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Post by Jonny Spade on Aug 6, 2009 16:14:02 GMT -5
However, London turns his back in the nick of time and he grabs onto the other arm of Dan White to pull him down for a backslide. White thrashes his legs to attempt to shift the weight and free himself, as RAF makes the cover.
ONE . . TWO . . THRE-White kicks out!
Both men get up simultaneously, but it's a double leg takedown by Dan White before the Jacknife that gets London in a pinning predicament.
ONE . . TWO . . THR-London kicks out.
Simultaneously, their at their feet again and London now goes for a running school boy pin - he gets Dan on his back, but as RAF begins to count - London switches it up and picks the ankle of Dan. The Corporate Lock os applied for no longer than 3 seconds before Dan rolls forward and manages to score a roll up on London.
ONE . . TWO . . Kick Out!
London frees himself from that pinning predicament, and he's slower to get up this time - but he goes on the offense. He approaches Dan, but once again Dan goes for an armbar takedown - only for London to counter it once again by twisting out of it. Dan makes a 180 to see his opponent, but he is taken down by a double leg takedown and London goes for another Corporate Lock. White kicks himself free, knocking BK London into the corner and he quickly makes his way back to his feet. White races towards London and knocks the wind clear out of him with a major clothesline. White now goes to follow up with the Running Bulldog, but London grabs control of White and pushes him away from him. Before he collides with the opposing turnbuckle, White stops himself and he turns around. With the opening, London plants him with a kick to the gut and The Revolver is attempted - but countered into the Fujiwara Armbar.
London is trapped in the center of the ring, screaming for pain and he attempts any way he can to crawl towards the ropes. White has the hold locked in with the finest execution, and as much as London wants to - he's unable to make it to the corner as quickly as he wants to. It's a slow process, and with each passing moment he can feel his arm hyperextending as White continues to apply the hold. Smartly, London pushes himself up with his free hand and manages to get on his knees. Dan doesn't want to let go of the hold, but as London gets further up to a vertical base the pressure he inflict diminishes. Soon enough, London manages to free himself by rolling forward.
Once again the two get up, and London is planted in the abdomen with another kick and he's irish whipped into the ropes. The champ comes off the ropes and Dan bends over to go for a Back body drop - but London hops over for a Sunset Flip. Instead of stacking up Dan however, London goes for another Corporate Lock - but he can't manage to twist Dan over form on his back. Dan manages to pull London in with his legs, and now he attempts to go for his Fujiwara Armbar once again. With London's free arm, he pummels White's face with several right hands before freeing himself. Dan rolls over towards the ropes and London attempts to clothesline him over the ropes, but Dan side steps it and sends London soaring over. The quick London lands on the apron, and Dan attempts to knock him off with a right hand but BK blocks it and decks Dan instead. Dan stumbles back a bit, and now London springboards to the top rope. Quickly spotting it - Dan dives forward and pushes the legs of London from under him.
For a second BK is floating in air before he drops and lands ribs first on the top rope. He drops forward onto his back in the ring and Dan wastes no time scooping him up. The Stunt Bomb powers London up and sends him crashing down to the mat wtih huge force. White simply places his hand across the chest of London, and it's the moment of truth.
ONE . . TWO . . . . THREE!
The Bell Rings
Phillip: And the winner of this match, Dan White!
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Post by Jonny Spade on Aug 6, 2009 16:15:20 GMT -5
Segment: The Victory Credit: ??
…the crowd is still clapping respectfully, as BK London and Dan White now stand in the middle of the ring. It was a battle of titans. A clash of wills.
But Dan White has come out victorious over the former ACW World Heavyweight Champion. With Dan White’s hand being raised as the victory, a still stunned BK London slowly makes his way back up to his feet. The Welsh Dragon locks eyes with his opponent immediately, unsure of whether or not the fight will continue.
The two men glisten with the sweat of an exhaustive match. London slowly approaches Dan White, who does not back down. They are nose to nose, almost as if the match had just begun. With the crowd cheering as though they want more, BK London gives a sneering look…
…and offers a handshake. The gesture meets with approval from the audience, who clearly respected the occasion just as much as London did. Dan White looks down at the hand, unsure of whether or not to trust the man who was his adversary moments ago.
McNally: This is a gesture of respect. BK London is as ruthless a competitor as they come…but a handshake from him is a handshake from a man who has done all there is to do in this business.
Edison: Oh come on now…this is just a little too mushy. Go back to beating the hell out of each other!
The Welsh Dragon stares down at the open palm, clearly apprehensive about the seeming sign of friendship. Behind him, the crowd is still cheering. Some are telling him to take the hand, and some are trying to warn him of the “obvious’ trick.
Dan White looks back up at London, tenses his muscles in preparation for an impending strike and…
…takes the hand. Uproarious cheering is the crowd’s response.
McNally: And what a show of class. These two are some of the best competitors that the ACW has to offer. This match could have easily been the main event on a pay-per-view card. It was a privilege being able to watch it on Thursday Night Meltdown!
Edison: I think I’m going to hurl.
McNally: Then why is that a tear in your eye?
Edison: What tear?? There’s no tear! I’ve got something…erm…I’ve got something in my eye!
As the tension in the air subsides, BK London solemnly releases the handshake and walks to the other side of the ring. One last time, he glances back at Dan White, whose eyes are still transfixed on him. Despite the lingering suspicion, BK steps through the ropes and walks up the ramp with his pride intact.
Breathing a sigh of relief, The Welsh Dragon beckons the referee over to raise his arm in triumph one more time. The official obliges, and the crowd cheers once more at Dan White’s impressive victory.
McNally: We’ve had one slobber-knocker of a card here folks! From all of us here in the ACW, join us next week as we…
…McNally’s speech is abruptly cut off. The camera quickly pans to an isolated nook in the audience, where a large shadow just slips out of view.
Edison: Uh oh…I think I know what’s about to happen here…
Dan White still stands in the ring, basking in the adoration of the fans. The Welsh Dragon flashes his famous smile, as the audience quickly changes pitch to warn their hero of impending danger, but they are a split second too late. An enormous bulk moving at lightning speed…
…It is Kaoru Hanayama!
Still in his wrestling gear from earlier, Kaoru once once again plants a Goliath Lariat to the back of Welsh Dragon’s head, catching his victim off guard.
The audience boos furiously, to a rather cold and indifferent reaction by the man who styles himself as the Iron Goliath. Hanayama’s oddly long hair makes his expression seem all the more distant and impersonal.
McNally: Not this again! That man has no business being out here! What the hell does he want? He had his airtime! He had his match!
Edison: He’s a big guy, McNally. And big guys always need a little more. Frankly, I like that attitude. Whatever he wants he takes. As long as it’s nothing of mine, of course….
The booing is reaching a fever pitch, as Dan White writhes on the mat in pain. Hanayama lays into his opponent with several vicious stomps, putting his full three hundred pounds into the sickening strikes. The crowd is absolutely disgusted at seeing their hero losing such an unfair fight…yet their boos seem to bounce off the enormous mass that is Kaoru.
With a foggy stare, he yanks up Dan White, and crosses the exhausted man’s arms across his stomach, setting him up for the Goliath Driver!
The crowd’s booing waxes forward like the tide, as they prepare for the inevitable impact…when suddenly…
…there is cheering!
Down the ramp comes Andrew Starr, making a beeline for the ring! Hanayama releases the straight-jacket hold and drops Dan White to the mat! Starr dives forward and manages to connect with a few right hands before Hanayama half-stumbles his way through the ropes and out onto the ring apron.
McNally: It’s Andrew Starr! Andrew Starr! Dan White’s tag team partner coming to the rescue! Some bully that Hanyama is. A three hundred and twenty pounder afraid to attack a man who, for once, is actually facing him. Yeah, he’s reaaaally dangerous. Such a baaaad bad man. Psh! What a coward!
Edison: Well, why not run away? He’s already proven all he needs to prove. Any man who can lay out Dan White on a consistent basis demands my respect! Go Japan, go!
Andrew Starr considered giving chase, before realizing that White is still on the mat. Ever loyal, Starr bends down to tend to his tag team partner along with the referee. As he walks back up the ramp, Hanayama points at Starr and yells something unintelligible to the effect of “You’ll get yours too!”
Starr looks up the ramp, unflinchingly, while kneeling over The Welsh Dragon. White, who is almost cognizant at this point, is also looking in the direction of the ramp. He is none too happy.
The camera zooms in on Dan White’s stern expression as the screen slowly darkens and we…
Fade to Black
End of Show
End Credits: Kaoru Hanayama
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Post by BK London on Aug 6, 2009 21:02:51 GMT -5
Dan got Ziggler'd.
Great show everyone.
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Post by Kim Jong CP on Aug 6, 2009 22:50:10 GMT -5
--Five for a Song-- So much like Senator, I’m going to pick out four segments that really caught my eye this show, as well as one match to talk about, make feedback quicker. In fact it only takes one song a piece to read the segment and give an honest opinion. One Down, One up--Senator and Dan White. A really good segment to set up the big feud heading into heat wave. I especially love how in many ways it is similar to how Senny and Freeman started but at the same time it’s different. I also love how in the end there was a conclusion to the Hitman vs. Dan feud presenting this opportunity. I also think Dan is a tosser for screwing up the letters and tricking everyone, more so that I didn’t figure it out. More so I’m interested to see where he goes with the voice throughout this entire feud. All I know is that it’s going to be hot. The one problem I had with this segment was a few continuity errors with the rest of the show, however that can’t be helped sometimes. This is a Couples Dance Only--BK, Ben and Jonny It’s really good to see Jonny back, looking at the list of ACW World Champions I’d love to see his name on their as I think he deserves it considering the work he’s put into the place and the talent that is there when he decides to bring it. He did that with this segment, and well he seems like a bit of a cheesy face, that’s something that ACW doesn’t have and needs. The interaction between the groups was especially interesting in this scenario, considering Jonny came it alone. I also liked how BK and Jay backed down from the challenge instead of accepting it which would have been considered the norm for this. The constant bickering over which name comes first also amuses me. My only complaint for this is much the same as above, show continuity errors. The segment start with BK asking for a title shot for me didn’t work considering that Dan had already been announced. I would have found it a lot cooler for BK to interrupt Senny and then Dan to intterupt them both and then have this kind of segment be in the back with Jay getting pissed at BK going down to the ring and Jonny meeting them back there. Alas, hindsight is a blessing. A New Day--Train, Rena and Red. This is the one segment I really didn’t understand on this show. Train goes from being the second face in the company to a leader of a heel stable. I understand the motive, Train wanting to assert his dominance trying to make a name for himself aside from playing second fiddle to someone but I don’t see how long he keeps this up considering for me Train is, and always will be the most legit comedy character in efedding. I’ll give him the shot but I didn’t like it, more so I would have rather seen them trying to show that you can do things the right way, Train coming out of the shadows, Rena showing a women can do it and Red showing he can be something more than a mid carder. To each there own however, and I do like the amount of tag teams we’ve got. Senny and Me, Ben and BK, I’m assuming Red and Rena, Jonny and . I’d again encourage some of the newer guys or those in midcard to look at making a tag team. A lot of the top stars reside there and that’s a quick way to get over, how I did it in MSA. Another Shot at Entertainment--VorteX. A solid segment, giving us a look at his history with the entertainment title and how it’s alluded his grips. I’m pleased to see teX win, he’s deserved it being one of the most consistent writers over the past two months. I hope he goes onto great things as I don’t think the Entertainment has been huge up and too this points, it’s had it’s moments but nothing that’s really stood out. I had every confidence that Black could do that, and also in VorteX if he continues on this path to success. I wish him the best of luck with the reign. Onto the segment, I found it interesting, riveting in a way at the end and look forward to seeing what exactly is being hidden. VorteX is a bit like Lee where things are a bit on a second level but it’s an interesting read never the less. Match--Main Event. BK is a fucking awesome match writer especially because you don’t see a lot of commentary from him which I found nary impossible when writing matches. A lot of people talk about my attention to detail and I’m going to say as I have before that two of the people that have really influenced my match writing style are Dan White and BK London. Where as me and Senny it appears delve a little deeper into the match, those two consistently bring a lot of action at you and make for quite the enjoyable read. It’s not an incredibly long match that’s going to take you ages to read so I do suggest you all read it.
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Post by wang on Aug 7, 2009 9:25:06 GMT -5
My bad for not writing that triple threat. I fell asleep at 6 AM without a result PM and had plans when I woke up.
Feedback later this week (probably).
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Post by Dan White on Aug 11, 2009 16:15:29 GMT -5
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Post by Jack Jefferson on Aug 11, 2009 16:28:27 GMT -5
Nice work Dan
d=(^_^)=b
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Post by Kim Jong CP on Aug 11, 2009 16:46:40 GMT -5
ALL HAIL LORD WHITE!!!!
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