
Predator points at Marvel and Revenant as they look at each other in a disgusted look. The crowd are angry with this and boo the hell out of Predator.
Predator: Quiet Pred-Heads, this is important business, I'll sign autographs later!
The crowd refuses to obey however and begins to look for things they can chuck at Predator while causing a ruckus.
Predator: Davey Marvel, Who the hell do you think you are? Strutting around with THAT title when it is clear that you are not deserving of it! Didn't you hear my lecture on Warfare? I think that speaks for itself! And you say "OH MY GOD PUT YOUR MONEY WHERE YOUR MOUTH IS". Well GUESS WHAT? I am! You think you can just IGNORE my title shot this fallout? I am disgusted that you would remember JAKE CHENG over me!
A fan begins to tap Predator on the shoulder, for at this time, Predator has made it down the middle of the ramp and is leaning on the crash barrier. Predator turns around and the fans whispers in his ear, Predator's eyes widen...
Predator: ...So what if the Chinese Phenom beat me? You think I was going to waste my precious time AND energy on HIM?? You gotta think kid, show some respect!
Predator finishes his statement by slapping the young man, who reels and falls over. Predator smirks and continues to make his way down the ramp.
Predator: I am ACW's future, I am the protege of BK London who is the icon, the legend, the main eventah, the showstoppah, he’s that damn good! And who did he choose as a protege? ME! Damn rights! Go home Marvel, leave you "Custom" title here, Ill change it to how it was supposed to be, I promise. And as for you chunky Albert, yeah you, with the beard. Stop wasting your time, this kid has no potential, hes just another shit in the dog yard! I should know, I gave this kid quite the beating back in December, hell, I-
Davey Marvel: Well Predator I am flattered that you look at me as a threat, but damn man to you Gary is a threat.
Davey receives a burst of laughter from the sea of people in attendance tonight.
Davey Marvel: and as for you calling these people "Pred Heads" you better think about that again Sally cause last time I checked they were Marvelous Ones and they were chanting my name not yours.
MARVEL chants reign down on Predator like a slap from God.
Davey Marvel: As far as you being the ACW's future, I just have to say that’s one pretty weak future if you are the future.
Predator is taken back by the harsh comments.
Davey Marvel: Now I didn't want to make this rip on Predator day but you make it way too easy man. I will however give you one compliment and that is you got guts. You are one of the only people here to call me out and actually attempt to do something about it. So Saturday it is Predator vs Marvel for the Entertainment strap make sure you tune in cause you won’t wanna miss what I do to Sally over here.
Predator: Quit calling me Sally!
Davey Marvel: What? Would you prefer Susan or perhaps Heather?
Predator: Alright that’s enough!
Predator makes his way to the ring in a fit of rage, He climbs up the stairs and right in Davey's face. The two square off face to face for a moment until Predator slaps the taste out of Davey's mouth. Predator makes an about face and begins to exit the ring. He is to late as Davey has grabbed him and is now taking him down with a "Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon". Davey gets up as fast Predator went down. He stares at Predators moaning and groaning body with a mic in hand.
Davey Marvel: I noticed you must have forgot who I was when just there. So let me remind you. I am Davey Marvel and there is NO DESTROYING ME!!!!!!
He tosses the mic at Predator and exits the ring. Davey is far too angry to greet his fans and he bolts straight to the back without hesitation.
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Post by Davey Marvel on Jul 21, 2005 21:13:25 GMT -5
Segment: A hard loss to bear (Credit: Davey Marvel)
Total blackness fills the screen; you hear nothing but the breathing pattern of an unidentified man. It continues on like this for some time until eventually you are drilled to the back of your seat with the voice of a Madman. The darkness is a curious one; you are unable to clarify if it is a dark room or a hollow moonless night. A cry comes out of the nothingness...
Madman: REVEEEEEEEEEEEEEENGE!
The moment you are done recovering from the shock of that sudden scream you are met with, the voice starts to talk.
Madman: How does my title feel Jakie boy? Does it feel nice? Anything would be nice after spending that much time with me. Too bad I can't say the same for you Jakie boy. You have stolen two things very near and dear to me; my title, my dignity and slowly you are running away with my sanity.
The madman lights a zippo, lighting up the night and revealing it to be Davey Marvel. He is standing outside in a random field in a random part of the country. He has his hood draping his face revealing only his lower mandible. He is alone and seems like a Davey unlike that we have seen to date.
Davey: This field and I have something in common. This field is now bare, it used to run rampant with crops; it was something of a symbol in many ways. You could say a symbol of pride, love, passion and hard work. Then the day came when someone saw fit to put an end to all that and rape this field of what it had housed. That’s what you did to me Jake. You raped me pf my pride my title and like I said soon to be my sanity. The way I see things Jake you have two choices, you can either live like a refugee the rest of your life or you can be a man and accept my challenge to you at 7 Deadly Sins. Which ever you choose Jake is fine with me, but I should warn you. I will find you and what happens next I assure you, is not something you want to experience.
Davey who is still holding the zippo begins to walk while the camera follows. The sounds of crunching dead grass, twigs and shuffling rocks flood the back ground. With all the darkness in the cool night air it is hard to see Davey as he is walking. Flashes of Davey's clothes and the occasional spark of a fire fly as it whizzes by. Davey continues to both walk and address his issues.
Davey: Tonight you felt the need to taunt me with my own title. I am sure you thought that would get me going. You might be careful of what you wish for because you might just get it.
Davey arrives at the road where he has his corvette waiting for him. Once he gets to the road, he removes the hood and leans up on the red Chevy Corvette that is being lit up by an overhanging street light. Davey looking like a fit of rage personified crosses his arms and with fire in his eyes glares back at the camera that has stopped just paces in front of Davey.
Davey: Now I must go. Jake you know the right thing to do. Don't make me do something desperate.
Davey removes himself from the side of the car unlocks it and gets in. He starts it up with a thunderous roar (must be an eight cylinder). He revs the engine and throws it into gear leaving a nice patch of rubber wear his tires spun. The camera fades out as you see the car speeding away and getting smaller and smaller.
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Post by Davey Marvel on Jul 21, 2005 21:13:49 GMT -5
Please tell me what you think of the last two. Please!
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Post by Davey Marvel on Jul 30, 2005 1:04:37 GMT -5
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Post by Davey Marvel on Jul 31, 2005 2:20:02 GMT -5
I am going to take this as my role play are perfect and they need no work.
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Post by Davey Marvel on Aug 13, 2005 17:32:51 GMT -5
WHAT MUST I DO TO GET FEED BACK?
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Post by Latino on Aug 13, 2005 17:44:59 GMT -5
Ok I took the plunge and I liked it. I do like how you used the song and then your interaction with pred was nice. Ummm i really can't think of what else to say. I've been through extreme boredom at work lol. So my mind is less than awake right now.
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Post by Davey Marvel on Aug 13, 2005 17:46:58 GMT -5
Thank you Latino!
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