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Post by BK London on May 8, 2008 19:37:34 GMT -5
Segment: The Morningstar (Credit: A.C. Evans)
And with that, we fade up to the scene of a dark room. Not the most typical scene that we've seen, but the camera crew is there nonetheless. Footsteps are heard. One..two..three. They stop. The clearing of a throat is heard. Four...five...six. They stop yet again. This man speaks. His voice is not the type of voice that would move mountains.
" It may not be the time, nor the place..but the Morningstar has arrived. The Morningstar which provides the guidance to all of those who live their life with vices. I provide the guidance that the men and women of this industry need. And in this day, in this age, where drugs and greed reign supreme, I am needed. Regardless of what I may do in my life, I know exactly what is best for you."
Such a hypocrite this man is. How can a man who has no idea how a person's mind function know what is best for them? This man hasn't the slightest idea.
" The time is drawing near. The time for change is now, however. Contrary to popular belief, I'm only looking out for your best interest. You people may call me a hypocrite, so be it. What you have to say about me, are nothing more than stark words spoken from the mouth of a sheep."
What arrogance. The footsteps draw nearer. The lights begin to flicker. The shape of the man is finally seen, but his face remains hidden. He is wearing a white shirt with white pants. His hair is partially in his face. His body shape is not what you'd expect from a ACW wrestler. He's quite slim and doesn't have much muscle. He leans up against a wall and continues to speak. His name is still not known to the ACW fans.
" Regardless of who you think I am, all that you need to know about me is that I'm the savior of your unclean souls. Regardless of what you think about me, you'll learn to accept me. Regardless of the choices you make, I'll make them right."
The lights flicker turn on for a second and then back off. From what we have seen, his back is turned towards the camera and we can see that his hair is dyed a bit blond, but just the part that lays on his face. His arms are filled with tattoos. The man without an identity continues on.
" So, in this hour, you're lives will change. From this point on, your tiny little existence now has a meaning. Your life's purpose is to do what is right in your life. And you will fulfill this purpose, even if I have to force you to do so. So, do what you will, but in the long run, you're eyes will be opened to the light."
He approaches the camera as the lights continue to flicker on and off continuously. As he comes closer to the camera, we see that his face is quite soft and looks very tender. His dark brown eyes stare deep into the camera now, with a glare of intensity. Not blinking, he continues to stare into the eyes and perhaps the hearts and souls of the viewers. The man finally reveals his identity.
" When you are dealt the cruel hand of defeat, you'll know the name of A.C. Evans. The Faith. Call me what you will. Just make sure you know that my presence in this company will be one that is never forgotten. Mark...my...words."
And with that, the lights in the room go off once again. Nothing is heard except for the slamming of the door.
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Post by BK London on May 8, 2008 19:38:08 GMT -5
Extended Invitations (Credit: Jake Steele/ Danny Mainer/ Chris Williams)
The scene opens up in the hot Rio De Janeiro parking lot. The camera pans around the lot, as the pure beaming UV rays of the sun, make the camera view look almost fizzed out, as if any more heat touches the cameras lens, the screen is going to crack. We see more of the hot lot, as the back of a car can be seen in the distance, it is a 2006 Dodge Viper SRT10 Coupe, and it is displays a sleek color of blue, with two bold white stripes shooting down the hood. In the distance, we can see two men near the car, one has a backwards cap on that says “NY” on it in New York Yankees design, and he seems to be shuffling something. The other man is easy to tell, none other then Danny Mainer, who has one of his arms tucked over his stomach, while the other is behind his head, while he rubs the back of his neck in pain. The camera gets closer, and we can see Jake counting hundred dollar bills, over and over again, just to make sure he has his right amount of cash. Danny he looks back at Jake, and his money, as he scuffles before saying a few words.
Danny Mainer: I can’t believe you fucking forgot to have your cousin install the brakes and the pedals in the car. I thought Destiny checked!
Jake continues counting and looks up at Mainer, before shaking his head and snickering.
Jake Steele: Nigga… I already told you my bad on dat. You actin’ like a real girl right now… And Des’ did check, she just didn’t check hard enough.
Danny Mainer: I’m NOT a fucking girl OK, I’m Xtreme-Intensity 8000! Jake Steele: Ay, ay, ay. Cool down wit’ dat’ shit son. If ya’ touch me, it’ll be like da’ last time we fought, I’ll just fuck ya’ up again.
Danny Mainer: WHAT!? TRY ME THEN, YOU AND ME AT WRESTLEMANI-… I MEAN IN THIS VERY PARKING LOT!
Steele stands up in the seat of his car, looking down at Mainer, who looks ready to fight Steele at any moment. Steele twist his cap to the side, and throws his money down before Steele jumps out the car and goes face to face with Mainer. The tension between the two is high, but Steele still laughs directly in Mainer’s face. Mainer gets ready to punch, when Mainer sees somebody in the distance.
Danny Mainer: Chris! Chris, Chris, Chris, Chris, Chris, Chris, CHRIIIIIIIS!
Yes… it was Chris Williams, friend of Danny Mainer and newcomer in ACW. He was heading to his car, just as Danny Mainer noticed him, Chris can be seen saying “shit” under his breath, as Mainer pushes Steele to the side, and runs to Chris. Chris quickly changes his expression and turns around, before looking happy to see Danny approaching him. Mainer and his short legs are tired from running across the parking lot, but he had to meet up with an old friend.
Danny Mainer: Hey Chris, Long time no see bro. I can’t believe your finally in ACW. The big leagues man, it’s great to have you here ace!
Chris Williams: Great to be here… But I got a question, what do you want?
Danny Mainer: *Mainer’s jaw drops* I just wanted to say what’s up… and put a proposal in front of you, see I have this stable…
Chris Williams: Yes, I know The Maine Event. Look, I’m alr-…
Danny Mainer: You’re already leaving!? But you just got here, that’s grade-A bullshit Chris.
Chris Williams: No… I’m already in the gro-…
Jake Steele: He’s already in the group, Mint E. signed him today. What’s up my nigga.
Jake and Chris give each other some dap, as Mainer is honest to god wondering how Steele could have pulled this off.
Danny Mainer: How did you?….
Jake Steele: Shocked, I see? I got Mint E. ta’ call him up, and he brought him to ACW. I met up with Chris at the bar last night, and we talked the deal over. After a few drinks, a few crazy ass stories, we came to a deal. Welcome Mainer… *Steele turns to the camera* and welcome AlphaWorld… the newest member of THHEE MAAIIIINNEEE EVENT! Chris… Williams.
Danny Mainer: You’re an asstard! Why didn’t you tell me?!?!
Jake Steele: I thought you’d be surprised!
Danny Mainer: Well this TOTALLY makes up for giving me a crippled car that could drive itself!
Jake Steele: Fa' real??
Danny Mainer: No! Now I must go back to my office and make plans for the Emperor of the Ring.
Danny storms off without another word leaving the two other members of The Maine Event in his wake.
Chris Williams: I take it he’s still a big an ass as ever?
Jake Steele: Dude jus' loss his virginity like 3 weeks ago.
Chris Williams: Ehh, not surprised.
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Post by BK London on May 8, 2008 19:38:59 GMT -5
Segment: The Loophole Paradox (Credit: FSX)
Time is always a factor when an idea suddenly strikes you in an inopportune place, and when you feel deep down that you must act on it immediately the fact you have such little time to go forth with it can be excruciating. Your own mind working against you as the natural order of things does all it can to prevent you from reaching your destination before time has run out, all you can do is close your eyes and run well you silently pray that you make it. That by some will you are able to reach where you are headed before time expires on your situation. The feat can bring you amazing joy if you manage to overcome, and endless misery should you fail and deem it your final chance. This is without much doubt the last chance that Fallen will ever receive for all of his dreams to come true, and he has made that quite evident after he decided to race away from a beautiful situation of misery in order to chase his dreams. One can only imagine just how many times Fallen has had to run away from beauty in order for a chance at greatness, though many may assume that beauty is usually running away from him. Still, as his search continued and the end of the show continued to draw near, it seemed quite evident that another one of his plans was falling apart. His final chance...was gone.
FSX: Fuck...where the hell is he hiding? He has to be somewhere! This needs to happen! Right now!! ARGH!!!
As his eyes continued to dart around and he began to run in a circle as he believed it would miraculously summon the presence of the Chairman...it soon became obvious that he had failed once again. Continuing his pointless sprint in the circle for a few moments he began to break down over time and slowly fall to his hands and knees, literally crawling around for a moment before coming to a stop and sitting there in shame.
FSX: He'll find out my plan before the next stop and make sure I can't do it..this isn't fair. Why can't things ever go my way? For my whole fucking life things haven't been going my way! What the hell is the deal with that? I've been doing this for years and years and nothing ever goes my way! Why do I keep going when I can't catch a break and a moment of glory? Hell, I can't even demand my moment like everyone else and do whatever it takes without screwing up! I'm a miserable excuse for a failure!
Welcome to the most depressing rant that you will ever know! As Fallen doesn't appear to have an end for the cruel words he can say of himself, those surrounding him in the backstage area don't seem to understand why he's so troubled. Why can't Fallen be like a normal person and simply cut himself when he's depressed? Or maybe he could just drink himself to death like so many great men have before him! Like Hunter, for example! He sure did love to die...anyway, as the words of Fallen begin to drown out into a unintelligible rant about the young people and their funny hair cuts, it seems that it won't last much longer. Why? Because the golden hero of time known as Ginger has appeared off in the distance! What will Fallen do to take advantage of this?
FSX: I may as well just kill myself already and stop wasting time week in and week out! It's not like anyone likes it when I'm on their screens at home. They'd rather be watching one of the young people with their hair cuts and what not! It's not fair..I'm doing all this for the benefit of the young people and I don't even have the heart to keep going! What's wrong with me? I've done this longer then anyone else in this damn company and I'm falling apart just because my dreams were crushed? This isn't even the first time!
...Completely miss his chance and continue to sob like a baby? Well, I wouldn't of expected that! His rambling is starting to make even less sense as time goes on as well, which can't be a very good sign for the health of his fragile and almost pointless at this point sanity. Beginning to rock back and forth a bit as he comes to the clear realization that he isn't going to be able to find Ginger in time and will have to sell shoes for a living, he doesn't even appear to notice as Ginger walks right by him. The Chairman seems quite confused to the scene as he wanders by, but to his benefit he ignored it as if nothing was happening. Likely the best decision he made all night. Still, eventually someone will be unable to see Fallen in such a state and feel the need to help, right?
FSX: I guess I should start packing my bags then. If I'm like this from one little mistake then who knows what might happen if I don't succeed in bringing the little guy back to the top of this company. It's quite evident that I should just quit well I'm ahead and before somebody gets hurt. This sucks...I love fighting. I really do. It's the most passionate thing I've ever had to give up. I suppose I can always become a professional dancer though. There must be some money in that. In fact, I could teach dance to the world! That will make me feel better!
Smiling for a moment as his head twisted in a bizarre manner and he looked around for someone with an unfocused gaze, his sight was very uncomfortable to say the least. His sanity was down for the count, and the second he started dancing it would never get up again. Giggling like a school girl as he slowly rose back to his feet and twirled in a circle, he came to an immediate stop and slowly began to stalk his way toward the cameraman. This wasn't going to end well, but did it ever?
FSX: You there...mobile camera stand! Would you happen to want to learn to dance? It's quite simple really!
Cameraman: Er...hey Fallen! Isn't that Ginger walking toward the parking lot? Doesn't that imply you still have time to tell him about your thing and not have to force me to dance?
FSX: Ginger...? Couldn't be! How could I of actually made it here on time? That's impossible! How dare you lie to me!
Cameraman: But it is! I promise! He'll even listen to your crazy idea if you hurry! Please pick that option!
Always seeming to pop off his head as he continued to twist his neck in a way that couldn't possibly be considered natural, he took a break from his new insanity to slowly look in the direction that the man was wildly pointing. Seeing that Ginger was indeed slowly on his way to his car, and feeling hope quickly return to him, the disoriented gaze of Fallen was vanquished by a determined one! Considering the sneak peek of what will happen if Fallen fails in convincing Ginger to do as he says, many must be rooting for him to succeed!
Fallen: GIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINGEEEEEEEERRRR! HEY!! TURN AROUND AND WALK OVER TO ME! GIIIIIIIINGEEEEERRR!!
Quite a bit startled by his approach to garnering the attention of the Chairman, though it really wasn't all that much different from how he had done so in the past, the cameraman nearly toppled over himself as Ginger slowly turned his head and looked back to Fallen. Who in there right mind would want to deal with a man who's been having obvious psychological problems and could very well of become a psychopathic killer over night? Hesitating a moment, Ginger seems to come to the conclusion that returning to Fallen would be alot easier then having him dash at him from behind and tackle him to the ground. Using logic and walking back to FSX, the Chairman seems to regret it almost immediately. Fallen has that look in his eyes again, and a horrible idea usually follows!
Ginger: What is it now, Fallen? I'm trying to leave this country you know...it smells...
FSX: That can wait until I'm done with you! I need you to go ahead and approve something for me and you can be on your way!
Ginger: Is that all..? Well, you make it sound painless enough for me. What do you want me to approve?
FSX: I want you to put me in the Main Event of Omega Effect.
Things can never be simple for Ginger, can they? As Fallen seems to think the request is the easiest to fulfill in the world, and simply smiles blankly and he waits for Ginger to say yes and be on his way, the delay seems to discourage him. Why wasn't the Chairman simply saying yes already...? Something must be wrong! A look of concern growing on Fallen's face as Ginger stares to him blankly, he couldn't help but ponder what the problem was.
FSX: Well...?
Ginger: ...What? It's not just that easy, Fallen!
FSX: But why not? If I remember correctly you let Steve do it last year! If he was allowed to do it last year and is already bound to be a part of the match this year, then why aren't I allowed to do it this year? Only seems fair to me!
He could feel a sense of logic and truth in his words and the thought brought a broad grin to his face, looking never better as everything seemed to work it's way into the puzzle as he had imagined it. At this point Ginger would simply concede defeat to his truth filled statement and place him in the Main Event, then he could finally take that chance and make all of his dreams come true! ...Right..?
Ginger: Well, for one he had an actual REASON to be in the Main Event last year. It wasn't just a matter of his desire to be there, but he deserved to be there. You, on the other hand..what have you ever done to Main Event the biggest show of the year? You've never been the World Champion, and you've never been a realistic contender. You haven't won any notably big matches or been a part of a feud that people can look back at and smile over. You've never been very important to the company, and quite frankly your expendable talent that's beginning to get a big head!
As Fallen continued to grin like an idiot for a moment after hearing that rant, the lack of acceptance to his spot in the Main Event seemed to trouble him. Standing there in silence for a moment as he tried to piece together a reason for the Chairman to tell him off like this, nothing logical seemed to come to mind! What could he possibly be thinking as he said such cruel words? No..this must just be a misinterpretation!
FSX: I am not...I deserve the chance just like Steve does! All you have to do is give it to me and you can go, simple as that!
Ginger: I'm not about to waste the biggest show in the history of this company on you. No one will come if your main eventing...don't you understand? Baring some miracle that kills all the other serious contenders on the roster your not my first choice, and you will NEVER get that chance. Understand yet?
FSX: ...But all you have to do is say yes! Come on...say yes!
Beginning to grow desperate as he realizes that things aren't going nearly as smoothly as he first imagined they would, a flustered Fallen continues to push the subject and with pleading eyes takes a step toward Ginger. It seems that single movement was enough to disgust the Chairman, as he simply shook his head once more and began to walk away from the currently Disrespected X. How could things possibly play out in such a manner?
Ginger: Just get used to the midcard already, alright? That's all talent such as yourself will amount too. I figured you would of learned after I fired you the last time..suffice to say I'm disappointed.
FSX: ...Talent like me, huh...? I see...
Standing there flabbergasted by the way that things had played out, Fallen can only watch as the Chairman walks away and takes his dreams with him. Such stinging and cold words would pierce his very soul as they rang through his mind over and over, never quite settling as they boggled him to his very core. Just a midcard...never deserving...never to be. Could it all be true, or simple politics meant to hold him down? This couldn't be right, he couldn't believe it all died in such a painful fashion! Shaking his head a few times as he held his head down in shame, he suddenly rose it and stared to the camera for a moment. Would he become the psychopath many expected him to be now, due to his failure..? It doesn't seem to be the case. In fact, it almost appears like Fallen has taken some kind of motivation from all of this. But why...? How could he possibly take his first step to recovery from the blow that should of killed him? I guess we'll just have to wait and see...
Fade to black.
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Post by BK London on May 8, 2008 19:39:56 GMT -5
ACW Charity Football Event: Second Half
As the match begins again, Gingerdude kicks the ball off to Dan White. The Welsh Dragon immediately goes down the right side, and dribbles past Kevin Fitsharris. The Capitalist attempts a last second slide tackle, but only manages to whiff horribly, resulting in scattered laughter from the audience, as well as a simmering ire from the fallen American. White attempts to pass up Tim Dwight, but the old veteran holds his ground. Instead, the Welshman sends a blind back pass in the path of Chairman Gingerdude, who receives it with skill, firing a low shot at goal that Biff barely deflects with a lunging belly flop.
Champion: Well, that's a rather unorthodox technique, to say the least...
Biff picks the ball up, and boots it, sending the spherical object halfway across the pitch, right at Senator Phillips and Pat McGroin, who both leap up, McGroin managing to use his bulk to gain position, and thus, heading the ball into friendly turf. Fellow Royle, Ivor Biggin controls the ball, passing the ball back to Fleming as Kevin Fitsharris closes in. The ACW head referee deftly sends a looping pass across the pitch to Gingerdude, who gives it another try on goal...but this time, fakes out his Fallout counterpart with a stepover, and easily finds the back of the net!
TEAM USA 2 TEAM UK 3 (Chairman Gingerdude - 2 Minutes)
Bardo: And the United States are down a goal again.
Champion: The UK team should not get cocky, though, as anything can happen here with eight minutes to go and a small pitch, to boot. Remember, both sides have well established their ability to score from long distance, and move the ball.
The US team, with Phillips directing traffic, regroups, and kick the ball off again. Tim Dwight takes the ball, and aggressively charges down the middle, hoping to strike gold again, and make up for the deficit. Pat McGroin blatantly trips his former trainer as he barrels through, prompting Beckham to stop the match, and call for an indirect free kick.
Bardo: Typically dirty tactics from a typically dirty wrestler. Probably holding a grudge from the time that Dwight made him lose ten pounds within a week's time...
Senator Phillips passes the ball over to Kalb, who finds himself quickly overwhelmed by Biggin and White, losing the ball. Kevin Fitsharris muscles his way in, and manages to make a clean run at goal, only for his thirty yard shot to fly straight over the goal. The crowd gets a good laugh as Fitsharris shakes his head, and RAF kicks the ball off over to Dan. The Welsh Dragon manages to fake Senator out, before passing to McGroin, receiving the ball back, as he makes his own run at goal. Biff Taylor sets himself in place, only for White to pass back to McGroin, who taps in a short range goal.
TEAM USA 2 TEAM UK 4 (Pat McGroin - 4 Minutes)
Champion: The deficit has now increased for the United States, they seem to be taken a bit off guard by the quick footwork and superior team play of their opponents. We keep saying that anything can happen, but the margin for error keeps dwindling.
The United States gets the ball back, as a clearly annoyed Steve Phillips taps the ball over to Fitsharris, directing Kalb down the left side of the pitch, while Dwight remains back in a defensive position. Gingerdude closes in on Fitsharris, who panics, passing back to Senator, who appears even more aggravated, having to modify his impromptu attack, and passes back to Textbook. The Dwight Gym head trainer moves forward, sending a long pass down to Kalb, but White gets a head on it, deflecting it...right in the path of a very lucky Kevin Fitsharris, who manages to plow forward, and deke the ball past RAF for a goal!
TEAM USA 3 TEAM UK 4 (Kevin Fitsharris - 5 Minutes)
The Capitalists almost begin to celebrate, but the more level headed members of the team reign them in, as the match starts off again.
Bardo: They look sloppier, but the US team isn't giving up.
Champion: A two goal lead made the UK team fall into a state of complacency, but that should be dissolving now that it's one goal away from a draw.
Gingerdude passes the ball back now, and McGroin tips it over to Biggin. The backline of the UK team, settling in, now begin to utilize modern Chelsea tactics: stalling the game to a creeping halt, as they keep the ball away from any challenges.
Bardo: Wake me up when they make a mistake...
Dan White takes the ball up slightly, just enough to draw Kalb in, before passing back to Fleming, who keeps the ball long enough to bait the US top three into advancing, at which point, he kicks back to Dan. The crowd starts booing, and a bit of the Fallout element in the stands starts their ultimate display of disgust, the dreaded "Orton Sucks" chant.
Champion: A rather bizarre...
Bardo: You don't want to know.
Dan, for his part, clamps a boot down on top of the ball, striking a brief pose with arms outstretched, just in time for Phillips to sneak in, kicking away the ball. The Senator takes advantage of David Beckham's positioning, using him to hold off McGroin for a moment, dribbling in at goal, outrunning Biggin, and shoots from about twenty yards out, placing the ball in the lower right corner of the net!
TEAM US 4 TEAM UK 4 (Steve Phillips - 8 Minutes)
Champion: An excellent goal scored by the American Senator! Dan White thus far has proven to be the most talented player out here, but that display hurt his team dearly.
White, having fallen on the theft of the ball, brushes himself off, allowing Dwight to help him to his feet, as he bounds back to centre pitch, kicking the ball off to Ginger.
Bardo: Only two minutes left, and both sides even. Ginger probably would want it to stay that way if he was watching, not playing, but these guys don't know how to turn off the competitive switch.
Gingerdude waits for his team to push ahead, not wishing to waste time on a failed effort, and dribbles forward as his teammates dash into enemy territory. Dwight backpedals, motioning his own team back, not wishing to concede a late goal, and hoping to capitalize(no pun intended) on a UK error if possible. Ginger, feeling a head of steam, dribbles past both Capitalists, passing over to Biggin, who taps it back to the ACW Chairman. McGroin starts a run down the right side, and Ginger passes it over to him, with the Royle immediately crossing the ball in. Dwight gets in the way, but Dan runs in, taking the ball, and attempting an off balance left footed attempt, which deflects just off the post. Biff takes the goal kick, tempted to launch a missile at RAF on the other end of the pitch, but Phillips motions for the ball, and receives it off a short pass. The Senator, seeing less than a minute is left in regular time, takes the ball down the center, running past his Chairman, sidestepping a McGroin kick, and now, with only two defenders left between himself and the goal, and with his own teammates behind him, Phillips runs at top speed towards the opposing target.
Ivor Biggin takes a position right to his left, trying to slow Senator down, and cut off his options, but only succeeds in the latter, as Phillips sees a clear chance at an outright victory...when disaster strikes...at full force.
***CRACK***
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Post by BK London on May 8, 2008 19:40:28 GMT -5
Dan White, with a bloodcurdling yell, takes an interceptor angle at his opponent, sliding in with a diving boot held on a straight line, catching the Senator right under the knee with a cringe worthy kick, nearly inverting him in mid air on the impact.
David Beckham runs over to the scene, holding up a red card at the unrepentant Welsh Dragon, who merely glares over his fallen foe, while the rest of the players make their way to Phillips. Dwight immediately calls for the medics as he observes the Senator's leg, and after a few brief words to Beckham, the match is ended with ten seconds left in regular time.
Champion: This is an unfortunate turn of events, you never want to see something like this happen, not in a professional match, and certainly not in a friendly match like this.
Chairman Gingerdude, for his part, yells for security, and has his now-former teammate hauled off the pitch, a furious expression on his face.
Bardo: Wrestlers and soccer...never should have mixed the two...
The stretcher is rushed to the scene of the injury, and the medics have little problem getting Phillips situated.
Bardo: You really know something's bad when he allows himself to be stretchered away. Senator Phillips is not the type to let anyone help him out of the ring.
Champion: Didn't you say that man was in line for your heavyweight title belt?
Bardo: Not mine, but yeah, ACW's top management's not happy with this, I know. Especially Ginger, out there. If he already hated Dan White before, I can't imagine he'd be on good terms now. This is going to drastically change the Omega Effect main event if Phillips is hurt as bad as he looks.
As the stretcher heads off the pitch, the camera focuses on the Senator, who is obviously not in good shape, clutching a misshapen leg, and gritting his teeth, before Anthony Kalb forces the cameraman to avert his view.
Bardo: It almost looked like a compound fracture, there was blood, I could tell that much from that glance. Seeing that we have no time left, I should be ending here, this is Dean Bardo, Fallout announcer, and that's Jon Champion, English soccer...
Champion: Football...
Bardo: Whatever...
Gingerdude, finding a microphone, decides not to let the Fallout and Setanta announcers close out his show.
Ginger: As...as you just saw here, Senator Steve Phillips was just injured badly by an intentional slide tackle by Dan White. That move went against the very spirit of this match. I apologize for the audience that had to see this horrific incident occur, for the fans in attendance, and for those watching at home. This match was intended to raise money for ACW Charities, and you have given to a worthy cause. Unfortunately, the action out here did not mirror that goodwill. There will be repercussions. And Senator Phillips will be evaluated as soon as possible by the best physicians we have, to determine the fate of the #1 contendership. That will be all.
Fade Out
End of Show
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Post by xs3 on May 8, 2008 19:42:26 GMT -5
Damn that emo MJ wannabe. >_>
Great segment-fueled show everyone. Go Chris Williams!
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Post by acevans on May 8, 2008 19:46:41 GMT -5
Great show. Very well-written by everyone in the e-fed.
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Post by Jake Steele on May 8, 2008 19:50:35 GMT -5
Phenomenal Show, everybody. This has to be our best show segment wise in damn near ever. Make sure we all keep it up. And oh yeah...
LONG LIVE THE MAINE EVENT!
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Post by Chris Williams on May 8, 2008 20:27:59 GMT -5
That was definitely a cool way to do a show. I've never seen a format like ACW's before, but it turned out really well. Phenomenal writing by everyone, a great show through and through.
As far as my favorites go, this week I REALLY enjoyed "Behold the Forgotten Road" by FSX, I thought it was very well worked on. The other segment that I thought was pretty funny was "Fucking with the Mind" by Mainer and Steele. A pretty funny little episode, to be sure.
Anyways, I'm glad to have submitted something into the show today, I hope everyone enjoyed it! I look forward to the future!
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Post by Dan White on May 8, 2008 21:43:52 GMT -5
Take that, Senator! Nice show
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Post by rosslambert on May 9, 2008 7:01:18 GMT -5
Great show guys, Hooray for Whitesnake, beating The Second Coming and AJ being hilarious!
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Post by Thunderkiss on May 11, 2008 1:36:38 GMT -5
Disclaimer: These picks are of course my opinion. My opinion is neither right or wrong its just what I think. So if you don’t make the list, please do not feel that I don’t like you, what you wrote or that your promos were not as good as the one’s I have listed. I really don’t want people to get discouraged over things like these. Please, please realize that with the amount of talented writers that we have it’s a super tough job picking out just five promos. Q&A WITH AJ! Ah my first Q&A! I was very excited I actually got questions! Many thanks to Jake Steele for his desire to pick my brain! Q: In your opinion, who is a ACW member who will one day become World Champ?Wow, talk about pressure out of the gate! Well, okay, here we go. As far as some of the more established vets go, who doesn’t believe that both FSX and Adrian Flamingo both deserve the big gold someday? It seems every time Flamingo has gotten a title opportunity, he wasn’t on a good stride and X has been victim of being in wrong place at the wrong time. Either way, they both most certainly have the tools and in my opinion, it’s only a matter of time. I’ll also put Snake on this list. He’s back, he’s hot and I know the man is hungry. If he can keep it up, he’ll finally clinch that golden surprise. Also, BK will be the first person to win the title 3 times. As far as the younger guys go, I have no doubts that Taylor and Showtime can easily achieve the pinnacle of the federation if they keep up their hard efforts. Those two immediately pop into my mind. I know this may seem like a “cop out” to keep everyone happy, but in regards to the new talent, I don’t see anyone lacking the skills to make huge advancements. Just as in life, it’s all about how bad you want it. Q: The Maine Event, The Second Coming... is this the future of ACW stables?Not a long winded response on this one; your answer is yes. I am extremely excited about the Maine Event. You guys have chemistry, right off the bat. The Second Coming is a force that already owns more than half of the ACW titles. What more do I need to say about them? It’s always good for a fed to have around 2-3 stables and you newer guys are doing a good job to see this through. There was definitely a vacancy after some asshole destroyed the Entourage! AJ'S PICKS! - “The Good Old Years” by Jake Steele. Ah, I see we have a new back story starting with this show and from the looks of it, it should be quite entertaining. We have a high school setting, a love interest and a rival so all the bases are covered thus far. I like the characters and I think this has a ton of potential behind it, though I will warn Steele on these types of promos. You want to keep the chapters at a minium and make sure you show how your character developed from these experiences. Not heeding this may lose readers. Finally, I love that Steele is actually “narrating” this tale. That’s a new, fresh approach that I’ve never seen before.
- “A Stairway to the One” by Nick Durden! Damn you Durden for making me tear up! You had to go and write something like this around Mother’s Day, no less! Getting down to serious business, that segment was full of emotion from top to bottom. The writing was perfect, the text had a vivid sense of description and even your song lyrics fit in well. Hopefully most of us can relate to the subject matter and I assure you if you take the time to read this you will appreciate your relationship with your mother a lot more. I think we all should read it, especially tomorrow.
- “An Unorthodox Tag Team” by Lord Dan White & Rattlesnake. I love the idea behind this team! When you think about Dan’s “black” personality and Snake’s “Revolutionary” side, they are almost mirror images of each other. My marking for this team aside, this promo was excellent written as their introduction. It is extremely clever not to have them get along and their exchanges show exactly why. Dysfunctional tag teams are always more fun than those that get along and truth be told, the sky is the limit for you two if you really go all out on this. Well, that is until you meet the Fashion Express!
- “RDK Invitation Entertainment Tournament Round One: Soccer” by Showtime & Thunder Train. Now this is a concept! These two characters gel well together and obviously these two know that, otherwise they wouldn’t be doing this series together. In case you didn’t notice, I just love skillfully crafted banter between characters. When done right, there really isn’t anything better to read. Sometimes when you work with someone, you just “click” with them and in doing so, you feed off each other’s work. Thus far I’m seeing this between these two and that equals great reading.
- “The Loophole Paradox” by FSX. Poor X, he just can’t get ahead, can he? It seems as if no matter how hard he tries, life throws him a curve ball. The thing I love about X now is he is totally rolling with the “underdog” type character. I mean honestly, who doesn’t cheer for the underdog? This is a clever approach and it’s paying off as far as I’m concerned. Finally, I loved how FSX incorporated Ginger into the use of this promo. Instead of just filler lines, what he had to say had great importance. Good job.
Honorable Mentions: I would love to give a huge welcome to Chris Williams and A.C. Evens. I read both your contributions, and I will be honest with you in saying you can make an impact in this federation. That said, you both certainly deserve honorable mentions for this show. Great introduction from Evans and Williams shows he is not a slouch when it comes to character development. I’d also recommend Mainer’s and Steele’s joint “Fucking with the Mind.” It has Kit the car in it! From Night Rider! Yay, go 80's stuff! Besides that though, these two make a great combination that are destined for the tag belts someday. Finally, I’d like to recommend “Back and Back and Back and Back to the Future” by Flamingo. If you didn’t think the ante could get upped any further in his feud with BK, think again. Things look to become very, very nasty. Moment of the Show: Taken from the main event written by both Dan and Senny. Bardo: Wrestlers and soccer...never should have mixed the two... The stretcher is rushed to the scene of the injury, and the medics have little problem getting Phillips situated. Bardo: You really know something's bad when he allows himself to be stretchered away. Senator Phillips is not the type to let anyone help him out of the ring. First, who can’t lol at Bardo’s quote there. Second, the rest is very, very true. The Senator is INDEED not a man to allow himself to be stretched off. He’s hurt and he’s hurt bad. But wait, isn’t he going to Omega Effect to face the ACW Champion? If he can’t make it .... what does that mean for the rest of us? See you Monday! <3, Kenny.
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Post by Nick Durden on May 11, 2008 9:03:07 GMT -5
Is it fair for Kenny to have a monopoly in the feedback industry? I think not!
I wanna give Snake props for "All Road To Your Goal Are Bumpy." It basically epitomizes the merits of short and sweet. With relatively few words, Snake managed to fully convey his passion and determination. I also liked how the speech was intense enough to suggest that the change he wants is something that will be extreme and perhaps even a bit frightening, but it was also vague enough to keep you guessing. All this works well to hype up his future storyline.
Fallen's impersonation of Libertines in "Badder than Scott Andrews's Haircut: THE WEEK IN REVIEW!!!" thoroughly titillated me for some reason. It's just something about the broken cockney-esque dialect that just takes me to my lawl zone.
I gotta say that "The Good Ole Years?" certainly whet my appetite for what Steele has to come. I'm a sucker for these flashback type angles where we get to see some life-changing events (that aren't necessarily related to wrestling) from the character's past. It just does wonders for character development. I've actually got something planned for Nick that would appear to be similar to where Jake's going, so it'll be cool to see how far Steele sets the bar for this kind of story.
Okay, I'll admit that I got a few good chuckles out of "NAW BITCH NAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW." I've always really appreciated Showtime's irreverence and this is one of those segments where it's right out there for all to see.
"The Morningstar" really makes me look forward to seeing more of A.C. Evans. The zealot kind of character is one that can be truly epic if done well, and Mr. Evans does seem to have the talent to take it there.
In closing, I'd like to say we should all really keep an eye out for what FSX has planned to wedge himself into the Omega Effect main event. Knowing him, the antics will be off the charts. We should expect laughter, tears, diarrhea, and an all-around good time.
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