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- I'm liking the interactions between TK, and Senator. They hate each other so much but they know they have to work together towards a better cause.
- This segment made me chuckle, Jefferson is so nonchalant and in his own world that he doesn't care what anyone but himself has to say, he's also a sly bastard.
- I found the play on the long walk down the hallway when someone retires that Dan did was clever, and of course... everyone loves fucking with Kevin
- Wait, so I did Lee's lines in that last segment just for his own version to be posted on this show? FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF.
- From what I'm reading in this story so far, it's pretty good. Keep it up Black.
- Simple and straightforward promo by VorteX, Stan and Rep are playing Hide and Seek with VorteX, and only seem to attack when he's vulnerable... but what else would you expect from a emo kid and a spic.
- Another solid interview segment by Jefferson, he really gets a chance to shine in these.
- Thunderkiss pulled this segment off wonderfully, sorry Davey.
- Solid promo by Hitman, Train may be taken out tonight!
- Oh Chris Phenomenal and his beatdowns on people that backfire...
- Dave almost shitting himself everytime Train is around still makes me laugh, but what's gonna on Thursday? Hmm...
Page 2:- Rena in lingerie... I came
- Arrive. Announce Tag Match For Next Week Involving Crucible Participants. Leave.
- Hitman and Colossus possibly in the tag division!? YES.
- It's cool to see Spade with solo segments, I hope it continues.
- FUCK YEAH LEE STEELE
- "If you can do the crime, you can do the time" would be a weird catchphrase, and lol, Zane snitched for nothing
- Jesus, CP, you should and Spade should have just combined the "why are we tag teaming" segment with this one, it would have been longer.
- Kalb and Fitsharris think they bad... they ain't bad. And Senator really is one cunning motherfucker. If anyone is heel of the year so far, it's him.
- This angle with Spade makes him seem face, maybe it's cause everyone loves Gooey
- I agree with Hitman on this one, I don't really think this Entertainment Series is turning out good at all...
- ...And VorteX saves it, for me atleast. Mainly because of Sweet Dreams, as well as his awesome writing, but goddamn I LOVE THAT FUCKING SONG
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- AK's first official match back, or first advertised match back, this segment was good because it moves along the feud great, showing just how much Freeman has done to not only her family, but her entire life in just a couple months.
- Lee loves his flashback segments, he really does.
- Oh Freeman you sly dog you, you see most would think "singles match WTF" but Freeman has a point to prove, he wants to show he can out wrestle one of the best, it's a genius concept for his character to do
- Jefferson's storyline seems like GTA: Empire
- I'd fuck the dogmess out of Christina. That is all.
- I'm looking forward to what VorteX does when he gets his hands on Stan, hope he breaks his neck, WOOOOO
- I loved the whole segment to match to segment set up for the Prison Break Match, it was also a very unique match within itself, settling the score for the Aiden Joseph episode last year in the process
- This angle between Bryce and Rena is getting steamy, and interesting. It's a very nice touch to hear why Bryce is such a jackass, who knows, maybe Rena can change him for the better
- Black got women problems, damn
- This hands down was one of Freeman's best segments, especially for the fact that HE wrote it, I'm so, so sooo impressed with him for this. The segment as a whole was great for his character, from the cutting of the hair, to the chairshot. Most people won't read this due to the length, but I sat up and read this last night before I went to bed (early reads FTW), and I told both Freeman and Senator how impressed I was with this segment. Phenomenal job, Freeman.
Page 4:- Fuck you Dan... just fuck you!
- Damn we almost got a sex segment, too bad, Bryce slipped up!
- Goddamnit, please stay Smart, because this segment was a good start. Daniel Smart seems like quite the interesting manager as well.
- Everyone marked today for it. I marked yesterday. Train swerves us all. Awesome segment.
- YEAH MACHO, PEEL!
MVP OF THE NIGHT: Jason Freeman
That's right, despite everyone loving Train for his segment, I have to award this to Freeman. He just did too great of a job on his segment with AK, and overall with his character. Train would come in as a very close second though.