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Post by Jason Freeman on Jul 27, 2010 22:29:07 GMT -5
A Meeting [/center][/color] credit: Rena Saturday, July 24, 2010 - 17:46 She was 46 minutes late, but that was all part of her plan. He deserved to wait- Rena Matheson is not one to be pushed around and told when to be where. For the last 46 minutes Rena had been sitting in her car, parked in the parking lot of Hawthorne’s office building. She guessed it was long enough, and clicked the keys back before pulling them out and placing them in her purse. The radio stopped playing as she opened her car door and made her way towards the door.
She wanted to be prepared for the ensuing conversation she would be having, and so from her walk to the building, inside the building and the ride in the elevator, Rena thought about what would and could be said and how she would respond to it. Knowing Hawthorne, he would try to throw something at her- but she would be prepared before he even had the chance.
As the elevator dinged and the doors slid open, Rena stepped out into the gorgeously decorated foyer. As she looked to her left, she saw a receptionist talking on the phone. Her heels clicked on the marble floor as she came towards the reception desk, alerting the receptionist to take notice of the woman approaching. Slamming the phone down, the receptionist game Rena and questioning look.GENEVIEVEHello … RENA:I’m here to see Samuel Hawthorne. GENEVIEVE: OH NO YOU DON’T! Genevieve jumped out of her chair and threw her arms out, blocking Rena from entering the hallway leading to Hawthorne’s door. RENA:What are you doing? GENEVIEVE:I’ve already got in shit today for letting someone into his office, I’m not making that mistake again! RENA:Move. GENEVIEVE:NEVER! All it took was a simple shove to move Genevieve out of the way so that Rena could begin her short journey to Hawthorne’s door. Genevieve gasped at the horror that may happen if Rena were to reach the door, and so for her career she threw her heels off and started to bolt towards her. Hurling herself, Genevieve tackled Rena to the floor with a big grunt. Rena slammed against the marble floor, rolling to get Genevieve off her back. It was no use, there was no budging. As she laid on her back with Genevieve on top of her, Rena freed a hand and slapped her across the face, prompting Genevieve to shriek and pull on a handful of Rena’s hair. After a few moments of rolling, pushing, slapping, biting and hair-pulling, a door opened up suddenly. HAWTHORNE:WHAT is with all the noise out- GENEVIEVE: She was trying to get into your office. I was just stopping her from reaching it. HAWTHORNE:Genevieve, this is Miss Rena Matheson. The woman you spoke on the phone with. The woman you made an appointment with to see me. GENEVIEVE: OH! Oh my God, I’m so sorry. I-I- HAWTHORNE:Kindly get up off of Miss Matheson and return to your desk. GENEVIEVE:Yes, sir. Oh my God, I’m so- HAWTHORNE:I think you’ve done enough for one day, Genevieve, thank you. Genevieve shot up and ran to her desk as if she were on fire, Hawthorne helping Rena up off the floor. He gave her an amused smile as she straightened herself and looked at him in return with an annoyed look.HAWTHORNE:I am so sorry that happened to you, Miss Matheson. RENA:Stupid bitch, that’s what you get for hiring someone from the Valley. HAWTHORNE:Now, now. Genevieve is a bright young woman- she was simply learning from her past mistakes. Although, she created a new one from the one she was attempting to correct … RENA:AH! She ripped my skirt! That fucking- HAWTHORNE:Please come inside my office, Miss Matheson. Rena sighed in anger as Hawthorne gestured for her to enter and get comfortable. As she looked to her left, she saw a drink waiting at the fireplace for her. He smiled, sitting down in his own chair, and made another gesture for her to drink.HAWTHORNE:Please, enjoy a drink. If I remember correctly, Brandy is your pick of poison. RENA:No it’s not, but I’ll drink it anyways. HAWTHORNE:It’s not? Well, now I’m embarrassed. I completely thought it was. What is yours, then? RENA:Did you bring me here to talk about my tastes in alcoholic beverages? HAWTHORNE:No, I- RENA:Then how about we cut the small talk and get to why I’m standing here right now. HAWTHORNE:All in good time, my dear, all in good time. Now, I hear you’re married now. Congratulations are in order! He’s a very lucky man, Miss Matheson. Now, do you still go by Miss Matheson? I assume you’ve kept your maiden na- RENA:Samuel, I am not discussion my marriage with you. Can you please just get to the fucking point? HAWTHORNE:Language, Miss Matheson. We are both civilized and educated human beings. Surely if I can refrain from using such foul speech, you can as well. Now, where are you living these day- RENA:Oh For God’s Sake, Hawthorne! Just out with it, please. HAWTHORNE:Rena, this is why I called you here. RENA:… what are you talking about? HAWTHORNE:I called you to have a little catch-up. We haven’t spoken in such a long time and I wanted to contact you to see where your head was at. How you were feeling about things. RENA:Why? HAWTHORNE:Because recently, things have come to light that have made me question your loyalties and- RENA:So Mainer came to see you. HAWTHORNE:Yes, Mainer certainly did come to me … just *checks clock* just shy of three hours ago. And when he did come to me, he had some very interesting things to say- RENA:I think I already know what he said. HAWTHORNE:Ah, yes, you probably are well aware of what he told me. Now, I’m here to offer you something. RENA:An offer? HAWTHORNE:Simply put, Miss Matheson, you’re playing with fire. Now, you can join this company and work with us … or it can be war between us. Now, let me remind you that entering war with me is something you might want to consider at length. RENA:*laughs* Consider at length? Are you kidding me? HAWTHORNE:Certainly not. Entering into something like this takes numbers and smarts. And you may have smarts but I highly doubt you have numbers. Now- RENA:I don’t need numbers. I can take you out myself. HAWTHORNE:I highly doubt that. But at any rate, I would like an answer. RENA:*smiles* An answer? You want an answer. HAWTHORNE:Yes, Rena, preferably in this century now. RENA:Fine … WAR [fade]
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Post by Jason Freeman on Jul 27, 2010 22:31:12 GMT -5
MATCH 5 Scorpion vs Chris Phenomenal (Credit: Scorpion)
McNally: Well ladies and gentlemen; we have arrived at our main event. For the past several weeks, we have seen a different side of the man known as Chris Phenomenal. He has become a sick, demented, borderline psychotic man. Why? According to him, it all has to do with the bizarre individual known as The Scorpion.
Edison: That’s right McNally. The Scorpion has been as weird as ever lately, not fighting back against the brutal beatings Chris Phenomenal has dished out. But that had best change tonight, because they finally meet face-to-face, one-on-one.
The festivities begin as the lights in the arena go out and "The Human Stain" by Kamelot begins to play over the speakers. The darkness is cut off when two spotlights shine on the left portion of the stage, uniting at a specific point. With the lights shining, The Scorpion rises from the stage while kneeling in prayer as the song continues to play throughout the arena…only for Chris Phenomenal to burst through the curtain and nail him with a stiff kick to the back of the head! Scorpion rolls forward from the blow, but that doesn’t help as Chris tackles him in the aisle way and begins throwing stiff right hands to the face! However, once again Scorpion refuses to fight back, simply enduring the blows as Chris grabs him by his hair and throws him hard into the apron. Scorpion doesn’t react despite the pain, so Chris quickly grabs him and hurls him hard into the steel steps! With this done, Chris quickly throws Scorpion into the ring and begins to stomp away at him.
McNally: I have never seen Chris Phenomenal like this before! The Scorpion has never had the chance to even mount an offense!
Edison: But he’s had plenty of time to mount a DEFENSE McNally, yet he still doesn’t fight back!
Chris continues the brutal stomps to Scorpion’s face and head, before quickly dragging him up, shooting him into the ropes, and rattling the ring with a vicious spinebuster! The Scorpion still doesn’t utter a single sound of pain as Chris once again begins kicking away at his exposed body, ripping off his trench coat and dropping repeated knees to the ribs. Chris throws the coat across the ring and screams at his adversary as Scorpion once again fights to his feet. He doesn’t stay upright for long however, as Chris quickly charges and puts him down once again with a vicious running elbow smash to the face! The Scorpion is down and hurting, so Chris quickly walks over and grabs his trench coat. He goes to hurl it out of the ring, but quickly stops when a single white rose falls out of one of the pockets and softly lands on the canvas.
McNally: Anyone who has watched ACW programming for the last few months knows that the white rose is the symbol of The Scorpion. No surprises here that one is in his coat pocket.
Edison: But look at the effect it’s having on Chris Phenomenal!
Edison is shown to be right, as Chris gets an absolutely frightening look of complete rage on his face at the sight of the flower on the canvas. He looks over and notices that Scorpion has quietly maneuvered himself into a neutral corner and has risen to his feet with the assistance of the ropes. Seeing this, Chris quickly spits in anger and glares at Scorpion before raising his foot and stomping the rose with all his might. He grinds his heel into the mat, making sure to reduce the flower to pieces. However, this seems to have an alarming effect on the Scorpion, whose eyes grow wide in a bizarre combination of anger and sorrow. Then, out of nowhere, The Scorpion utters an ear-piercing scream of anger that quickly frightens almost everyone in the arena. Even Chris is slightly taken aback by the suddenness of the wail…and it costs him as The Scorpion sprints across the ring at full speed and floors him with a vicious Yakuza Kick to the face! The Scorpion screams in rage once again as he throws stiff soccer kicks to the ribs of Chris Phenomenal, his eyes wide and pupils dilated, as if he’s lost all control! Chris scrambles to get away and get to his feet, but The Scorpion doesn’t relent as he quickly charges and takes Chris down with a stiff tackle. He gets the mounted position and starts raining down elbow strikes to Chris’s unprotected face, still screaming like a maniac the entire time! Chris finally kicks him off, but as he gets to his feet Scorpion charges and hits a monster spear, taking him down once again!
McNally: Look at The Scorpion! He’s like a man possessed! Where in the world has this been the past few weeks!?
Edison: He’s like some deranged lunatic at a mental asylum! Apparently seeing that stupid rose get destroyed was the straw that broke the camel’s back! This is crazy!
The Scorpion again fires away with stiff elbows to Chris’s face, obviously trying to bust him open! Chris once again kicks him away and scrambles to his feet, only for Scorpion to once again run in for a spear! However, this time Chris is ready as he casually sidesteps and quickly kicks upward, striking Scorpion dead in the unprotected face! The Scorpion only drops to one knee, but it doesn’t help him as Chris quickly bounces off the ropes and hits a SICKENING running knee dead to the nose! The Scorpion topples backwards and grabs at his face, just barely managing to avoid a kneedrop to the head! He gets to his feet and finally moves his hand, but it is a brutal sight to behold. The Scorpion’s nose is quite clearly broken, with blood splattered all over his face and his nose very nearly touching the side of his cheekbone. Some members of the crowd gasp in horror at the sight, but the shock turns to fear as The Scorpion actually smiles at the sight of his own blood and begins to laugh like a maniac. He loudly bellows a frightening, borderline hysterical laughter, which continues even as Chris gets to his feet and hits him with another running elbow to the face!
McNally: This is insane! The Scorpion’s nose has got to be broken and the guy laughs!?!?
Edison: He’s NUTS McNally! Hell, I say they’re BOTH out of their godforsaken minds!
Chris waits for Scorpion to get up and starts peppering him with combination punches, ending with a hard discus punch that puts his opponent down once again! The Scorpion again gets up quickly, so Chris bounces off the ropes and looks for a big running lariat. However, Scorpion rolls under it to avoid the blow! Chris stops and tries to turn around, but the brief moment costs him as Scorpion charges and returns the favor with his own running elbow smash to the face! Chris doesn’t go down to the mat, but probably wishes he had as he falls backwards into the ropes, getting his arms tangled in the process! The referee struggles to free him as Chris screams in anger for him to hurry as The Scorpion calmly walks towards him with a smirk on his face. With Chris tied up, The Scorpion now begins to unleash a very fast volley of hard, stiff kicks to the chest and ribs. Over and over Scorpion hits Chris’s unprotected torso with full force Muay Thai kicks, turning his skin a dark and crimson red! The referee finally frees Chris from the ropes, but it doesn’t help as Chris falls forward from the momentum and eats a Muay Thai kick straight to the face! The Scorpion now seemingly remembers that this battle is indeed a sanctioned match and actually tries to make a pinfall.
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Kickout with authority!
Chris kicks out just barely after the count of one and quickly gets to his feet again, his chest and ribs now turning PURPLE as the blood is drawn towards the damaged area. The Scorpion tries another Yakuza Kick, but this time it’s Chris Phenomenal’s turn to roll under the blow. Chris quickly bounces off the opposite side ropes as Scorpion turns around just in time for Chris to perfectly execute his signature Switch Blade! Scorpion goes down, so Chris tries to make a cover as well.
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McNally: What in God’s name is driving these two men!? The Scorpion has a broken nose and Chris Phenomenal probably has broken ribs, yet they can’t even get a two count!?
Edison: Chris Phenomenal’s torso is as big a mess as The Scorpion’s nose! These two are killing each other out there!
Both men get to their feet around the same time and being throwing punches, but Scorpion gets the upper hand when he dodges Chris’s punch and quickly grabs a full nelson! He looks for what appears to be a dragon suplex, but Phenomenal shows how sick he is by throwing his head directly backwards into Scorpion’s already broken nose!! The Scorpion can’t fight the pain this time and winces in pain, but this action costs him as Chris quickly grabs him and hits a quick atomic drop before transitioning directly into a complete shot, completing the Harlem Hurt! Chris sizes up his adversary now and tries to hit a running face kick, but Scorpion dodges the blow and manages to grab a waist lock as Chris goes by! Chris tries the backwards headbutt again, but this time Scorpion dodges and spikes Chris on his head with a release German Suplex! However, Chris Phenomenal quickly gets back to his feet and screams in anger before charging forward and turning Scorpion for a 360 with a brutal running lariat! However, this time it is SCORPION that gets up quickly and shakes with rage before nailing the stunned Chris Phenomenal with a lightning fast spinning backfist to the face! However, the adrenaline leaves him and Scorpion now collapses to the mat nearby as well, resulting in both me being down and out!
McNally: This is an absolute war! How in God’s name are these men getting up so quickly!?
Edison: I’ve seen wild animals more docile than these two McNally! This damn thing might go all night!
Both men get to their feet relatively quickly once again, but each is showing signs of the brutality. The Scorpion quickly wipes away the blood resulting from his broken nose while Chris winces in pain as he grabs at his welted, discolored torso. However, once the two lock eyes they seemingly forget the pain and the battle continues. Scorpion throws a spinning heel kick, only for Chris to duck under it. However, Scorpion somehow adjusts in mid-air and LANDS ON HIS FEET, recovering from the miss without even hitting the canvas! As the crowd roars in approval, their being impressed does nothing to deter Chris Phenomenal, who quickly blasts Scorpion with a stiff European uppercut! Scorpion bounces off the ropes and comes forward again, so Chris repeats the move and nails him once again! He grabs Scorpion and tries a suplex, only for Scorpion to counter the move and try for his own. However, Chris shows his training well, as he utilizes his patented Spiral Sweep to counter out of the move! As Scorpion hits the canvas, Chris wastes no time as he immediately grabs a headlock and spikes Scorpion with the Headlock Driver!
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Post by Jason Freeman on Jul 27, 2010 22:31:43 GMT -5
Chris is stunned at Scorpion kicking out of a signature move so quickly and immediately complains to the referee! However, this costs him dearly as Scorpion gets up and fires another stiff kick to the ribs! The blow doubles Chris over in pain, so Scorpion grabs him quickly and plants him with the Lament of Innocence!
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Now it is Scorpion’s turn to be stunned, as Chris Phenomenal seemingly brushes off one of HIS trademark moves! The Scorpion tries a second Lament of Innocence, but stops the momentum with a quick elbow to the head and puts him down with a jumping bulldog! Scorpion is seemingly stunned from the blow, so Chris waits for him to get up and measures him. He throws a Buzzsaw Kick, but Scorpion ducks under it and sweeps Chris’s legs from under him! The Scorpion tries to throw another soccer kick to the ribs, but Chris rolls forward and dodges! Chris gets to his feet as Scorpion looks for a running palm strike, but Chris counters with an elbow smash to the broken nose!! The Scorpion winces back in pain, allowing Chris the time to execute an inverted headlock backbreaker! However, this proves to be a mistake, as the impact hurts Chris’s injured ribs! The Scorpion rolls away and gets to his feet quickly, but as he charges for a lariat, Chris throws one of his own! They each connect and both men go down again, once again sending the crowd into a frenzy!
McNally: I have never seen anything like this in my entire life fans! These two men are inhuman taking this much punishment!
Edison: We haven’t even seen a TWO COUNT McNally! I told you! This is going all night long!
Both men get to their feet again at roughly the same time and Scorpion is the first to make a move by throwing a huge roundhouse kick, looking for the knockout blow! However, Chris ducks under it and out of nowhere throws the Superman Punch! But Scorpion manages to avoid Chris’s knockout blow as well, ducking to the side and grabbing another waist lock! He tries another German, but Chris manages to elbow out and try an Aztec Suplex of his own! However, Scorpion counters this by catching Chris off guard with the same backwards headbutt he used earlier! Chris is stunned from the blow, so Scorpion tries to end it right now and hooks him up for the Eliminator!! But AGAIN there is a counter, this time via Chris Phenomenal elbowing Scorpion in the face, again hitting the broken nose! Scorpion drops Chris and winces in pain again, so Chris hits him with an elevated dropkick! Chris measures Scorpion as he gets to his feet and charges in for another lariat, but Scorpion counters with rolling crescent kick to the injured ribs! Scorpion grabs Chris now and looks for the Eternus Moestitia, but Chris counters with another Spiral Sweep! Scorpion is stunned again, so Chris looks to end it and tries the Filibuster! But Scorpion once again counters his adversary, hitting a knee to the injured ribs! Chris doubles over in pain, so Scorpion grabs him and finally hits the Eternes Moestitia!
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Kickout!
The Scorpion sits up with a look of complete disbelief on his face, as even his signature spinning Brainbuster can only get a one count on Chris Phenomenal. The Scorpion gets a grimace on his face and begins shaking with rage, obviously about to explode once again. Chris finally sits up, so Scorpion takes advantage of the situation by bouncing off the ropes and hitting a SICK running knee to the face, trying to break Chris Phenomenal’s nose just like he broke his! Scorpion doesn’t appear to succeed though, as Chris just barely manages to get a hand up to divert some of the pressure. Sensing the moment, Scorpion looks to end it and once again tries the Eliminator! However, Chris quickly realizes where he is in the ring and grabs the ropes to stop the momentum, eventually sliding off Scorpion’s shoulders to the apron! Scorpion turns to grab him, but Chris uses the ropes to pendulum himself into a kick, once again hitting Scorpion in the damaged face. Scorpion slumps over in pain, so Chris runs to the corner and quickly heads up top. He waits for Scorpion to turn around and flies off with a flying clothesline, hitting the Harlem Heights and looking for the win!
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McNally: I give up! This match won’t have a winner until one of these men is dead!
Edison: I’m surprised one of them isn’t dead already McNally! These two guys look like they’ve been in a car accident!
Chris is shocked at his signature move only obtaining a one count just as Scorpion was earlier, but he doesn’t let it deter him as he measures Scorpion for the Superman Punch! He waits for Scorpion to get to his feet and throws the punch, only for Scorpion to again roll away! Scorpion tries another Yakuza Kick, but Chris rolls away from it as well! With Scorpion turning from the kick, Chris now springs up out of a crouch and throws the Superman Punch! However, Scorpion sees it coming and at the last second adjusts his stance and throws a Muay Thai kick towards the head! Time seems to stop as the two blows come closer to connecting, eventually resulting in a sickening noise as the two blows connect simultaneously! The crowd reacts with excitement, but it is unknown to either The Scorpion or Chris Phenomenal. Chris’s Superman Punch lands directly in the Scorpion’s unprotected face, quickly knocking him unconscious. However, at the exact same moment, Scorpion’s kick connects dead on with Chris Phenomenal’s jaw, putting him to sleep as well. Both men lie unconscious in the ring as the referee begins his normal count.
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McNally: They’re both out! Neither man will make this count!
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Edison: There’s no movement! They’ve given everything there is to give!!
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The crowd begins booing loudly at the thought of a draw without a decisive winner, but the boos fall on deaf ears as the referee makes his mandatory final count.
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With that count, the referee is forced to signal for the bell and declare the contest a draw since both men are unconscious and unable to continue. The crowd boos the announcement of the decision; however such a decision is unavoidable under the circumstances. Another thing unavoidable, however, is the inevitably rematch between the two men, who will not stop until one man is clearly acknowledged as the best…
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Post by Jason Freeman on Jul 27, 2010 22:32:21 GMT -5
Segment: Contract Negotiations, Part 2 (Credit: Freeman)
Hawthorne: And in addition, since being under contract, your client has not won a single match. He has also shown himself to be basically inept inside of a ring, and we have reason to believe that he was signed under false pretenses. It was believed he was a major star in Japan. I suppose after reading that he was the “ABDOXRW champion” we should have suspected, but even I have to admit that Japanese federations tend to be quite strange. It seems however that he is not so talented as you led him to be. Therefore I would like to hereby release Trace Birmingham from his---
Trace: WAIIIIIIIIIT!
Everybody spins around to see Trace entering the room, an Asian man behind him
Trace: Oh yeah? I’m signed under false pretends? Well THIS MAN BEGS TO DIFFER!
Trace sits down grinning next to Greg, who stares at him wide-eyed. The two whisper to each other, so that the others cannot hear
Greg: What?!
Trace: It’s a Japanese guy!
Greg: …
Trace: I told him he’s the owner of Awesome Japanese Pro Wrestling…and he’s gonna talk about how great I am!
Greg: You sure he’s Japanese?
Trace: Well…no…I think he’s Chinese or something but it’s all from the same country anyways right?
Greg: 0_0
Trace: Plus there was a Chinese restaurant right across the street, and they don’t HAVE Japanese restaurants DO they Greg?
Hawthorne: Er…what’s your name?
Chinese guy: My name is Tom.
Trace: Grr….he’s gonna ruin this! That’s not Japanese enough!
Trace yells out suddenly
Trace: And Tom is short for Tomuno Wajarlaki!
Hawthorne: Er…what?
Trace: That’s his name! Right Tom?
Tom: Er…yes!
Hawthorne: And why are you here…er…Tom?
Tom: Because this man worked for my wrestling company for 10 years!
Trace: Yes! See Greg? He’s rocking it already! But…he sounds so American! I thought he was gonna sound Japanese? Maybe I should tell him to use a Japanese voice…you think?
Greg: I think it’s a little late for that. How did you get him to do this? Trace: Um…duh, Greg. Money! I hope he remembers what I told him!
Everybody stares in shock at Tom.
Hawthorne: He did?
Tom: Yeah, sure! Awesome…er…Japanese…Pro Wrestling.
Hawthorne: Took you a long time to think of the name, hm?
Trace: Well you see boss, it takes him a long time to remember how to say it in English! That’s just a translation!
Hawthorne: Oh, really. And in “your” company Tom, was Trace here a valuable superstar?
Tom: Oh yeah! Very valuable! He won every one of his wrestling matches! He held the championship for over three years, and he only lost it to Naki Manasaki due to a bad call from the referee!
Trace: Maki Nanasaki! Maki Nanasaki! Greg, he’s saying the name all wrong…
Greg: What’s the difference? Is he even a real person anyways?!
Trace: Well…no…but…I want it done right! He better remember the most important part.
Tom: Oh, and I almost forgot…he also once famously defended his title against a live lion, whom he defeated in approximately 45 seconds by submission.
Trace: Yes, he remembered!
Tom: I mean, he’s a huge hit in Japan. Merchandise. T-shirts. Video games. Comic Books. Toasters. Everything is Trace Birmingham in Japan!
Trace: Oh, and also boss, just wanted to say that there are a LOT of people in Japan!
Greg: Trace, you do know they’re going to ask questions…
Trace: They won’t have time, watch!
Tom: Anyways, I have to go now because I have to go attend the Trace Birmingham appreciation festival. It’s a yearly hit in Japan. If I’m late for the parade I won’t get to sit next to Trace at the table of honor! So anyways, I must be going now, but I just wanted to be sure that Trace would get his contract, because he’s quite the goldmine you’ve got there.
Trace: Yes, Greg, he remembered all his lines!
Hawthorne: …
Greg: …
Trace: Why’s everyone so quiet?
Tom turns to go as the awkward silence continues, holding his hand out towards Trace, who quickly slips many bills into his hand. Tom then exits, as Hawthorne watches in shock.
Trace: So er…wow, what a surprise I happened to run into the guy! Er…in America and everything! Well, now that that’s settled, I’ll just be going now, I know you’re really busy and I don’t wanna like…take up your time. But um…I’ll just take my contract and be going. Come on Greg!
Greg: That's all you had? A two minute pitch?
Hawthorne: Wait one second, Trace.
Trace clenches his fist, and sighs
Trace: So close…
Hawthorne: Did you seriously think that was going to work?
Trace: Er…kinda!
Hawthorne: …That was the strangest, most pathetically desperate thing I’ve ever seen.
Greg: That’s Trace for you…
Hawthorne: I mean you thought you'd resolve a whole negotiation in literally two minutes? THAT'S all you prepared?
Trace: Um...well...what's that phrase thingy...quality not quantity right?
Facepalm from Greg
Hawthorne: Wow. If I can't say it wasn't an interesting try. If you're willing to pay people off the street to vouch for you - if you're THAT desperate - I suppose I might as well keep you around.
Trace: …
Greg: …
Trace can barely believe his ears, and neither can Greg.
Trace: YES! YES! YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES!
Greg: WHAT?!
Trace: I TOLD YOU GREG! I TOLD YOU! YOU DIDN’T THINK I COULD DO IT BUT I DID IT! AGAIN! I’M AN ACW SUPERSTAR AGAIN!
Hawthorne: I mean who knows what other ridiculous things you'd be willing to do when I need you to...
Trace: Oh, anything!
Hawthorne: But as for now....if you’re going to be on the roster you’d better wrestle for it. Tonight’s card is booked up, and perhaps there is something you could be useful for. A match that might get me a LITTLE money at least. At Seven Deadly Sins next month on pay-per-view, you Trace Birmingham will be in a grudge match!
Trace: YES! A GRUDGE MATCH! I’VE ALWAYS WANTED ONE! ON PAY-PER-VIEW! I’M ON PAY-PER-VIEW GREG! PAY-PER-VIEW
Hawthorne: Trace Birmingham vs Thiago Gracie.
Trace: ………………………………………………………..
Trace’s eyes slowly widen….he suddenly breathes heavily as he realizes what has just been said. Then suddenly he throws his hands up and yells out to the sky
Trace: NOOO---
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Post by Jason Freeman on Jul 27, 2010 22:33:11 GMT -5
Segment: The woes of deceit Credit: Jon Taylor
The camera switches to the warm up section of the backstage area. Our focus belongs to the man going through his paces on the mat in the centre of the section, Jon Taylor. He can be seen in his in-ring attire trying to loosen up for his match which is just moments away. He stretches out his hamstrings and leg muscles before moving on to warm up the top half of his body. As he finishes his preparation he slowly makes his way off of the mat and goes to pick up a bottle of water he has placed on the floor. He picks it up and takes several large gulps. He lowers the bottle from his mouth and replaces the cap. As he places it back on the floor, his attention is caught from something out of the corner of his eye - the sight of his girlfriend, Daphne Stewart. She approaches and greets him.
Daphne Stewart: Hey babe, you ready? Tonight the first phase of your march to the top will be completed. The whole of ACW will be forced to accept the truth whether they like it or not!
As Daphne awaits his response Taylor takes his time, examining her carefully before looking her straight in the eyes.
Jon Taylor: The truth,eh? Tonight the people are going to find out the truth are they?
Daphne Stewart: Yes...
Jon Taylor: Oh, good. You see, honey, it was brought to my attention earlier on tonight that another truth is waiting to be revealed. Would you know anything about this?
Daphne seems confused by Taylor as he speaks with a strange tone. It comes off as though he is interrogating her slightly.
Daphne Stewart: I'm sorry babe, I don't follow you - what are you referring to?
Jon Taylor: What am I referring to, honey?
Taylor smirks and shakes his head.
Jon Taylor: I'm referring to just where you went when you left me earlier tonight.
Daphne Stewart: I told you babe, I had to make a few phone calls to former clients back in Beverly--
Taylor's eyes narrow immediately as Daphne comes off less than convincing.
Jon Taylor: Bullshit! Don't bother lying to me Daphne! Have you forgotten where we are? This entire place is filled with cameras and monitors, there is no hiding in the ACW arena. So, are you going to tell me where you went, Daphne.
As Taylor steps closer to her with a look of disgust Daphne appears to be shocked as she offers a reply.
Daphne Stewart: N-no, I don't know what you're on about!
Jon Taylor: Oh? Fine, I've wasted enough time with your stupid games. Look at this.
An increasingly frustrated Taylor grows tired of Daphne and gestures to the monitor positioned to the right of them. It magically turns on, and surprise surprise shows Daphne's earlier visit to Taylor's opponent in mere minutes, TJ. Daphne begins to back away from an incensed Taylor as it comes to an end.
Jon Taylor: It seems honey, that you have an AWFUL lot of explaining to do! So, make it quick because it just so happens I have a title match coming up soon.
Daphne Stewart: Look, calm down Jon! I don't think you're acting rationally at the moment, if you go into the match like this you are going to lose!
Taylor stands over Daphne with a look of disbelief while out of Taylor and Daphne's line of sights the ACW Entertainment Champion, TJ can be seen walking into the section, presumably ready to warm up. However, he stands there observing.
Jon Taylor: Good attempt at changing the subject, Daph, but not good enough. Now stop with all this BULLSHIT and tell me just what the hell you were doing talking to my opponent before our title match tonight!
Daphne Stewart: You want the truth, babe? I was doing it for you! Yes that's right, for you! I was trying to help you win.
Taylor raises an eyebrow.
Jon Taylor: Wait, wait....WAAAIT! Let me get this right, you were talking to my opponent while in fact intending to help ME? Something doesn't quite add up here, honey.
Daphne Stewart: I was trying to get into his mind so he would be distracted, but as you can see from the footage it didn't work. Play it again if you wish, all it is is me warning him about you!
Taylor sighs coming off slightly more relaxed...for now.
Jon Taylor: No, no, I believe you on that. You aren't stupid enough to try and lie to me twice--
Daphne Stewart: Lie to you twice?
Jon Taylor: First of you all, don't ever interrupt me! Secondly, yes, you lied about what you were doing in the first place--
Daphne Stewart: As I said--
As Daphne interrupts Taylor this sets him off again, only this time his anger seems to have risen.
Jon Taylor: I can't believe you Daphne, you have the nerve to stick your nose in MY business and then don't admit you have done ANYTHING wrong! Do you want to know what your little idea earlier tonight did? It not only distracted me from my pre-match meal when Lou the cameraman informed me what was happening, but it made me look like entire mockery to the whole of ACW! I don't think you really know just what damage you have to done to my image. In 5 minutes you managed to make me look as weak as Danny Mainer, as well as making it seem as though i need my woman to take care of, wait for it...MY business! Now, what do you have to say for yourself?!
Daphne is silently defiant as Taylor is losing it.
Daphne Stewart: ...I'm sorry?
Uh-oh, not the best response from Daphne. A frowning Taylor looks like he could spontaneously combust any time.
Jon Taylor: "I'm sorry" is all you have to say for yourself after making me look like a complete idiot?! You know what, honey? Screw this! I have a title to win, with or without you by my side!
An incensed Taylor has clearly had enough as he walks past Daphne, however she grabs a hold of Taylor's arm, not wanting him to go.
Daphne Stewart: Jon!--
Jon Taylor: NO!
As Taylor yanks his arm free with Daphne's grip his force and momentum results in Daphne tumbling forward and falling to the ground. Taylor looks at her but turns away and heads towards the ringside area. With TJ watching on in the shadows in a state of disbelief of what he has just witnessed Daphne picks herself up gingerly and follows Taylor with tears streaming down her face.
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Post by Jason Freeman on Jul 27, 2010 22:33:59 GMT -5
(Save for Snake unless the Yoko seg earlier was the one he was talking about)
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Post by Jason Freeman on Jul 27, 2010 22:36:03 GMT -5
Main event: ACW Entertainment Championship Match (C) TJ Vs Jon Taylor Credit: Jon Taylor The scene changes to ringside where the audience are eagerly the main event contest of the evening, TJ Vs Jon Taylor for the ACW Entertainment Championship. The head ring announcer stands in the centre of the ring ready to introduce the contest.Phillip Jones: Ladies and gentleman, the following contest is scheduled for one fall and is a singles match for the ACW Entertainment Championship. "Revolution Begins" by Arch Enemy hits the P.A system and fills the ringside arena much to the dismay of the fans, to the signal the arrival of the first competitor and challenger in the match.Phillip Jones: Introducing the first challenger. Weighing in at two hundred and thirty pounds, residing in Beverly Hills, California. He is a two-time former ACW International Champion....JON TAYLOR! Taylor steps through the entrance curtain to a world of abuse as he has jeers and boos hurled at him from the get go. He walks out and stops to take in the atmosphere, looking as though he is almost thrilled to be detested by everyone in sight. Wearing a black T-Shirt with "Your Personal Jesus" on along with his ring pants which are black with silver parts he begins to make his way towards the ring. With Daphne now emerging at ringside too, she follows loosely behind. As Taylor walks past furious fans he makes a point to "inform" them of his victory tonight, something which they do not take kindly too. He grins, loving the fact they are so dumb that they to take the bait. One tries to grab Taylor after being on the receiving end of some very controversial words, but thinks twice about it when Taylor raises a fist. As Taylor finally reaches the ring he rolls under the bottom rope with a smirk upon his face. As Daphne watches on from the outside he bounces up onto his feet and proceeds to mock celebrate with his arms raised. As his theme music fades away the boos become more audible, something Taylor continues to enjoy as they slowly die away, waiting for the next announcement.Phillip Jones: Introducing the champion. Weighing in at two hundred and seventy-five pounds, hailing from Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. He is the current ACW Entertainment Champion....TJ! "Hide and Seek" by Nonpoint hits the P.A system to indicate the arrival of the champion, TJ. The crowd come alive as red, white and gold flashes of light fill the arena and TJ spins around with his title belt and crucible in hand. There is look of unmeasured rage upon his face and he wastes no time in making his way down the ring to where the man he has been chasing for the past waits. Taylor bounces off of the ropes, carelessly having fun trying to get into the head of TJ as TJ Hi-Fives a few fans before reaching the ring. He turns and looks at Daphne with a quizzical look before jumping onto the ring edge as the referee holds Taylor back. TJ steps through the ropes and hands his belt and crucible to the referee. The referee lifts the belt above his head before placing it on the outside with the crucible contract case. He returns to the centre of the ring, separating TJ and Taylor who are engaged in a stare down.~Ding~Ding~Ding~ As the bell rings the referee has to almost dive out of the way as both TJ and Jon Taylor attempt to grab the initiative, however this only results in a stalemate as TJ's power is countered by Taylor's technical ability. The pair circle around the ring look for an opportunity, TJ's rage and anger within from what he saw moments ago by Taylor gets the better of him and he charges in, but Taylor the slippery slime he is anticipates this and sidesteps TJ. The pair engages in a bit of smack talk which further infuriates TJ as his opponent has the nerve to almost dance around the ring, avoiding any attack whilst talking shit at the same time. Taylor feints responding with attacks of his own, which only further frustrates TJ. Eventually TJ has enough, wanting nothing more than to put a beating on Taylor he charges forward going for clothesline, however a satisfied Taylor simply sees this coming a mile off from the impatient TJ and sends him crashing onto the bottom rope with a drop toehold! Taylor takes a run up and knee drops TJ on the back for his drops. The crowd boo as TJ falls off the bottom rope and rolls over onto the ring canvas. Maxwell McNally: It seems as though Jon Taylor has taken the initiative thanks to his mind games, Eddie!Eddie Edison: Well it isn't Taylor's fault that TJ is unable to control his rage even now, is it?[/b] With TJ trying to fight his way back to his feet Taylor allows it, but on his terms. TJ is met with a sharp knee to the gut as Taylor spots an opportunity to put some serious offence in. Aware that TJ's strength could cause a problem he begins to wear his opponent down, with some left and rights to the body and head. However, TJ's recovery rate is beginning to become a problem as he sucks up the punishment and replies with some of his own. Taylor resorts to running back and rebounding off the ropes and hitting a kick to the knee to bring his opponent back down to his size. With TJ hunched over he wastes no time grab him by his head and throw him back onto the canvas with a snapmare. The crowd will on TJ as Taylor locks in a reverse chinlock with a knee to the back. As TJ grimaces and tries to ignore the pain Taylor continues wind his opponent up with gems such as "What polish works best for the belt, heh?" something which TJ isn't happy about as you can imagine. As Taylor continues to show off, shouting out to the crowd as TJ is locked in the hold. The crowd begin chanting TJ's name, clearly not wanting to see the fan favourite he is currently in. It appears as though TJ is beginning to respond as he raises both hands. He clenches his hands around Taylor's and attempts to push them off. Taylor holds off for dear life but TJ is far too strong and using all his might struggles free! He throws an elbow to the chest of Taylor before rolling to the side and leaping to his feet! Taylor tries to go back after his opponent back only walks into his clutches as TJ grabs Taylor and irish whips him into the ropes! He gives a determined look as he heads to the opposite ropes and launches himself towards Taylor who coming back off the other side to hit a spear! But no! Taylor sidesteps out of the way and TJ's momentum carries him right to the other side and he is unable to stop himself falling through the middle rope and onto the floor outside! Taylor appears to be done with games as he quickly heads outside to continue his assault. Maxwell McNally: Once again Taylor has managed to out fox his opponent!Eddie Edison: Being on the outside of the ring is even more dangerous than inside it with that maniac too[/b] As Taylor hops down TJ rolls over onto his stomach. Taylor not wasting anytime messing around helps TJ to his feet and punches right in the middle point of his back prompting his opponent to stumble forward towards the barricade. Taylor seems to be basking in the glory of being surrounded by the crowd now, shouting out "Is that all you've got?!" antagonizing them even more. He pushes TJ into the barricade before grabbing him by the back of the head, pulling back and ATTEMPTING to smash him forehead first into barricade. However, TJ has other ideas as he throws his arms onto the barricade to protect himself, Taylor is thrown back a bit and TJ spins around going for a big right to the head but Taylor ducks under and hits a body punch to the mid-section. TJ keels over as the brief cheers turn to boos once again. A grinning Taylor mouths "Watch this" before locking his arm around the head of TJ, placing his arm around his own head and proceeding to hit a huge snap suplex onto the floor with no give! A few "oohs" fill the arena as for the first time in match TJ seems to be genuinely hurt. Taylor quickly picks himself up as the count reaches 7, he tosses his opponent into the ring and follows him. He quickly hooks the leg to go for the pinfall.... ONE..
TWO...KICKOUT! Maxwell McNally: TJ shows there is a long way to go yet as he gets the shoulder up!Eddie Edison: Let's hope for TJ's sake he actually gets some offence in then, eh McNally?[/b] A frustrated Taylor punches the ring canvas beside TJ in anger while the crowd predictably rejoice at TJ managing to kick out easily. With TJ still laying on the canvas Taylor does the almost unthinkable - he begins to scale the nearest turnbuckle! The crowd momentarily halt from their heckling of Taylor as they look on in amazement as the normally mat-based wrestler stands upon the top turnbuckle stalking his opponent. He wills TJ to get to his feet as in true Taylor style he has his arms raised above his head. Finally TJ gets to his feet facing the other way. The crowd try to warn him as in a daze he turns around just as Taylor off to hit a cross body but it is too late for him to realise...but not to late catch Taylor mid-air! The entire crowd explodes as a determined and enraged TJ spins around and walks to the centre of the ring. He lunges forward before launching Taylor onto the canvas with a Samoan Drop! Taylor hits the canvas hard and rolls away as the crowd's excitement continues to grow. Taylor can't get back to his feet quick enough as TJ follows up by literally dragging the little worm to his feet. TJ hits an atomic drop and sends Taylor stumbling before driving him back first into the turnbuckle. Several shoulder thrusts later Taylor slides down the turnbuckle only to be helped up onto the turnbuckle. TJ begins climbing as well and stands over Taylor to begin to hit a 10 punch combo! TJ manages to tee off 8 punches, but on the 9th he is met a punch to the throat by Taylor! TJ is sent stumbling off of the turnbuckle as a groggy Taylor almost falls off before following up his attack. TJ attempts to back control back Taylor spins around so TJ is the one back first to the turnbuckle. With strength coming out of nowhere Taylor double leg drives TJ into turnbuckle. TJ recoils as the crowd act furiously. The pair climb the turnbuckle again with Taylor trying to set up a superplex but TJ isn't wore down enough for it! They proceed to take swipes out of each other before Taylor nearly gets sent flying backwards before he has enough and lands a huge headbutt to TJ! This dazes TJ for long enough for Taylor to attempt something quite extravagant! He tries to lock in a flying Triangle of Perfection! However, the risk doesn't pay as TJ ducks under the leg Taylor throws up and Taylor looks quite the fool as he falls on his back. Maxwell McNally: Ouch that's got to hurt, Eddie!!Eddie Edison: TJ better take advantage of this opportunity, it's rare for Taylor to leave any openings[/b] As Taylor slowly gets to his feet to the surprise of everyone TJ stays crouched on the turnbuckle! He seems to have something thought out as he studies Taylor's every movement. As Taylor turns to face TJ the crowd look on in awe as TJ leaps off the turnbuckle and through the air to connect with a thundering Spear! Taylor is laid flat out as TJ hooks the leg to go for the pinfall. The crowd all look on in hope... 1...
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Post by Jason Freeman on Jul 27, 2010 22:36:31 GMT -5
TJ lets out a sigh of anguish, knowing he was so close yet so far. The match slows down with TJ feeling the match catching up with him. He slowly climbs to his feet, looking down at Taylor who is trying to get his breath. He goes to grab Taylor but gets an eye rake for his troubles! As an incensed TJ stumbles away Taylor pulls himself to his feet with the aid of the ropes and throws everything he's got into an enzurgiri as TJ spins around! Both are laid out next to each other on the canvas as they both feel low on energy. Maxwell McNally: Whoever takes the advantage from here could very well walk out the victorEddie Edison: That was TJ's big chance, he'll be very lucky to get another.[/b] A short time passes with the crowd continuing to will TJ back to his feet. Finally both men slowly get to their feet, both at the same time. They stand in the centre of the ring facing each other and begin teeing off with sloppy lefts and rights. Taylor backs off, feeling the pain of the greater power that TJ possesses. He lures in before leaping up and locking in a cross armbreaker! TJ is dragged to the ring canvas in immense pain as Taylor grins, sensing that there is no escape for his opponent. The crowd rally around for TJ who is doing all he can but try as he might the hold seems too tight to escape. With Taylor increasing how hard he is yanking the hold TJ begins to feel like his arm is going to break and knows that he must do something quick to escape. Finally, knowing that if he doesn't escape he may well end up with a broken arm he puts all his energy into lifting Taylor up off of the canvas and slamming him down powerbomb style! Even with all his might Taylor is unable to hold on and finally TJ is free. Taylor is suddenly on the defensive as he scrambles to his feet, TJ knowing this could be his chance to capitalise does so. He hits a stiff right hand followed up by powerslam before waiting for Taylor to get to his feet. As Taylor gets to his feet TJ follows it up with the 215 Hurtin' and locks in a huge bearhug! The long time passes with Taylor squirming trying to escape but his unsuccessful and looks to be out of it. The referee raises Taylor's hand and it drops. He raises Taylor's hand again, once again it drops. Is this the end? No! As he goes to raise Taylor's hand one final time Taylor lifts it high...but only to be spinebustered onto the canvas. The crowd are all cheering now, confident that TJ will put Taylor but he doesn't go for the pin! Maxwell McNally: What's going through TJ's mind?!Eddie Edison: Whatever it is, it proves he doesn't have any ring smarts.[/b] Wanting to inflict some major punishment on Taylor TJ signals for the Soulbuster. He stands away from Taylor waiting for him to get to his feet. But as a few moments pass Taylor remains still out of it, growing impatient TJ goes to drag Taylor to his feet himself...only to be tricked by Taylor and get put into an inside cradle! 1...
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KICKOUT! TJ manages to power out of it to the delight of the fans. Taylor manages to spring to his feet first and takes advantage by teeing off on TJ with lefts and rights before hitting the Shock Treatment (Gutwrench Suplex)! TJ looks to be out of it, but like TJ did moments ago Taylor refuses the pin. Instead Taylor places TJ's head on the rope and takes a run up to attempt a swinging neckbreaker...unfortunately for him nobody's home! With Taylor briefly out of it TJ quickly goes for broke and grabs a hold of his opponent. Clearly having had enough he looks to settle things with the Philly Combo! He hits the first powerbomb easily, but unfortunately for him as he lifts Taylor he forgets about his technical ability and Taylor locks in a body scissors! Both men go crashing to the ground as Taylor begins to suck the energy out of his opponent. Eventually TJ escapes by shuffling both of them near the ropes and grabbing onto them. With TJ getting to his feet first and the referee behind him, the opportunistic Taylor shoves TJ backwards into the ref! The ref is knocked completely out of it as TJ is dazed as well. Maxwell McNally: Typical Taylor, willing to cheat at any opportunity.Eddie Edison: It's calling using your head, McNallly![/b] Taylor immediately calls for a steel chair from Daphne. Daphne doesn't move at first, unsure what to do but Taylor barks the orders again and is handed a chair. As TJ gets back to his feet he is met with an almighty crack to the head by Taylor. Taylor chucks the chair out of sight to discard the evidence as the referee comes too, and the referee is none the wiser as Taylor hooks the leg. 1...
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Taylor wins! Phillip Jones: Ladies and Gentlemen, here is your NEW ACW Entertainment Champion, Jon Taylor! As "Revolution Begins" hits the P.A system the ringside arena decends into chaos with boos and jeers being hurled from all angles at Taylor who cheated his way to victory. As he is handed the belt Taylor grins, quite clearly pleased with himself and demands Daphne joins him in the ring despite their disagreement earlier on. Daphne obliges as we fade out with the sight of a new ACW Entertainment Champion, with Taylor and Daphne heading towards backstage as TJ is brought too with a look of rage etched upon his face. He immediately pushes the referee and emts away to try and pursue Taylor but he is long gone by the time TJ leaves the ring, minus his former championship belt.
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Post by Jason Freeman on Jul 27, 2010 22:37:34 GMT -5
One More Thing... Dan White, Senator The camera fades into our final segment for the night, and there’s a pop for Senator Steve Phillips, as he walks down the hallway, kitbag over his shoulder and wielding a slight limp, as a result of AC Evans’ actions earlier on in the night. He looks sore, but as ever, he stubbornly walks out of the arena, rather than on a stretcher or inside an ambulance. As he makes his way towards the backdoor towards the car park, he hears a familiar voice.Dan White: Did you not get patched up then, Phillips? Senator lets out a brief smile, recognising the voice and more importantly, knowing that it’s not one to be alarmed about. He turns around, seeing the man who took him to 30 minutes earlier on in the night, and also the man who was at AC Evans’ wrath after their draw.Senator: I did not. I have a few aches, cuts and bruises, but I will be fine, just had to rest up for a while. Dan smiles, but quickly winces as he feels the intense pain across his back, caused by AC Evans’ chain.Dan White: I dunno man, you might want to get checked out, just to make sure that you’re totally alright. I mean, I had to get quite a bit of attention. I’ve had to been bandaged up pretty well, dude. Senator: Dan, you know me here more than most. You do not have to worry. I am just going to focus on getting home and having a rest. And think about how I am going to get back at Evans. Dan White: Heh, I hear you. Well, I’ll see you later. Dan extends his hand, and Senator accepts it.Senator: Have a safe journey home. Senator turns around and with his slight limp, makes his way over to the car park door. He begins to open it, when...
!-=-THWACK-=-!
...Oh come on, you knew that this was going to happen.
Dan comes out of nowhere, cracking Senator’s head off against the door, and he bounces back with some force. He’s not quite on his back, but is instantaneously speared into the wall behind him, whacking it, but attempting to surge forward, in a desperate attempt to get back at White, throwing a couple of jabs to his stomach. However White has other ideas, grabbing Senator around his injured neck and chucking him down and into the wall. Phillips begins to cough as his he again lands his back against a hard surface, but he still tries to get to his feet, not wanting to become a victim to a blind assault for the second time of the night. However his efforts are futile, as Dan grabs a steel chair next to him, folding it up and whacking it over Senator’s back. He falls down onto all fours, and Dan delivers a second shot to the back, and follows it up with a excruciating kick to the stomach, forcing Senator onto what must be a severely damaged back.
But Dan isn’t done yet. His breath can be heard audibly, his anger showing as he drags Phillips up by his clothing, and throws him head first into a nearby garage door. Senator is virtually destroyed, as Dan discards what remains of the steel chair, which is now nothing more than a twisted piece of steel. He grabs a conveniently-placed wrench from the wall, and jabs it into Senator’s face, which having already been grazed open from the garage door, sprays the concrete floor. Dan coldly jabs the wrench into Phillips again, and watches on with a demented smirk in his eyes, as he examines his work. His masterpiece.Hawthorne: ALRIGHT! THAT IS QUITE ENOUGH!!! It is only the words of Chairman Samuel Hawthorne that ultimately comes to Phillips’ aid, as Dan looks down, so fixated on his tour de force, that he doesn’t even notice the EMTs rushing towards Senator’s aid, nor does he even feel himself being pulled away by Hawthorne’s personal security. As he’s dragged several yards from the medical scene, the camera pans in towards the EMTs, where a stretcher is quickly ushered into the area. A medical staff member attempts to clot the blood flowing from Senator’s forehead, as another staff member begins to cut away at his clothing, to make sure that there is no major damage suffered underneath the skin. Hawthorne watches over with grave concern, hands originally on hips before he wipes his brow with his right hand.
And the camera then cuts to White. Absolutely expressionless, he’s still being held by the security team. However he begins to crock a dark smile as he watches the medical team lift Phillips onto a stretcher, smirking broadly as he turns around, dropping the wrench that was previously lodged in his hand. It makes an almighty crashing sound on the floor as Dan begins to walk away, showing little emotion and little compassion for the assault he just performed on his ‘friend’.
Fade to Black.
End of Show.
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Post by Jason Freeman on Jul 27, 2010 22:43:51 GMT -5
Hey guys, just starting the discussion off! Congrats to Taylor for the Entertainment Championship win, and also nice job to everybody tonight. A lot of great stuff.
I've said it before, if everybody wrote our shows would be AMAZING. Just look, this show had no Laron, no Ghee, no Red, no CP, barely any TJ, barely any Snake. If all these guys were to write to their best capacity, the shows would be absolutely amazing since this was a strong show withOUT everybody. So let's keep it up guys!
Overall though a great show.
EDIT: And Welcome back Evans!
EDIT 2: And feedback WILL still happen, just thought Id get some early thoughts up first
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Post by Taylor on Jul 28, 2010 6:39:09 GMT -5
Good overall show, if delayed. Don't agree about segment saves being handed out however, not after people having an extra day to write. Really disappointed to see some people drop off a bit writing wise (those I know for sure that aren't away) I hope they can recover though. Good to see Evans back, his segment was as good as any. Nice to see White finally turning, I was getting bored of Face White >_>. Wellington, Cole and Boreanz contributions to the show were all really good and their feud is pretty awesome. Don't care whether he likes this or not, I would like CP to pick it up, I don't know what's up but from being one of ACW's best if not the best at one point he has sorted of faded a little when we really need people like him to be at their best. Freeman and Mainer were both on good form this show, Mainer's segments were a little confusing on one of them but I think Freeman originally fucked the order up or something.
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Post by Dan White on Jul 28, 2010 6:47:23 GMT -5
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It's good to be a twat again. Oh, how I've missed it.
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Post by TJ on Jul 28, 2010 9:31:23 GMT -5
Good overall show, if delayed. Don't agree about segment saves being handed out however, not after people having an extra day to write. I said that I wouldn't be that much in the show for the simple fact, I've had to go to school for the last week for orientation, testing, room arrangements, and then work. So if you don't like me getting a save because I still want to put SOMETHING up for the show to contribute to it, then all I can say if fuck off, sorry I have priorities Taylor.
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Post by Taylor on Jul 28, 2010 10:12:33 GMT -5
I made no mention of you for that exact reason. You also said you weren't doing any solos on MSN so logically wouldn't need any saves.
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Post by Kim Jong CP on Jul 28, 2010 11:45:46 GMT -5
And TJ would've had his stuff in last night but I decided to sleep.
As for me not writing, I think it's clearly obvious by the fact that I've taken a step back with the admin team, that I'm looking at a semi break because A) it's been almost three years for me with CP without a break, B)I've ran ACW for the past six months when I didn't want to but did for people like Freeman and C) My feud with Scorpion doesn't need me to write four segments a week. Instead of pulling myself directly, like Freeman, like you Taylor, like a lot of people have, I've continued to help ACW while helping myself ... the same way I said Freeman should when he had a break by writing a match for the show when it needed it, like I said you could Taylor by just writing one segment a week and forming a stable with someone so they could pick up the slack.
I find it hypocritical again, that two people who took four month breaks in the past year, are criticizing me for not taking a full on break, but instead a reduced work load and that's the only comment I have on the matter.
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