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Post by The Red Panther on Sept 10, 2009 13:17:38 GMT -5
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VorteX
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Post by VorteX on Sept 10, 2009 17:18:57 GMT -5
What do you think of my role playing and how could I improve it?:
Decent so far I'd say, except for I feel you haven' t really established a solid foundation for Panther yet. This leads to the next part...
What do you think of Panther is a character?:
Panther is supposedly a heel which some segments of yours show, however in other ones Panther thinks he's a face (speaking of the Warfare segment). To make matters worse, the video game angle may work for a neutral but not a heel since fans would kayfabe wise hate you and not buy anything of yours, which makes the angle a bit nonsensical unless you are trying to paint your character out to truly be an idiot.
What would you like too see me do in the future too improve Panther is a character?:
Backstory. Panther has a decent poser however we know little about him aside from the video game stuff, so we really can't hate him as a heel. Flesh out the character some more so we know why he's a heel and then do some heel stuff (a good feud would help here) to fully set in a place for yourself here. ACW is so flooded with heels at the moment that it may be hard to stand out, so considerable effort most likely will be needed here.
What do you think I should do with Jimmy Winner? (I already have a story idea, I mean as in his personality etc):
I didn't do enough research on said character to really comment here.
What do you think of Panthers/Winners move set?:
I'm no expert on movesets, I'd ask Senator for help on that one (unless he already looked at yours in which case it's most likely fine then)
What do you think of what I have done so far in ACW and what do you think I need to do to get too the next level (as in ET title sort of range)?
To get to ET range takes a ton of work. Consistency is a big thing and finding a place for your character is key, so you can entertain people whether that be with heel or face tactics. I'd say find a solid feud with someone and work from there.
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