FULL INDEPTH SHOW REVIEW
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+ Dan White's encounter with the ghosts always make me laugh as his reactions are priceless. I'm wondering who the voice is. Very intrigued.
+ This White/Jefferson dual segment made me laugh, how would officials NOT recognize Dan White? Still, funny encounter.
+ Probably something to do with the fact I haven't read the series up until now, but this makes no sense to me. What does it have to do with your character?
+ Aww, Bryce and Rena are such a cute couple. It's funny to watch them as their monstrous egoes clash.
+ When I think of Richard Parris, I think of Samuel Parris from The Crucible. A selfish man concerned only with his own affairs and his own well being. Good to see him get his comeuppance.
+ Oooft, you're in trouble Jefferson. Ray will try and punch your lights out at some point, that's a promise. Good pre-match promo to set the tone of the match.
+ MATCH NOTE: What happened to Davey? I miss him and his blazing ways.
+ Jonny here doing a great job of creating some hype for the next show, GOOEY IS OUT FOR BLOOD YO!
+ Pablo is one fucked up dude, this series is extremely interesting to read and I can't wait to see how it ends.
+ Thunderkiss's brutality and his way with words has always been something I'm a fan of. Just his ability to say threats that you wouldn't expect from people and make them serious and amusing to imagine at the same time is a skill you're born with. Great to see Senator actively writing again.
+ XDDDDDD Casper of the Gods. This segment made me laugh. Train is the shit, simple as.
+ Andrew Black VS Search Engine at Omega Effect? Veri interesting.
+ Bryce and Rena sitting on a roof... F-U-C-*gets shot* The relationship between these two is developing nicely, it's intriguing to see where it goes.
+ SAVED FOR HITMAN.
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+ One Week 'til we see who Jefferson faces at OE? It always seems to be Jefferson who is having his shit messed up. Like in the Dave/Spade feud or when he totalled that Ford on a test drive. Poor guy.
+ This is mah segment and ah would lahk some feedback on it.
+ I'll be honest VorteX, your segments confuse the crap out of me but this is an exciting read. When're you wrestling next?
+ OMG, MATCH OF THE FUNKING YEAR.
THIS WAS AWESOME. *clap clap clap*
+ Cordelia VS Rattlesnake? Holy SHIT IMAGINE THE BRUTALITY.
+ TK has this power to seem like there's tension in the works that might lead to a brawl only to have it turn around and be diffused. It's aggravating, but a great writing technique at the same time. Good segment for the both of you.
+ How do you drive, with your arms raised in victory? Just kidding, good read. This series now seems to make more sense.
+ THIS IS A SEGMENT I WROTE WHERE LEE HOMICIDE GETS ADDED TO THE CRUCIBLE. WHO WUDDA' THUNK IT?
+ Interesting segment to add to the rapidly building tension of The Pablo Crisis series. Great read.
+ XD Dave and his attempted murder of Train, Train has that classic reactions technique that I can always just picture him saying this stuff and it makes me crack up. This feud is great! Keep up the hard work!
+ Oh, you're wrestling tonight. >_> Sorry Big V. I wonder if Stan is actually writing or if it's just Reprobate puppeteering, either way, LL Cool J FTW.
+ THE RATTLESNAKE DREAM LIVES! I'd love to see Snake VS Cordelia in a weird, domestic violence sort of way. >_>
+ Steele's ebonics are the best thing going in ACW right now, dialogue wise.
+ Vegas huh? Interesting choice... good read.
+ I love how Anna Sommers is having that "Non-Conformist Teenager" kind of spin but with the maturity to be able to keep her head out of the water and not be able to get grounded. Makes for great conflict. Also, Westlife FTL.
+ Simpsons refference FTW, Gooner is such a tool. Jefferson is ANGRY.
+ I marked out for Chef, I loved Train saying YO! and Rachel Ray is fine-ass. FTW.
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+ I'm loving the representation of Stan Vishis being completely dense as in contrast to how mellow Storm is. This is FTW.
+ DAVE VS DAN, EPISODE FIVE. IT'S AWWWWWWNNN.
+ Rena's match FTMFW.
+ This segment seemed somewhat unoriginal considering it was a story already told from a different perspective. But I like this version better.
+ The Pablo name has been somewhat tainted by the jobbing of Pablo Lopez, but Pablo Del Santo is an awesome heel. Great segment again.
+ MAINER'S GONNA' HAVE A REAL BAD SHINER AFTER THAT ONE! Kicked in the eye god daaaaamn!
+ Ashton Kutcher is an annoying dick even if he can be funny sometimes. Can't wait to see how this Entertaining Series pans out.
+ I was impressed by how Train noted the poor communication between Charlotte King and Kevin Anderson and how they ask the same question. It's probably something us as fedders should pay attention to. Props to Train for being the wise owl he is. Great tension building segment.
+ I was speaking to SheltonSplash the other day about ACW and he asked if Debolt was here, I said that with The Dan, Steele, Rep, myself and CP all in one fed he'd be buried alive. Thanks for making me spray Pepsi across my laptop screen, asshole. I <3 The Reprobate Roundup.
+ Alot of people are going to be In Character pissed about this new title, just what with it being Steele I'm surprised it doesn't have a spinner. Great conclusion to a great show.
MVP of the Night: Dave Shadow for his "Let's Be Cool Train" t-shirt and his appreciation of Subway Sandwiches. FTW.Mainer'sMusing: When Jake (Cheng) does his Superstar of the Month thing on the website does he just choose randomly or is there a committee who looks and thinks "Dag yo, this kid got da mad skillz. He should be superstar"? I feel if we have a Superstar of the Month committee we can take that spot into the website and make it almost like an accolade in of itsself for impressive work. So like, in your profiles you could have say, Fallen Heroes Rumble winner, Super of Star of the month in: Date, Date and Date to further improve your character portfolio. Thoughts?