My segments are up! And they are here:
alphacw.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=warfare&action=display&thread=12176&page=2#138155alphacw.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=warfare&action=display&thread=12176&page=2#138164PAGE 1-Jake Steele being unpunished yet his older, more handsome, more talented brother is sitting at home eating microwavable noodles? Boo!
-I liked TK and Steele's segment. Showed how they just plain hate each other. Liked the stereotype tension too
-Senator getting his way into the Omega Effect whilst the man who beat him, the more handsome, more talented Welsh Dragon is sitting at home looking at the phone waiting for someone to give him a job? Boo!
CHRIS PHENOMENAL ENTERTAINMENT SERIES BIT
-I liked this idea. I love the way of people using the Entertainment title as something more than just a "third tier belt", and using the Entertainment aspect to create some fun stuff. And yeah, it might not have much to do with
wrestling, but I still like it
-VorteX's date was funny as. And he's a very talented writer. One for the future
-Andrew Black, Rena, you both made me laugh with your Chris Hansen gaff. And I'm enjoying Rena's storyline with Bryce
-Back to VorteX. -
"??: Ursula. Ursula Florgeingdardorf. Yeah, the names as ugly as I am." - I seldom laugh at much anymore, but that made me laugh out loud a lot. And then laugh even more when I tried to pronounce it. Give this man the belt.
-Looks interesting so far. And this was a pretty good series of segments. I like how people are left to their own devices, rather than just one big long segment of people doing their various stuff.
-Thunder Train's 'Bat Train' saga is keeping me very entertained. Feud one day, we must. Thunder Lawyer is staying too, woo!
-I don't have a son either, Mainer, so I can feel your dad's pain
. But it's nice to see this sort of family-related segment
-From one sad dad story to another. Poor Bryce
. But Rena's a death trap! She's such a slag she got TK pregnant! Yes, TK! It was well weird dude
-I like Rep's stuff. A lot. I hope he sticks around. And I like the way he uses Stan Vishis (PS - Oh my god. Vishis. Vicious. o_.)
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"The Newfoundland giant falls as gracefully as a hippo from a plane." - That made me laugh out loud as well, just trying to visualise it. MONSTOURAGE ARE MY FRIENDS, AND YOURS TOO!!
-Michael Smart reminds me of somebody. I'm sure he was here before. Either way, I enjoyed his segment. Daniel Smart = douche
THE ALL-FANTABULOUS PAGE 2!-Chris Phenomenal just killed Rawt with a Wall of Text! Boo! But seriously, that was a fantastic heel promo by Chris. I suggest everyone reads it. Shame about the Mega Star Alliance, but I guess it was inevitable considering everything :/
-Caitlynn is 8 months pregnant, right? Well I dunno anymore
-Senator is the king of owning. That is all.
-In Lee's segment, Mike reminds me of the Drunk Bakers from The Viz. I suppose only Mainer knows who I'm on about. Plus, did anyone else feel like this segment felt somewhat incomplete?
-I'm liking this three-way feud stemming between Jefferson, Black and LyCoS. Add a Junior title to the equation and you'd have yet another dimension to the feud.
-Bryce is an ass. Like character, like holder, eh?
-Okay, maybe the segments are supposed to be structured like that >_>. Lee's stuff is like a mix of Scott's stuff from last year, and Hunter's stuff. And that's a good thing.
-Snooker cue...Crucible....heh. But although I knew Hughes was in this match anyways, yay
-Hitman's story has intrigued me so far. I wonder who Gingerdude has got in mind for his OE opponent (my bets are on XS3 >_>)
-Nice segment again by Jefferson. But where's LyCoS disappeared to OOC?
THE MYSTERIOUSLY MYSTERIOUS PAGE THREEEE-Lou! Haha, that old coot. And I don't know about you, but I always like segments when they include the simplest of emoticons. You could call it lazy, but to me, "
" reflects anger more than "Bryce gives Lou an angry glare"
-Andrew Black is a very good writer, and I'm really enjoying his current backstory
-Rep's stuff reminds me of a smark writing segments. And that's a good thing. He has a true smark way of thinking about wrestling, and thus a smark's ideology when writing segments. Plus the MEANWHILE.... stuff is original
-I liked Train and Mainer's segment. Reminds me of a historic segment between Ridley and AK waaaaayyyyyyy back in late September 2004. If you ever get the chance to read it, do so.
-Jefferson ain't happy with his associates. I wouldn't be by the way they're described >_>
THE FINAL SEGMENT
-Way I see it, TK called Train out in order to make a fool of him, and make a statement to Steele that he can plough through all his associates. But Steele was one step ahead of TK. In fairness, Train left before Steele properly turned heel, so that can all be explained come Warfare. But I thought this segment was great, it was more about Steele's initiative rather than being a cowardly heel. It's adding to his persona, that he's not just a better wrestler than TK, but he is also a smarter person than TK. And I think that it was a well done segment.