Post by VorteX on Jul 14, 2007 21:21:52 GMT -5
I've been on quite a revising spree lately. So, here I am...asking for bit of advice on:
1. Moveset
I took a ton of crap out of the moveset, and basically tried to pin it down to a high-flying / technical set. I have a few MMA moves, such as the Juji-gatame armbar, and also a few submissions thrown in for good measure. Actually, most of my moveset is rather grounded now, other than the top-rope moves I do.
Taking note, I don't really want Vortex to become a shoot-style fighter or anything, but I don't want to be strictly a high-flyer either. Let's just say some of the MMA stuff will fit with my story later on down the line. I still intend to take risks, but don't want to appear like a spot idiot. Actually, the Spiral Tap and Infrared are borderline for me as they can be used as finishing moves, so I think that using them rarely should suffice. After all, I have to have some cool looking top-rope move ;D.
2. Segments
I've been attempting to improve on this, I like to paint a scene and then elaborate what I'm doing in it. Descriptive writing is my intention, my question to you is, when I write things like the Desolation Chronicles or even just some regular promos...am I painting pictures properly, or is there something else I should draw upon here?
3. Banner
I've completley redone my banner, as the other one just became glaring in my eyes. I want to go for something simple, yet elegant. I absolutely love this new one, but of course I should...how do you feel about it?
Those are pretty much the areas I've been meaning to get around and ask about. I've also restructured my profile a bit and added a bit of match advice for the writers, as I said before any advice on the above areas or anything else would be much appreciated.
1. Moveset
I took a ton of crap out of the moveset, and basically tried to pin it down to a high-flying / technical set. I have a few MMA moves, such as the Juji-gatame armbar, and also a few submissions thrown in for good measure. Actually, most of my moveset is rather grounded now, other than the top-rope moves I do.
Taking note, I don't really want Vortex to become a shoot-style fighter or anything, but I don't want to be strictly a high-flyer either. Let's just say some of the MMA stuff will fit with my story later on down the line. I still intend to take risks, but don't want to appear like a spot idiot. Actually, the Spiral Tap and Infrared are borderline for me as they can be used as finishing moves, so I think that using them rarely should suffice. After all, I have to have some cool looking top-rope move ;D.
2. Segments
I've been attempting to improve on this, I like to paint a scene and then elaborate what I'm doing in it. Descriptive writing is my intention, my question to you is, when I write things like the Desolation Chronicles or even just some regular promos...am I painting pictures properly, or is there something else I should draw upon here?
3. Banner
I've completley redone my banner, as the other one just became glaring in my eyes. I want to go for something simple, yet elegant. I absolutely love this new one, but of course I should...how do you feel about it?
Those are pretty much the areas I've been meaning to get around and ask about. I've also restructured my profile a bit and added a bit of match advice for the writers, as I said before any advice on the above areas or anything else would be much appreciated.