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Post by Jason Freeman on Sept 21, 2010 1:26:53 GMT -5
Segment: Unified Front (Credit: Ascendancy: Freeman, Taylor, Cole, Senator)
A shocking scene visits our fans as the show returns to the break: all four members of Ascendancy walking down the hallway in their street clothes, warm ups in the Senator's case, and more significantly, are all speckled in blood.
Ryan Cole: That was a lesson that he'll never forget!
Jon Taylor: Only because I stepped in to show you all how it's done.
Cole: Yeah sure...
Taylor: It's true, I did the real damage, since I know how to inflict pain better than anyone else in ACW, I just hold myself back most of the time, it'd be unfair if I went all out every time I went into the ring. We'd have people dead on a regular basis, and they don't want that.
Cole: I don't think you'd care about that, maybe if they cut your money, but not otherwise.
Jason Freeman: Everyone quiet down. We should just soak in the moment. We just took the first big step towards solidifying our control of ACW tonight, we proved that nobody scares us now.
Taylor: First off, I'll talk when I want to, and second, we're the best in the fed, that was just a bit of fun there.
The Senator: And it is that attitude that I fear for. We went too far.
Cole: We did what we had to do, you know that, you went along with it.
Senator: We did what we had to do, but then we all took it a step too far, myself included. I condone surgical strikes, I have no problem with the idea of the attack in the first place. It is only when we cease to make a message, and start to revel in destruction that I...
Taylor: Become a total killjoy, come on, Phillips, we don't need any of that!
Freeman: I disagree. We did what we had to do, the man we attacked was worthy of more than a few punches and a few stomps, this was the only way we could set a real message. And in any case, I decide whether it's too much or not.
Senator: I do not wish to undermine your leadership, but I will not be an unyielding yes man, I am not going to remain quiet if I think that we are headed down the wrong path.
Cole: But you still support the group, correct?
Senator: Correct.
Cole: Then I have no problem.
Senator: Just remember, when we start crossing the line over from strategic warfare into wanton bloodlust, when we delight in violence outside the ring, that is when we lose our edge, that is when we become no different than the plethora of groups that came before us.
Freeman: You worry too much, Senator. Everything is under control, and in fact, everything is happening right how I want it to. ACW is in our control, the belts are in our hands, and there is nothing anyone can do at this point to bring us down.
Senator: Well, as much unease as I might feel here, I will not bring down this feeling of euphoria. Tread carefully, champ, you are truly in your prime, but do heed my warnings, lest we all feel the consequences.
Freeman: Funny way to avoid bringing down the mood.
Senator: Uh, we are still the best in the business, and that, my friends, is nothing, but the truth!
Freeman: Much better.
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Post by Jason Freeman on Sept 21, 2010 1:31:20 GMT -5
Match 3 Entertainment Championship: Public Enemy vs Jon Taylor (c.) (Credit: Mainer)
Public Enemy is already in the ring and Taylor's music starts to play, but it seems that once again Jon Taylor has failed to appear for his match despite specific orders from the chairman to be there. Therefore as a result Public Enemy wins by forfeit. Of course this means that Jon Taylor is still Entertainment Champion by default, though Enemy picks up the victory.
Edison: Another no-show?! Really?! This is lame!
McNally: Damn it. Does Taylor think he's proving a point here? He's the Entertainment Champion he has to defend the belt!
But it seems for now, that is not going to happen as the camera fades out once more.
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Post by Jason Freeman on Sept 21, 2010 1:31:54 GMT -5
Segment: End of the line Credit: Jon Taylor
Following yet another no show by the Entertainment Champion Jon Taylor, we switch to the backstage area where we see the man himself swaggering down the hallway. With the Championship belt on shoulder he has a defiant smirk upon his face, believing that he has called the bluff of the Chairman. However as he turns the corner he quickly realises he couldn't be anymore wrong. Standing there is a security force of 10 men with the Chairman standing behind them looking incensed. Taylor turns around...standing there is another team of 10 men. He is boxed in, what will Taylor do? He does the only thing he knows how to do and charges straight at the team in front of Hawthorne! Using his belt as a weapon he levels 3 of the security guards before finally being restrained by the others. Just as it appears as though Taylor is restrained he headbutts another security guard before finally admitting defeat. He groans as Hawthorne stands over him shaking his head.
Hawthorne: You just couldn't do it, could you Taylor? You couldn't ignore that ludicrous ego of yours and play ball. Well not only have you lost your Championship but you are also suspended...INDEFINITELY. I trust you will enjoy your time out.
Hawthorne glares at the rebellious Tayor before watching his team drag Taylor towards the exit of the arena and kicking him out.
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Post by Jason Freeman on Sept 21, 2010 1:33:06 GMT -5
Which Deadly Sin are You? Credit: Criminal The camera shows the backstage area. No one is in sight, but a seductive, female, giggle is heard coming from around the corner. The giggles make the camera man curious, as he slowly moves towards the end of hallway. As the camera gets closer, the giggles sound farther, so the camera man moves faster. Once to the corner a loud voice is heard.[glow=red,2,300]Voice:[/glow] HEY!! The camera man drops the camera and screams like a little girl.[glow=red,2,300]Voice:[/glow] You fucking pussy! Pick up the damn camera already! You would think that they trained you people to be a little more cautious when attempting to sneak up on people. The camera starts to shake, and the sound of heavy breathing is heard from the camera man. Once the camera is fully back in place you can finally notice that the asshole that scared the camera man is none other than the same asshole that made his return earlier tonight. [glow=red,2,300]Criminal:[/glow] Have your learned your lesson about sneaking up on people? The camera shakes up and down with the camera man nodding[glow=red,2,300]Criminal:[/glow] Good! Now ladies and Gentlemen I told you all that the criminal antics of the mastermind himself will start to unravel earlier tonight. Well, I have come up with such an ingenious plan on how I can end all the talk from the… well… “Religious People” … and still carry out my chaos. How you all may ask? Well, with Seven Deadly Sins being behind us, I have been hearing the talk about how such a bad choice of a name for a show should have god strike all of us dead. These people all believe in a higher power that does not exist, and I am going to be the one to prove this. I am…WAIT A MINUTE….DUDE DID YOU PISS YOURSELF? The camera shakes as if the camera man said NO[glow=red,2,300]Criminal[/glow]: Then, Why the fuck are your pants wet! Camera man: I fell into a puddle when you scared me. [glow=red,2,300]Criminal[/glow]: Inside the building? Do I look like a fucking idiot? The camera man drops the camera. The sound of crying is heard, and then quickly followed by the sound of footsteps leaving. You can see Criminal’s face in the camera as he picks it up, and places it on a cart.[glow=red,2,300]Criminal:[/glow] Well, due to the ACW not being able to pay for camera men that are potty trained we now have to make due with this shitty angle. Now, back to what I was saying. I am going to prove that even though you break each and every one of these deadly sins, god himself will not spite me. So tonight, by the looks of my surroundings, and on such a short notice I am going to break the one that I know I can do fairly easily. Criminal glances around for a minute, and sees something he likes in the distance.[glow=red,2,300]Criminal:[/glow] Ladies and Gentlemen, Are you ready to see lust in action? Criminal walks up to the first, sexy lady that he says.[glow=red,2,300]Criminal:[/glow] How would you like to be famous? The girl quickly recognizes who the man is, and follows him back towards the camera.[glow=red,2,300]Criminal:[/glow] Now, behind me is the locker room of a black man. We all know the stereotypes of the black man, so tonight I am going to put those stereotypes to shame. I am going to give this girl the best…hmmm…. “beating” of a lifetime, thanks to Buddy Ghee for providing this wonderful locker room of his. The two start to make out, and things start to get heated. Criminal walks over to the camera to shut it off. After a few moments, Criminal, gets frustrated and throws the camera against the wall. The screen becomes fuzzy.
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Post by Jason Freeman on Sept 21, 2010 1:34:23 GMT -5
SEGMENT TITLE: An Unexplainable Worry
The cameras cut to the back now and show what appears to be a rather heated argument happening between Kevin Anderson and Charlotte King, the two primary backstage interviewers of ACW. Sensing a potential story, the cameraman slowly eases up on the two and aims the camera in order to pick up their voices.
Kevin Anderson: You are out of your damn mind! What the hell is wrong with you!?
Charlotte King: What the hell is wrong with a showing a little compassion? I know a heartless prick like you wouldn’t care, but I actually have feelings!
Kevin Anderson: Look at who you’re talking about Charlotte! The man is an absolute nutcase! You’ve seen how he is; hell he’s scared you half to death on more than one occasion! After all that, you’re worried about HIM!?
Charlotte King: You didn’t see him Kevin. You didn’t see the pain he was in. He obviously didn’t show it, but for the first time I can remember I actually saw some humanity in his eyes. He was hurting so badly. What’s wrong with wanting to check on someone in pain?
Kevin looks away with an exasperated look on his face, apparently trying to get his thoughts clear in his head. Seemingly coming to a decision as to what to say, he takes a deep breath and turns back to Charlotte before speaking in a much calmer tone of voice.
Kevin Anderson: Charlotte, this man is not a loved one. He is not a friend of yours. He is a sick and twisted psychopath that can snap at a moment’s notice. Even knowing all that, you still worry about him? Why?
Charlotte King: I…I don’t know Kevin. I can’t explain it. I’ve thought about it all week, I just can’t get it out of my mind. I…I can’t get HIM out of my mind…
Kevin seemingly gives up his quest to talk Charlotte out of her plan as he simply shrugs his shoulders and walks off down the hall. Charlotte turns away now and finally notices the cameraman standing nearby. She gets a slight look of agitation at being overheard, but quickly gets over it and goes down the hall. She passes by a nearby stagehand, so she quickly leans over and taps him on the shoulder before asking him a question.
Charlotte King: Do you know where I can find The Scorpion?
There’s an audible, collective gasp from the crowd at the mention of Scorpion’s name. Why would Charlotte King, who has been scared out of her wits by this man multiple times, care about his well-being? What is going on inside her head? Alas, the answer does not come for those wondering, as the stagehand answers the question asked of him in a very flat, matter-of-fact tone.
Stagehand: I saw him going into one of the dressing rooms earlier. Straight down the hall, last door on the right. It’s not being used tonight, so it’s completely empty.
Charlotte King: Sounds like his modus operandi alright. Thanks for the help.
Charlotte quickly walks down the hall now, the cameraman slowly following behind her. She eventually comes to the last door on the right; however she notices that the door is shut tight. This is different than normal, as The Scorpion is known for leaving the door ajar when he enters an empty room. Charlotte takes note of this as she turns towards the cameraman.
Charlotte King: This is different from normal. You think maybe he’s still in pain and doesn’t want to be disturbed?
The cameraman seemingly shrugs off the question, so Charlotte walks forward and grabs the handle of the door. She pushes it down, but does not push the door open. She gets a look of concern on her face, but also has worrisome thoughts flowing through her mind. What if he wants to be alone? How will he react to being interrupted? Should I take the hint and not push my luck?
Eventually, she seemingly decides to leave well enough alone and lets go of the handle. She slowly backs away from the door now and turns towards the cameraman once more.
Charlotte King: He obviously doesn’t want to be disturbed, so I guess I should just let him be. I’m sure he’s fine. He gets weird like this all the time.
That said, Charlotte now turns away and walks down the hall. The cameraman quickly turns back to the door and simply focuses on the door for a few seconds before finally fading to black…
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Post by Jason Freeman on Sept 21, 2010 2:13:05 GMT -5
It's coming... Don't try to fight it... Next week on ACW Claude Le Batard brings life to your screen... Sit back in your seat and get ready for...
A Minute with Claude!
A show bringing you the most exciting thoughts from the mind of the future Main Event...
Next week...
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Post by Jason Freeman on Sept 21, 2010 2:15:50 GMT -5
Segment: Some Good Luck (Credit: Freeman)
…: So then I told him…if THAT’S how it’s gonna be then GET OUTTA MY LOCKER-ROOM! And then I like threw…like…a shoe at him. And he ran away, of course. And THAT’S why BK London is NOT gonna be my tag team partner against Thiago…
We resume with Trace and Greg deep in conversation already, and Trace seems to be in the middle of a story – or an excuse more likely.
Greg: ...You’re telling me that THAT’S why you don’t have a tag partner yet like you promised?
Trace: Well, that and I was GONNA ask Thunderkiss, but I haven’t seen him around for like…three weeks.
Greg: So basically…you forgot all about the whole thing, and now wanted to make it look like you did something so that way I wouldn’t call you lazy?
Trace: Er…well…um…NO! No…that’s not what happened at all? That all really happened!
Greg: I highly doubt BK London begged you to sign him an autograph.
Trace: …Okay, um…well…that part didn’t EXACTLY happen…but---
Greg doesn't wait as he instantly cuts Trace off
Greg: In fact why would BK London be in your locker-room at all, he hasn’t even been in the ACW building in months…
Trace: Well…I---
Greg: And I doubt BK London is afraid of a shoe---
Trace: ALRIGHT, GREG FINE! MAYBE I MADE A LITTLE BIT OF IT UP!
Greg: A little?
Trace: 99% OF IT!!!
Greg: 99%?
Trace: Yes, Greg. YES! 99%! HA! You thought I made it all up but I DIDN’T! I DID see BK London and there WAS an autograph involved! The only difference was that I was getting HIS autograph and it wasn’t in my locker-room but at a BK London autograph signing! Oh…and…er…he didn’t greet me with “OH MY GOD ARE YOU TRACE BIRMINGHAM” but with…”Who the hell is Trace Birmingham?” But…um….yeah….
Greg: ...So we’ll say 99.5% of it.
Trace: …Yeah…But HEY…I don’t NEED a tag team partner anymore, so it’s fine!
Greg: What happened to your ‘brilliant’ plan?
Trace: Oh that’s over. THAT’S BEFORE I CAME INTO THE GREATEST LUCK I’VE EVER COME INTO IN MY WHOLE LIFE!
Greg: Besides being born into the money to get yourself a manager talented enough to help you lie and deceive your way into a job with a huge wrestling company?
Trace takes a moment to think.
Trace: Well….hmm…that was kinda lucky…but DON’T FORGET GREG THAT MY WRESTLING CAREER IN MEXICO HELPED ME GET THIS JOB!
Greg: We made that up, remember?
Trace: …
Greg: You know…you even edited the Wikipedia article yourself…
Trace: …
Greg: …
Trace: …Oh, yeah. Well, still, I STILL GOT THE SECOND LUCKIEST THING TO EVER HAPPEN TO ME, ALL I NEED TO DO IS FIND THE CHAIRMAN! But where could he be!
Greg: Maybe right there?
Trace: NO GREG THAT’S---Oh, Hey Hawthorne!
Hawthorne was indeed right there, coming down the hall
Hawthorne: Er…hey…um….Er…Tr—Tr---
Trace: Trace, boss! Trace! ^_^
Hawthorne: Right, right.
Trace: Welpa, I’m here to take it!
Hawthorne: Take…it…?
Trace: Yup!
Hawthorne: It?
Trace: It!
Hawthorne: ...What are you talking about?
Trace: The Entertainment Title of course!!!!!!!
Hawthorne: …
Greg: …
Trace: …
Hawthorne: …
Greg: …
Trace: …
Hawthorne: …
Greg: …
Trace: …
Hawthorne: …
Greg: …
Trace: …?
Hawthorne + Greg: WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT??!!!
The stunned silence is broken instantly and Trace seems confused.
Trace: Er…yeah! You just took the title away from Taylor right? Well, relax, boss! Now I’m here to fix the problem for you! You need a new Entertainment Champion, and now that the belt’s vacant it’s up for grabs right? I’ll be the new champ!
Greg: Trace, what are you---
Trace turns to Greg and whispers
Trace: SHH…Greg, I’m an expert negotiationer, this is gonna go awesome
Hawthorne: Why do YOU deserve the belt?
Trace: Um…duh…because I’m the first one who asked! That means I’m the first one who wanted it! That means I’m like…a dedicated champ! The kind you need! And I’m also likeable, charming, popular, strong, amazing, and the #1 merchandise seller in Pangea!
Greg: *Whispers* Pangea??
Trace: *Whispers* I needed a country that’s really like….obscene.
Greg: *Whispers* Obscure?!
Trace: *Whispers* Yeah, one that he’d never look up! It was that or---
Hawthorne: …No. That’s not happening.
Trace: BUT ACW NEEDS TRACE BIRMINGHAM AS ENTERTAINMENT CHAMPION! You know, I know...we ALL know. We’re like TOTALLY on the same page, boss, and I know that. I mean we always are! Like…I thought Ginger was a cool guy, but you’re WAY cooler a guy than him. You deserve an award or something, anybody ever tell you that?
Hawthorne: I must say, not often.
Trace: THEY SHOULD! And er…you know what else?
Hawthorne: What?
Trace: Er…your…er…hair!
Hawthrone: …What about it?
Trace: It’s uh…really awesome.
Hawthorne: …Thanks?
Trace: SO THEN HOW ABOUT IT?!
Hawthorne: …Nah. Maybe if you’re lucky you’ll get a chance, but how about you win a match first?
Trace: Oh easy! I’ve won a match once!
Greg: No you haven’t
Trace: Shut it, Greg! Fine…boss…just uh…remember this! I’ll be back like…next week and then we can talk about it again after you’ve had some time to sleep on it!
Hawthorne: My decision is final…
Trace: Yeah, but just in case, you never know when you can change your mind!
Hawthorne: I won’t
Trace: Yes, you PROBABLY won’t, but---
Hawthorne: I definitely won’t
Trace: Right, I know, there’s a VERY HIGH PROSSIBILIBY that you won’t…
Hawthorne: Trace, I am NOT going to change my mind
Trace: Right but IF you do, and like…you just HAPPEN to decide that---
Hawthorne: TRACE, GO AWAY OR YOU’RE FIRED!
Trace: Er…um….okay! Got it! I can do that! See ya boss….cmon Greg…
And Trace and Greg leave down the hallway
Trace: ...That didn’t work…
Greg: No kidding…
Trace: …So about that tag partner.
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Post by Jason Freeman on Sept 21, 2010 2:16:39 GMT -5
Main Event: Senator Steve Phillips vs. Chris Phenomenal (Credit: Senator)
Maxwell McNally: And now, we have a heck of a main event! Senator Steve Phillips of Ascendancy and Chris Phenomenal of the Dogs of War are about to face off in a rematch for the ages.
"Fast" Eddie Edison: If this is anywhere near as good as that six man tag the other week, we're in for a treat! Old Man Phillips has revived his career for the billionth time, and Chris Phenomenal made his return to ACW with friends in tow and a mighty chip on his shoulder!
McNally: The history between these two cannot be discounted, both share quite a bit of respect, even if they both have very deep differences. Phenomenal, though, is not the man he was over the last few months, and seems rededicated to his career.
Edison: Even if he's not back up to his full power, CP is one of the most dangerous men in ACW! His size and power coupled with excellent speed and a bit of technical knowledge make him a tough foe for anyone. Senator Phillips, though, knows his game inside out, having mentored him for a good while, and he's as tough and stubborn as they come, even if his once legendary endurance isn't what it once was!
McNally: As we see, Steve Phillips is already in the ring, and Chris Phenomenal is making his way down, and he is...
At that moment, several men jump the guard barrier, blindsiding Chris Phenomenal and knocking him to the ground.
Edison: It's Ascendancy! Ryan Cole, his bodyguard Dominic Campbell...and there's Freeman, with the belt over his shoulder!
Sure enough, Jason Freeman directs traffic, as Cole and Campbell take CP by either arm, and run him into the barrier. Phenomenal gets up, only for Cole to knock him in the jaw with a right hand. Campbell throws a kick to the midsection, and the two continue stomping their foe against the barrier. CP, though, is not easily contained, and throws both men off, shrugging off punches from each, and bullrushing Cole into the opposite barrier. Bouncing off from the impact, Phenomenal catches Campbell and starts to run him into the other side when...
Edison: What a nasty shot with the ACW World Heavyweight Title! Freeman nearly decapitated Chris Phenomenal!
CP's own momentum and forward movement colliding with the belt in mid-run allow for a tremendous impact. In the ring, RAF calls for the bell, gesturing to the ring announcer.
Phillip Jones: This bout has been declared a no-contest!
Senator Phillips, already in route to the melee, waves a finger in Freeman's face before he can smash CP with another belt shot. Campbell and Cole, though, see no problem getting in more attacks...but quickly think better of it.
Edison: And now look what's happening! It's Cross and, yes, it's Big Frank Washington! Man, I love saying his name!
The Dogs of War run down the entrance ramp, scattering the Ascendancy, as Freeman slips past them to the back, Phillips backs off, and Cole follows Campbell back through the crowd.
Although not unscathed, Chris Phenomenal stands up with relative ease, checking for a non-existent cut on his forehead before sending a ferocious glare in the direction of the ACW Heavyweight champ, who is currently situated in front of the curtain.
Is this how things end for the night? Well...
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Post by Jason Freeman on Sept 21, 2010 2:37:28 GMT -5
Freeman is breathing heavily, the action of the past few minutes obviously tiring him out, but he has a microphone in his hand and he raises it to his lips.
Freeman: No! No! No! This isn't worth it, Phenomenal. What...what...do you think this means anything?! Do you think you got the better of us tonight?! You think that HAWTHORNE got the better of us tonight when he suspended Jon Taylor and stripped him of his championship?! You think that your "Dogs of War" stopping us from making your blood pour from your head means you struck a BLOW to us??!!
Freeman is clearly furious, and when he says this last line the fans begin to react, causing Freeman to turn towards them.
Freeman: SHUT UP! SHUT UP WHILE I'M SPEAKING!
Freeman snarls and breathes heavily once more, but then shakes his head and seems to slowly calm down. He looks up at Chris Phenomenal, his eyes calm. Apparently, while he had lost control of himself for a small while he had now regained it. He is the cold, calculating, world champion that he has always been.
Freeman: Phenomenal. You forced your way into a championship match I had no intention of giving you. You attempted to assemble a force that you THOUGHT could possibly match up to Ascendancy's might! Well, Chris, I could march down to that ring right now, and we could settle this right here. I could march down to that ring and Ryan Cole and Dominic Campbell could step in there and we could find out which of our stables is indeed the stronger. But I am not going to do that, Phenomenal, because I have bigger fish to fry. You see, I've ALREADY proved my superiority tonight. I have somebody backstage right now, and I think the footage shall speak for itself.
Freeman points up, as the Alphatron suddenly springs to life. The crowd is confused. What after all, could Freeman be talking about? A quick glance at Chris Phenomenal's face shows that he is thinking the same thing. Whatever he thought was going to go down tonight, this was not it. What makes it even more confusing is that the camera doesn’t seem to be focused on anything of any particular interest. In fact it is just a generic hallway. There is literally not a soul in sight, and certainly no signs of anything Freeman could possibly want to show. The camera moves down this hallway, still focused on nobody, until it suddenly comes to a halt and begins to turn, and the audience sees a door. And suddenly some of the pieces begin to come together.
The crowd mumbles amongst themselves, confusion rising amongst some, and clarity beginning to show amongst others. And suddenly certain pieces start to fall together for some of the quicker members in the crowd. Freeman’s speech at the beginning of the show about a show of Ascendancy's dominance by the end of the night, and his promise to show his contender…what The Senator had said while Ascendancy had blood on their hands…and Charlotte appearing at this very door earlier. There had been no answer…And suddenly a hand reaches forward and opens the closed door of The Scorpion's locker room. The room is dark, but soon a light switch is turned on, and a gasp goes through the ACW crowd as they see what lies there.
McNally: Oh my god...
The camera focuses on the lifeless form that lies face up on the ground in the middle of the room. A pool of blood surrounds the motionless Scorpion, and a significant percentage of the audience cringes at the brutality that has obviously been dealt onto The Scorpion. Scorpion was a proud and determined warrior, but it seemed that despite his drive and strength, the numbers game had been too much, and the consequences had been dire. Scorpion has not just been beaten down but demolished and destroyed, the handiwork of Ascendancy. What Freeman had promised at the beginning of the show had come to fruition.
The arena sits in a daze as the camera shot lingers, and as people now realize Scorpion's plight, soon the medics begin filtering in quickly looking to attend to the man who had obviously been left laying for quite some time. Scorpion still does not stir, and the camera zooms back to the faces of those in the arena. Jason Freeman fixes his gaze upon Chris Phenomenal, and very slowly, he begins to raise his World Championship into the air. Phenomenal raises his eyes towards the tron to see the bloody warrior surrounded by medics, and then Phenomenal fixes his gaze upon Freeman.
Freeman's point has been made tonight, and the camera focuses over Phenomenal's shoulder, the last shot that meets the ACW viewers' eyes is the staredown between Chris Phenomenal and Jason Freeman. The shot of Jason Freeman standing on the entrance ramp, championship held high, and a lifeless Scorpion left in a pool of his own blood on the tron behind him.
End of show.
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Post by Jason Freeman on Sept 21, 2010 2:43:46 GMT -5
welp, slightly longer show than the last few, though still missing a few guys that I hope are merely taking some time off due to school. But its an upswing nevertheless, and hopefully we get back to the third page before too long. Anyways, the Ascendancy seg at the top of the second page has yet to be edited by me, but I shall be editing it tomorrow. I can't do it at the moment however. I hope to return to more regular feedback in the future, and Im sorry Ive missed it recently.
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Post by Claude LeBatard on Sept 21, 2010 4:06:52 GMT -5
Nice show guyz. I don't believe Taylor's been suspended =O But then again, it does leave a gap for someone to fill... I'm sure the show will be even better once I find out my match result <____<
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Post by Buddy Ghee on Sept 21, 2010 16:55:39 GMT -5
Gonna shoot mine off.
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Post by Jason Freeman on Sept 22, 2010 17:02:40 GMT -5
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Post by Claude LeBatard on Sept 22, 2010 17:05:12 GMT -5
Awesome match by Buddy there, totally worth the wait.
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Post by Buddy Ghee on Sept 22, 2010 19:37:06 GMT -5
Thanks. I was trying to make it longer. I finally realized the problem: the resolution on my monitor makes short amounts of text look like long droves, in the box on the board.
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