So, impressions/advice/criticisms thus far?

[Chris Williams]

Ok, so I just want to know what you guys think so far of what I've done. What have you liked/disliked? What you want to see more of, what have I been whoring out and u want to see less of.... Thoughts on me in general, OOC, w/e. Should I do more backstory, or keep to feuds, etc. Literally ANYTHING. I just wanna find out what you guys want to see from me/Williams.

Thanks

[BK London]

Told you I would do it.

Honestly, I think you're a very impressive writer - but honestly, your writing pretty much flies under the radar compared to the other stuff by members of the roster. Your segments are good, they're solid, but they're not eye catchers. I would like to see more stuff contributed to your feud with Daniel Ness, rather than some other stuff. That's just the honest truth.

You're a great writer though, I think you would've been really successful here had you stayed during your first run. Now it's going to be quite a task to sort of create momentum again, but I'm confident you can do it. Just stay consistent and interesting.

[bryce]

I like what I have seen of your work, but I think you need to try and concentrate on your feud more. To be truthful I remember more of the co-segments you've done with Tyler than what you've done with Ness.