Post by VorteX on Aug 24, 2009 21:59:38 GMT -5
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Old Grudges Never Die
Hilarious segment, I love the whole premise of 'suprise by absurdity'.
Making a Stand
This promo made the feud seem very 'scheduled'. As if there was some invisible checklist to do before beating the hell out of one another. The animosity between the pair was believable though, so I liked it overall.
Laying Down The Challenge
First of all, I dislike this new font choice greatly, it burns my eyes so I usually skim the promo. I read though this one though and it does a nice job of explaining the match, although I found it amusing that Snake agreed to let Chris put him through glass over and over again until he couldn't stand. Other than that minor nitpick, good stuff.
Unacceptable
"Bitch, move!" defined this one for me...in fact the whole promo lived up greatly to it's title, very unacceptable but very fitting behavior for Jefferson.
Vowing Revenge
A nice solemn segment here. The only part I didn't really feel was the whole throwing the chair through the hospital window thing...I get the emotion behind it however the nonchalant reaction to it didn't really fit in. Anyway, overall I enjoyed the writing on this one a lot.
The Fourth Wall
Almost missed this one, glad I didn't. More great Train humor as usual, although it spiraled into a bit of 'too much random' at the end. Thankfully, it was a short burst of 'too much random' and it worked out pretty well.
Yoko/Sarin in general
I love the pacing of these promos..they are both extremely sarcastic/witty and fast paced at the same time. Good stuff.
Freeman in general
I hate to say this, but I didn't read a single thing of yours fully tonight. The massive walls of text are offputting, and if you do read through them the whole "in/out of character" bit annoyed me greatly. Calc spamming with no substance is really bad in my opinion (not that calc spamming is ever great...but this was just way over the top).
Dan White in general
Would have liked to seen more work from you tonight. What was there was good, however more buildup going into Saturday would have been even better (it is a World Title match afterall).
Oh, and the main event is probably the shortest 10-man tag in history. The whole 'wargames' feel seemed kind of last minute and random, and a 10-man tag is just overwhelming to begin with.
Old Grudges Never Die
Hilarious segment, I love the whole premise of 'suprise by absurdity'.
Making a Stand
This promo made the feud seem very 'scheduled'. As if there was some invisible checklist to do before beating the hell out of one another. The animosity between the pair was believable though, so I liked it overall.
Laying Down The Challenge
First of all, I dislike this new font choice greatly, it burns my eyes so I usually skim the promo. I read though this one though and it does a nice job of explaining the match, although I found it amusing that Snake agreed to let Chris put him through glass over and over again until he couldn't stand. Other than that minor nitpick, good stuff.
Unacceptable
"Bitch, move!" defined this one for me...in fact the whole promo lived up greatly to it's title, very unacceptable but very fitting behavior for Jefferson.
Vowing Revenge
A nice solemn segment here. The only part I didn't really feel was the whole throwing the chair through the hospital window thing...I get the emotion behind it however the nonchalant reaction to it didn't really fit in. Anyway, overall I enjoyed the writing on this one a lot.
The Fourth Wall
Almost missed this one, glad I didn't. More great Train humor as usual, although it spiraled into a bit of 'too much random' at the end. Thankfully, it was a short burst of 'too much random' and it worked out pretty well.
Yoko/Sarin in general
I love the pacing of these promos..they are both extremely sarcastic/witty and fast paced at the same time. Good stuff.
Freeman in general
I hate to say this, but I didn't read a single thing of yours fully tonight. The massive walls of text are offputting, and if you do read through them the whole "in/out of character" bit annoyed me greatly. Calc spamming with no substance is really bad in my opinion (not that calc spamming is ever great...but this was just way over the top).
Dan White in general
Would have liked to seen more work from you tonight. What was there was good, however more buildup going into Saturday would have been even better (it is a World Title match afterall).
Oh, and the main event is probably the shortest 10-man tag in history. The whole 'wargames' feel seemed kind of last minute and random, and a 10-man tag is just overwhelming to begin with.