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Post by Davey Marvel on Mar 30, 2005 14:25:43 GMT -5
Lay it on me...It would be greatly appreciated!!
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Post by Davey Marvel on Mar 30, 2005 17:18:55 GMT -5
I will take the lack of criticism to mean that I am perfect in every way...  |
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Post by hunter on Mar 30, 2005 17:30:25 GMT -5
Just for that, I'll do the honors:
-Your promos aren't too interesting (no offense). You have to find an interesting subject and use it. We all remember the promo where you, Oliver, and Wyvern pretended to be Italian...*shudder*
-The gimmick needs work. I, personally, liked the new "evil" Davey, but since you lost the sword and gauntlets, it's obvious "evil" Davey is gone. This means we're back to ordinary Davey, which upsets me, as the gimmick is...stale.
-Your moveset is good.
Um...that's all.
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Post by Shawn on Mar 30, 2005 17:30:50 GMT -5
You career would be much farther along had you remained far, far from BS.
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Post by Davey Marvel on Mar 30, 2005 17:58:20 GMT -5
LOL, for now on. No one is to ever mention the "Italian Incident" never eEEEEEEver agAIIIIIIIIN....
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Post by BK London on Apr 2, 2005 12:07:07 GMT -5
You career would be much farther along had you remained far, far from BS. I have nothing against BS but I agree with this. He has converted your character so much that you need to slowly u-turn it in the other direction whether it be heel or face. An abrupt change from your previous gimmick wouldn't be good. |
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Post by The Senator on Apr 4, 2005 13:23:45 GMT -5
Keep a bit of the vicious streak, though. It really helped you out recently.
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Post by Davey Marvel on Apr 4, 2005 14:14:06 GMT -5
Do you mean IRL or in Davey....
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Post by keenan on Apr 4, 2005 14:17:10 GMT -5
Shhh, Go To Sleep.  |
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Post by Davey Marvel on Apr 4, 2005 14:33:45 GMT -5
Go to sleep, I guess I got burned...
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Post by The Senator on Apr 4, 2005 19:16:50 GMT -5
Yes, I was talking about your character.
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Post by Davey Marvel on Apr 4, 2005 22:17:56 GMT -5
Maybe after a while but not now....
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Post by Davey Marvel on Apr 13, 2005 23:44:07 GMT -5
I would appreciate some more critisicm. Tell me what I should fix or leave alone about Davey, my promos: my dialogue or how to be more entertaining. What do people feel of the addition of Revenant as Davey's manager? Feel free to let me know.
Thank You...
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Post by Davey Marvel on Apr 19, 2005 16:03:16 GMT -5
all I here is the sounds of crickets chirping off in the distance....
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Post by kain on Apr 20, 2005 19:13:55 GMT -5
I would but i'm not one to criticize anyone >_>
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