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Post by hunter on Mar 13, 2008 17:34:40 GMT -5
Yay, clusterfucks! Good show, though. <_<
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Post by Dan White on Mar 13, 2008 17:36:58 GMT -5
Taylor you need to learn to paragraph.
Good show though.
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Post by xs3 on Mar 13, 2008 17:37:11 GMT -5
TK, AK and Senator were randomly attacked! I call bullshit, cheatsies and shenanigans all at once!
But other than that, it was a good show.
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Post by Dalton on Mar 13, 2008 19:35:19 GMT -5
I would just to note that I really like Blaine's writing style.
Yay people!
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Post by Commissioner Zero on Mar 13, 2008 21:23:27 GMT -5
...Well that's not how I expected it to go down..
>_>
.....*Points at Taylor and backs away into the shadows*
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Post by jontaylor on Mar 14, 2008 5:30:20 GMT -5
*Points at FSX and also backs away into shadows*
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Post by shikari on Mar 14, 2008 11:34:38 GMT -5
*Points at the shadows and backs away into Stone*
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Post by Fallen Souls on Mar 14, 2008 13:48:55 GMT -5
>.> Did Jin just enter Stone...? Anyway, not my fault!
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Post by Thunderkiss on Mar 14, 2008 23:32:46 GMT -5
Disclaimer: These picks are of course my opinion. My opinion is neither right or wrong its just what I think. So if you don’t make the list, please do not feel that I don’t like you, what you wrote or that your promos were not as good as the one’s I have listed. I really don’t want people to get discouraged over things like these. Please, please realize that with the amount of talented writers that we have it’s a super tough job picking out just five promos. TK'S PICKS! - “Walk the Walk, Before You Talk the Talk” by Senator Steve. I personally believe that Phillips can run with his heel turn and turn it into something big. I’m talking another World Title run big. While I dare not compare it to the best heel turn of all (Hogan of course), there are some similarities and the whole thing feels “big time.” Anyway, this promo was the first “in ring” segment from Phillips that I can recall since his last World Title run. If you want to see how you work the “virtual” crowd, read this one.
- “Your Fortune Doesn't Interest Me Part 3: The End...?” by Chef. Chef has really come into his own with the Thunder Train character, and I personally feel this show he made a sincere effort to silence the “lackey” critics. All of his promos were spectacular, however this one stood out amongst them. It has a great flow, reads well, moves from setting to setting and continues the excellent “crazy fortune cookie guy” storyline. Plus, Chef gets bonus points for even promoing this week with Brawl out. If that’s not dedication, I don’t know what is!
- “Takin' Care of Business” by Flamingo & BK. I always appreciated Flamingo’s narrative writing style. He does a fine job with all the descriptive text and reads like a good book. Check out the first three paragraphs of this to see what I mean. Mickey’s panic and BK’s determination totally carry this promo. The Flamingo/BK feud seems to be steam rolling down the tracks of ACW again and that’s most certainly a good thing.
- “Unlikely Allies” by Red. We are going to give Red some loving this go around. The character dialogue made sense and was to the point. He also did do a good job writing the tension between the two characters. While this promo was short and sweet, it does well to keep the whole Gabriel, Bo, Mr & Mrs. Red storyline relevant. For some odd reason this storyline gives me a whole “Undertaker/Kane” type feel mixed in with “Nailz/Big Bossman.” Considering I liked both, I’ve been pretty entertained and I believe you will be as well if you follow it.
- “Dreams Deterred” by Lucrezia. Extremely high quality writing. Everything is cleverly written and the detail is immaculate. Show me any better right now, seriously. Do yourself a favor and read it. Its like you become instantly smarter.
Thunderous Quote of the Show: The Thunderous quote of the show will actually serve as my SIXTH pick for this week because the promo in general had so many wonderful one liners in it, I was seriously laughing out loud. Congrats to Mr. Fantastic for another fine showing! All from “Invasion of Love - Part 5” by FSX: Tim: Come on! It wasn't that bad, was it?! Sheena: I was telling you about my family and you said you wished I was a sexbot. What's not bad about that?! Tim: But she's leaving and I wanted to giver her a pet name for that ass! I'm thinking of something like BLBLUBLUBLUBLU FSX: What? Tim: You know, like the sound I'd be making all night long as I gave it some sweet attention! Tim: She's from Nebraska or something. All I know is that the story I'll be putting on Adult Fan Fiction. I know it's going to get the best comments! I did a story board when she went to the bath room on my napkin, wanna see? FSX: We're only going to get one clean chance at this, so let's do it right. I'm going to run over there and attempt to 'mug' her. Tim: What? Fuck you! Why would you do that? I wanna fuck her not rob her! Woman #2: Men are all the same! When things are going their way they act all nice and sweet, but there just waiting to get you back and stab you in the back! Woman #3: Or rape you with their large and ugly penis! We're not about to let you hurt her with your demon stick! Helen Reddy: I AM WOMAN, HEAR ME ROAR! IN NUMBERS TOO BIG TO IGNORE, AND I KNOW TO MUCH TO GO BACK AND PRETEND!! FSX: AHHHHHHHH!!! SAVE ME!!!!!! NOOOOOOOO!!!
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