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Post by Kim Jong CP on May 2, 2010 17:19:34 GMT -5
Fallen Heroes Battle Royal 2010 Winner
Chris Phenomenal Chris stares up at the sky, unmoved, fully exhausted. As soon as RAF raises his arm however that all changes as he gets up to his feet, slowly but vibrantly. The crowd is mixed, some are happy that Jason Freeman didn’t walk out while others are pissed Chris one. The environment isn’t like last year with Thunderkiss’ win however. Chris slowly slides into the ring as Jason Freeman is still down on the outside, having put forth a valiant effort but in the end a stubbed toes length away from being the victor. Chris takes his time in scaling the top rope before looking down at Freeman being assisted to his feet by RAF and Dr. Michael Doughtery. Fallen Heroes goes off the air to Chris pointing at the Omega Effect sign, they he didn’t accomplish it how he liked, with the title and the Fallen Heroes victory in hand, he’s still going to Omega Effect and the main event. End of Show
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Post by The Senator on May 2, 2010 17:22:56 GMT -5
What an excellent show! Makes me well pleased that you guys talked me into writing for it:)
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Post by Buddy Ghee on May 2, 2010 17:42:02 GMT -5
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Post by TWMoney on May 2, 2010 17:44:00 GMT -5
Wow ! Great show everyone! Great writing by all and special thanks to everyone who wrote the big match! I know that takes time and effort and u all did a great job. Congrats to CP for winning the battle royal! And on a very serious personal note...congrats to Danny Mainer. I started up here around the same time as him (about 5 wrestlers ago) and I have watched him fight and scratch and bust his ass all the way to the top. There is no one more deserving of that titlevthan you Mainer so enjoy it....you earned it buddy
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Post by TJ on May 2, 2010 21:33:40 GMT -5
I'll have my feedback either tomorrow or tuesday. Expect Freeman's thursday or next monday before warfare
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Post by Jason Freeman on May 2, 2010 21:46:15 GMT -5
;D
TJ's got the schedule down!
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Post by Kim Jong CP on May 3, 2010 17:07:34 GMT -5
Just a note to everyone, I missed one of TJ's segments when posting and I added it on page one. I also added two of my three segments for the evening, one of which is co-written with Xavier, and the other is of importance surrouding Omega Effect so I suggest you all check them out.
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Post by runaway on May 4, 2010 13:57:00 GMT -5
An awesome show, guys. Yeah, I know I've been kinda useless around here lately but as some of you may or may not know, I was going to write for FH but couldn't due to my uncle being killed in an accident. Everything's back on track now and with Mainer and TJ back on top and CP as the FH battle royal winner, I'm looking forward to getting back into the swing of things here. So once again, great show all and congrats to all our winners.
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Post by Jason Freeman on May 5, 2010 21:22:49 GMT -5
TJ thought he was gonna be so cool but LOOK! No feedback! Mine is coming tomorrow guys, looks like SOME PEOPLE though won't be getting it up by then
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Post by TJ on May 6, 2010 13:53:02 GMT -5
Chill, I knew if I didn't get it up by Tuesday, I wouldn't It's CP's fault he had those damn segment saves. Feedback up sometime this weekend for me, prom this weekend though so yea
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Post by Jason Freeman on May 6, 2010 13:58:16 GMT -5
Yea, yea, blame CP! At least Im consistent!
Feedback tonight guys! Though probably somehow TJ will end up getting it up before me becuase Ill say tonight and then not get it done...but...Ill attempt!
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Post by TJ on May 6, 2010 21:20:56 GMT -5
FUCK YOU FREEMAN! I BEAT YOU! Anyways FH feedback! TJ's Feedback Entering the Lion's Den (CP): CP is a super tool. He tells the security to make sure no one rain's on "his" parade. I liked this one, set up everything for the night: the world title match, the Fallen Heroes match. Solid opening promo. Three Little Wrestlers (Ryan Cole): Short imo. But still good promo. I like Campbell, because while he is the quiet bodygaurd (one of two in ACW), he is different from Tyson Washington because he is polite. I like that Cole gives Campbell some mention every time he goes from speech to action. A New Vision of ACW (Wellington ): When TW told me about this promo, I loved it. After I read it, I loved it more. Only problem I had it was all so done quickly. In hindsight I would have told TW to do two separate ones so it doesn't seem so quick.. Other than that good promo. Melting Pot (Mainer): You dropkicked the door.....YOU DROPKICKED THE DOOR?!?!? Damn it, I wish I thought of it. Any ways. Good segment with setting up the Crucible match. Other than that, I don't have much to say. I did like how you wrote Sammie. I always tried to write him as being a boring, uninterested, but never could describe it right. Last Gate Standing (Ghee/Freeman): Good promo. Fuck you freeman using my Age idea. Anyways I liked the interaction of Buddy and Trace. Buddy used groveling too, he is bad and smart. Solid promo Back For One(Sennie): *old man voice* I'm not old. I'm kinda out of shape, but I won't lose, but I won't win either. basically wat I got out of that. Good promo, but hopefully Sennie has one more go for OE6. $100,000 Challenge (Wellington/Ghee): Solid beginning of a feud promo. Not much more than that from me. Dreams Manifested Under Starlit Skies (Scorp): First segment I've read of Scorpion and I loved it. I've skimmed over some others, and I know that he has a god complex of sorts, but does he thinks he's Jesus "talking to his father beyond the stars"? I really like your work, even though I don't like when a promo is alot of set up. The Long Arm(bar) of the Lawv(Gracie): Armbar! I laughed throughout this whole segment. Solid segment, nothing more that I can think of. Go Time in Dallas (CP/Laron): Laron, you probably don't know this, but Laron = CP when he first came to e-fedding. An ghetto asshole. So reading this segment brought me back to some good times. This week our segment should be good. Other than that, good segment guys Proposal Ultimatum (Mainer): Loved this promo. Showed a human side to the NEW champ (congrats btw Mainer). Sometimes I think that there are certain OTA things that should be mixed with ITA, and anything like Tiger Woods should not be, but for some reason, it worked, almost as if, "look, don't think because I beat CP I'm perfect, because I'm not" type feel to it. And that's it for this week kiddies! Be sure to check in sometime next week for the next "TJ's Feedback "
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Post by Jason Freeman on May 9, 2010 1:36:56 GMT -5
Late, what are you talking about?! Wait...what do you MEAN it's not Thursday?Freeman Feedback Fallen Heroes is an awesome PPV, so let’s get down to it then! Entering the Lion’s Den (Chris Phenomenal) – I don’t know why but I liked this. It was a good way to start the show. CP walking in, got his guards around him, and knowing that he’s about to walk into a hard fight but taking the challenge anyways. I dunno, it was interesting. Three Little Wrestlers (Ryan Cole) – I really do like Cole’s character as I have said before and can see him becoming really good. Still need to see more from him to make a full judgement though, but as I said I like what I’ve been seeing from his first few promos, and after he gets settled some more I am interested to see how he turns out. A New Vision of ACW (Theodore Wellington) – When I started reading this and it was the part with Criminal and the ET match being cancelled I was like WTF? And then the part with CP came on and for a second I was like 0_0. Then I realized, and yes indeed it was a dream. XD. It was a pretty good idea for a segment and I also liked how you made it more than just a random segment for laughs, by tying it into the fact that you have a chance to make that a reality by winning Fallen Heroes. So I liked it because the beginning was pretty funny and then it didn’t come off as completely random, so thumbs up. Melting Pot (Danny Mainer) – Danny Mainer always has to hide his segment titles on the other side of the screen…gets me every time. Grr…Anyways the segment by itself was fine, although it really was just a way to announce the Crucible thing and therefore there really wasn’t much to it. I mean so it didn’t standout or anything. The one thing I didn’t like was Hawthorne not reacting at all to Mainer apparently knocking down his door. I mean I know he probably wouldn’t freak out because maybe he would want to show Mainer can’t get to him, but I would think kicking down a door to your boss’s office would give SOME kind of repercussion or comment…so yeah <_< that was my main problem with this though really it was just a very minor part since it happened in the first paragraph. Back for One (The Senator) – SENATORRRRRRR! The man himself is back! Man how old is Phillips by now like 95? Still going! Anyways though, nice to see Senator again…actually very very nice to see Senator again. Was hoping to see Senator enter the new age and bold his name or something though upon his triumphant return. Ah well But yeah, very nice to see Sen again. $100,000 Challenge (Wellington/Buddy Ghee) - Wellington was owned. Nice to see a feud starting between Ghee and Wellington. Or I guess continuing because they did stuff with each other on Warfare. Wellington sure is loving the pictures today, though this one did fit. I hope he didn’t see this picture though and then decide to base the segment around it just because he wanted to use it though <_<. Anyways there isn’t too much to say about this one besides that I like that the feud between these two is continuing. Ages have an End, Souls are Forever (TJ) – At least I think the title said souls..who could read that thing. More importantly, the pretentious segment headers are back! Yes! I marked out! Oh as I actually read this segment I find out it WAS souls indeed, and I was very happy to know I interpreted that word right up there in that weird font. Anyways, good promo, and TJ shows why he totally deserves to be ET right now…even though at this point of the show he isn’t yet. Also Birmingham already talks about ages earlier in the show so now TJ is not original anymore so ha! Also I know I must be very tired as when he said his uncles taught him to be a man all I could think of was the mulan song. So yeah, two in the morning not the best time to feedback. But still! This was good. Dreams Manifested Under Starlit Skies (Scorpion) – My god! Is this his segment or did he accidentally paste his research paper here by mistake! XD, Scorpion sure knows how to write long segments. God I wish I wasn’t tired right now, but Ill attempt to read it. Man…where the heck does Scorpion think of all this stuff to say? Does he just go “Hmm..today Ill write about humans and how they fear isolation because they are SINNERS”. I mean really where does all this stuff come from. I mean it’s great, but how the heck do you think of it? I swear you should write really creepy novels about Scorpion or something. But make him like…a horror villain instead of a pro wrestler <_<. Anyways phenomenal segment as usual from Scorpion. Im assuming you’re tired of hearing how great you are every week, so Ill search extra hard to find negative things to say about you next time. XD. The Long Arm(bar) of the Law (Thiago Gracie) – I love Gracie. Senator always wrote for the Capitalists who were funny but this is a whole different level! It’s possible he did stuff like this on Fallout but I never read it but its so great seeing Sen doing this stuff. I love Thiago’s character. Though looks like Trace lucked out Thiago hasn’t been around for a while! Though I’m sure they will meet again soon! This whole thing was great though, especially in light of the recent debate about the immigration law thing. Go Time in Dallas (CP/Xavier) – Im assuming CP knows Xavier from somewhere? Since they jumped right into a joint segment. Anyways interesting debut for Xavier. Considering he seems to know CP I assume he has fedding experience. And now that Steele’s back it’d be extremely interesting to see Steele encounter Xavier, considering Steele was the token ghetto black guy before…(I mean we had BK but cmon, BK’s more of the Wayne Brady type of black guy…XD) Im sure it’ll happen eventually. Sammies List (TJ) – Like the thing about the ET title, and Im very interested to see who gets picked to challenge for it. Let’s get that division heated up again. Anyways, TJ’s been in pretty good form lately. I don’t love the part where he got this expensive room or whatever at Hawthorne’s expense since I just don’t buy it for some reason, but I generally like the conflict between Hawthorne and TJ. It’s just this one part I haven’t really loved. Omega Effect 6 (CP) – Not really much to say, but hey the Hall of Fame is finally happening! Proposal Ultimatum (Danny Mainer) – Very good title win promo…you could feel Mainer’s emotions and so for that reason I really liked it. Both the beginning about the moment of winning the belt, and the ending about Caitlynn. Mainer’s storyline was sort of stupid in my opinion when he was like…living on the street. But I do really like the Caitlynn story he started building recently, and now as Warfare said this means that Caitlynn will have to marry him at Omega Effect. At least I think so, it wasn’t mentioned in this segment but Im pretty sure that’s what he said. Anyways, that storyline promises to be VERY interesting, and so I approve. And then of course there's the Fallen Heroes Battle Royal match which in true fashion goes on for a HUGE amount of time. I thought for the most part it was very good, and kudos to whoever wrote Birmingham's elimination (TJ?) because it was awesome and very in character...with him trying to get back in and all. Definitely what I would have done. Senator did a great job with him too. I don't quite understand the fact CP lost the title then won the royal...we get Mainer/CP again? I dunno...whatever. I won't say anything more. Anyways, though, I will congratulate Mainer on the fact that he is champion. Depending on what he's writing, I either really like his stuff or really don't. I didn't like Psycho Mainer, as he knows, but this Mainer Im liking more. The caitlynn storyline as Ive said is really interesting, and I approve if Mainer keeps his character the way it has been lately (not that he cares about my approval at all XD) A lot to think about...a lot to come up soon! Omega Effect is around the corner. XS3 said he'll be writing again, Steele is back, BK will be on Warfare...interesting times ahead!
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Post by Kim Jong CP on May 9, 2010 1:51:19 GMT -5
Freeman, to explain the Xavier thing I intiially had an idea for FH, but after looking at the show I didn't want to do it. I had the seg save though, so when Xavier showed up and I looked at his character I figured what the hell and gave the new guy a bone.
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